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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Awesomee part! I'm loving this story! Please continue soon and thanks sooo much for the pm :))

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Still some of my best scenes! And your version is lovely 😉
Can't wait for the next bit

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Sorry for replying so late. Lovely update. I really liked that conversation between Zoya and Mariam. Very well written Sadie 😃

Next update mein romance de do pls 😭 😆

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Honestly this is way better then the Mangalpur episodes. You have described everything so perfectly. The episodes were rushed. So for this Thank you :D

I eagerly waiting for more :D

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

hey

just caught up with the last two updates

great job

i really enjoyed reading them

loved that you gave Zoya a chance to explain herself and that Asad was willing to listen

Zoya was so unselfish in this

loved that she chose to help Mariam

and it was nice reading about all the trust she has in Mr. Khan

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

loved zoya's faith in her mr. khan 👏
loved how zoya told him everyting
wanna see asad's reaction now...

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Curiousmind

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Beautifully written. It's like I'm watching the show again except this time I know their inner thoughts:)

Don't feel bad that people aren't commenting cause we love your writing and appreciate all your hard work.