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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

very nice update..well written..keep it up...👏

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JJN

@JJyoN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

awesome so far. can't wait for the next part. feeling the same anticipation as when I watched the episode on tv for the first time.

Edited by Azriya - 12 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Hey. Awesome update... Please continue...

Wish i was half as good as you in writing...

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

I comment coz i personally love ur style of writing, do continue soon :)

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
i will save my comments till my grave scene lol

haaye raam 😆

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Sadie

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
^Ankieee...🤣 LOL

The up-date was AWESOME...you have written Zoya-Mariyam scene in a way that explains things much better...and in the last scene, because you written it this way, Asad helping Zoya now looks more logical then in QH...because he was standing there and in the next scene he was out on the bike...😆

Ankie will be ankie 😆

thanks for the comment! i hoped to give Mangalpur a little logicality! the bike was a little 🤔 hence i made him go before Zoya said qubool nahi hai 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

will you update today?

ohh geezz no it is :(

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: mochhug
Please please don't stop hun :( i LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Seriously. I'll spam your thread :P

This was an amazing update. Zoya's concern for Mariam once again shown better than in the show. And what Asad was thinking when he realized. This is why i love reading remakes of scenes. It gives you a better idea of what the characters are thinking about when everything is happening.

Please don't stop 😭

no no i'm not stopping this it's just that i would appreciate a little encouragement! If you see my other FFs, they have more feedbacks then this one! 😆

thanks for the comment! Even i love reading stuff cuz it gives you an insight in the mindset of the character! we didn't know what Asad was feeling when he got the call, this is just my interpretation! hop it was good!

PS - keep spamming n stalking 😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Awesome update
How can Mr.Khan watch his Mr. be married off? No gets up to bring the bike
Really waiting for the grave part
Continue :)

haha hell to the no! he is not going to let some douchebag marry zoya! usne bohot mehnat ki hai is makam tak pohochne ki! 😆😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
Awesome Update... 👏
Poor Zoya.. She Thought Asad Going To Leave Her Alone In There... 😆
She Seriously Need's to Understand Her Jahapana... 😳
We Are Still in FB... But Why.?Asad Knows What Happen After He Got Zoya Call... 😕
Please.. End The FB.. I Want Asya ROOM-Romance 😳
Witch SS/FF We Are Going To get Next... ? I Hope This One Only.. Else... Who Actually.. ! 😛

Thanks :)

The FB is over but i wanted to write the entire thing that happened after Zoya ran away from the wedding! but that Zoya won't be telling Asad! if it's too confusing then ill skip it :)

room romance and jungle romance will come soon 😊