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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

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Very well written..Asad listened to Zoya as to what all had happened!!

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

great update

loved it

very well written

conti soon

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Very well described, maybe that's how Zoe really entered the room

I'm happy that Asad at least listen's to her POV

Continue :)

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

nice prt luved hw zoya placed her hands quite possesive nahi😉

amazingly descripted sequence i hope it happened it wuld

be so gud... but koi bat nahi nice prt

update soon

Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Ur right QH tends to rush things we wanna see and slow pace things which we don't want to see e.g.: billi's tracks
liked the update :)

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
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Very well written..Asad listened to Zoya as to what all had happened!!

i sometimes wonder how to do you manage to be the first one to comment on all my updates 😆 can you explain that to me please 😆😆😃

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Very well described, maybe that's how Zoe really entered the room
I'm happy that Asad at least listen's to her POV
Continue :)

that was the only explanation i could come up with 😆😆\

thanks :)

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: cutiesanya
nice prt luved hw zoya placed her hands quite possesive nahi😉
amazingly descripted sequence i hope it happened it wuld
be so gud... but koi bat nahi nice prt
update soon

haha i wont call it possessiveness, she was trying to calm him cuz she knew he would be very angry once he listens to her! so she was more like giving him a reassurance😊

thanks for the comment

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE
Ur right QH tends to rush things we wanna see and slow pace things which we don't want to see e.g.: billi's tracks
liked the update :)

yeah i second that!

thanks for the comment (:

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Ress!

Ahhh i love love love that Asad listened to her. Abd i love you making this scene longer. I agree, they had cut it too short in the show.

But no asya romance 😛 Next please!!! 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago