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Priya Tilva

@asadzoya143

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Nice update. I liked that Asad listened to her for the first time and gave a chance to Zoya for an explanation.

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Great update sadie! But so small!! 😭

Anyways I also really wanted Asad to hear out Zoya's side of the story and the way you described Zoya finding aboutt Mariam was Fantastic!! Continue supersoon!!!

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Liked how you give a logical link to everything!!
I wanna see Asad's reaction after Zoya finishes telling what had happened!!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: mochhug
Ress!

Ahhh i love love love that Asad listened to her. Abd i love you making this scene longer. I agree, they had cut it too short in the show.

But no asya romance 😛 Next please!!! 😃

ik the scene was rushed but then rush nahi kiya hota toh mahasangam 3 days tak chalta 🤣

asya romance will come soon!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
Great update sadie! But so small!! 😭
Anyways I also really wanted Asad to hear out Zoya's side of the story and the way you described Zoya finding aboutt Mariam was Fantastic!! Continue supersoon!!!

thanks :)

uff this is my normal length of update only😊

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: mysticlover
Liked how you give a logical link to everything!!
I wanna see Asad's reaction after Zoya finishes telling what had happened!!

QH never shows anything logical and that kinda pisses me off 😆😆

Asad's reaction? hmmm *rubs chin* haven't planned! you tell me what type of reaction you expect?

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

nice update! let see what mr khan will say now!

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

ik the scene was rushed but then rush nahi kiya hota toh mahasangam 3 days tak chalta 🤣

asya romance will come soon!

Arre lekin 3 din to chala 😆 18, 21, 22 🤣

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: mochhug

Arre lekin 3 din to chala 😆 18, 21, 22 🤣

Accha? toh chaar din chalta 😆

so what do you want asad's reaction to be after he hears zoya out?😉

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Accha? toh chaar din chalta 😆

so what do you want asad's reaction to be after he hears zoya out?😉

Well the typical reaction would be guilt 😆 But his appreciation of her having his cousins well being in mind, over her actual family would be nice 😃 We didn't get to see that in the show... just his guilt and realization that she didn't jusst do a childish act