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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow, just red all the parts, plz update soon and pm me for the nxt part

i had send u buddy request

thankyou for sparing your time... ur request accepted!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 5

Together Forever

"Ahem Ahem!" Asad cleared his throat.

All three turn to look at him.

"Wo-o i feel the temperature rising already." Neha poked Zoya.

"Oye Romeo kaha the?" Ayan asked Asad.

Asad shrugged. Zoya stood still drinking the moment she had been waiting for God knew how long. He gazed back equally lost in her. Through the stare he forced a smile and so did she. He slowly walked towards her; snaked his arms around her back. Her cheeks burn red as he neared; pushing his face in the hollow of her neck.

"Killer..." he whispered in her ears. She grinned poking on his chest.

Neha and Ayan slip away, smirking to themselves. They were alone now.

"Where did this bathing beauty land from?" He said tracing his thumb around her jaw line.

She slightly pushed him away.

"You are so cheesy Asad."

"Well, i Know..."

"What took you so long hun?"

"Had to help a young, helpless, girl on my way... she fell and couldn't walk you see..."

She gaped at him. "you what?...im gonna kill you Asad!"

"You do that every day..." he winked.

"whatever... now tell me...what took you so long?"

"Well, thats actually a surprise..."

"And you know my impatience-iey!..."

"Very well, don't worry aj hi bta dun ga..."

Soon they were called on the dance floor, where the final year students performed an exceptionally amazing and well coordinated Salsa. The function then took up the fire and no one realised when it finally came to the end. The announcer finally announced...

"And now for the final ritual...grab yourselves a partner everyone... because you don't want to miss the opportunity of making them promise never to leave you...come on lets fill the sky with stars..."

Everyone lined up with their sky-lanterns in their hands.

"How romantic...!" Neha exclaimed. "I wish i had a partner too...but this doesn't mean i am not going to leave one just because i don't have one right now..." She winked at Zoya who stood their smiling at her. She turned around to find Asad extending his hand for her. She exposed her dimple; giving her hand in his.

"We didn't grab ourselves lanterns Asad..." Zoya suddenly remembered.

"We don't need to..." He said producing two small boxes from his pocket. Her eyes sparked with excitement the moment he shaped them into two beautiful lanterns; each with their names calligraphed on it.

"OMG! They have our names on it too..." Zoya squealed with excitement.

He chuckled at her childishness. "Of course...it had to be special...took me three hours to find 'em."

She gasped. "So this took you so long?"

He nodded.

"I love it..."

"I know...now shall we do the honours?"

"Sure..."

He held her one hand in his while with the other two both held the lanterns. It was the time for the vow, the confession, the pledge, the promise...

"And with this ..." She began.

"I promise..." He joined in.

"I promise..." (Zoya)

"To never leave you..."(Asad)

"To never leave you..." (Zoya)

"under any circumstances..." (Asad)

"...any difficulty..." (Zoya)

"...all the ease..." (Asad)

"...all the hardships..." (Zoya)

"...all the gains..." (Asad)

"...all the losses..." (Zoya)

"...all the pains..." (Asad)

"...all the gains..." (Zoya)

"...all the fears..." (Asad)

"...all the contentment..." (Zoya)

",...all the worries..." (Asad)

"...and all the bliss..." (Zoya)

"...all my life..." (Asad)

"...all my life..." (Zoya)

"Together forever..." (Asad)

"Together forever..." (Zoya)

"And forever..." he laughed.

"and forever..." she joined in too.

And they finally released the lantern in the air; it drifted in to the sky, which was already full of these floating stars.

Both gazed at their lanterns, which stuck together as they did. A tear paved its way down Zoya's cheek. Asad slid his arm behind her back.

"I love you Zoya."

He now gazed into her eyes. She stared back emotionally.

"I love you too."

- - - -

There was a sudden uproar and she was brought back to her senses.

She saw the sky full of lanterns and all the students from down the college hooting and expressing their joy in burst outs and cries.

She shifted her gaze at the water underneath; which was as clear and steady as glass and whose surface was reflecting the image of those lanterns in the sky. Splendid- it was.

"All lies..." She whispered to her self, her words literally felt they were hitting back.

'All these purple thoughts, strong bonds, friendships, affiliations, affinities and attractions- they vanish within a few years like the rainbow vanishes when the rain stops...

People replace the old ones with new ones... those who cant- people like me- cry out their nights, think out their days and eventually ruin their lives...

They just cant understand that all these unspeakable secrets, irreversible regrets, unkept promises, unheard requests, irreparable losses, unreachable dreams, and unforgettable first love don't exist with time...

Why cant they just be happy with what life is and summon it up in three words, like everyone else does,

That...

IT GOES ON!'

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Next update on page 41!

Edited by SaneWhispers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this scene...thought of sharing wd u ppl!





Edited by SaneWhispers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome love the promises they made to each other but what made them part there ways
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update...so lovely ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was lovely...
I love the latern part and the promises so much...❤️
wonder what had happened between them so they are not together??
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waoo.love their promise ..tht sky lantern pics ..i jst love tht...but wht happen tht separate ...yr..pls stop this toucher nw...let us knw eht happen...
u write..unspeakable secrets...whts tht...hope to get it in next part...thnks 4d pm dear

kukuji...aab bass karo yeh suspense bardhast nhi hota yr...i knw ur an amazing writter as u knw i hv read ur all stories...pr aab hum pr yeh cliff hangers aur nhi...plss

pari..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mesmerizing concept and awesome writing...do update sooonnn...very very very eagerly waiting for the story to unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish our colleges here had something like this...
It is do beautiful...
I've always loved lanterns... n against night sky they're the sight to watch out for...
You know what Zoya said at the end of the update is the fear of every true friend at the end of college...
I know I felt it... still do...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! this was such a beautiful scne!!! so emotional!!!😳
oh dr u write so well!!! Kudos to u!!!👏
Why did the promise break??? i want to kne desperately now!!!
update soon as u always do!😉

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