SS: Changing Ms. Farooqui (pt7 pg102) 30/8 - Page 22

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I can't believe I turned a blind eye to this story when it was right in front of my eyes!!
I totally loved it!!
Asad losing control around zoya... innocent seduction of this kind is greatly dangerous!!
Now Asad will be Asad n will try to ignore Zoya??
Please pm me when you'll update next...

Originally posted by: _palak_

they kissed! they kissed! they kissed! :D

woah man!!! I loved dis part :)
n u say u suck at writing romance? :O
nope...it was awesome :)

Originally posted by: darkangel93

its not a cliffy!!! its just me wanting to keep you interested!😛will definitely pm you, dear! thnx for reading!😃

oh to ye baat hai 😃 well peppy btw ur name is pretty cute! P..e..p..p..y sounds cool! 😎 sory coming to d point 😆 so i ws sayin ur story , ur concept , n obvio ur writing skills r olready amazing n gripping as well! ⭐️ v r olready sticked to it like a honeybee does tht to honey! 😳

lol...zoya is too much for asad to handle CLEARLY.

Jst read both parts...n one line I wana say..u r such a gud writer ...

Originally posted by: darkangel93

mondays are horrible!!!😭i hate them!!! and thnx so much for reading yaar!!! im so glad u liked it!!😃

aww i can understand bt dn cry yaar ! Achhe ke waqt k baad bura waqt zarur aata hai! Im tryn to say free sunday k baad bura hectic monday to aata h hai! 😆 PLSR IS MINE SWEET HEART! 🤗

Originally posted by: darkangel93

yayy you read it!!! *claps in joy!* i was waiting for your comment!! 😃 im glad u liked it!!! well, i always thought that i wrote horrible romantic scenes... zero level of confidence in that area! 😆 but thnx!

i didnt 'liked' it, i 'loved it' ;-)
n if u think u r horrible at romantic genre den u're wrong. IMO, acc to this story, this much level of romance is perfect! :)
actually, i like these kinda stories only, u know rom-com type :p

p.s.- i guess asad is going to super-duper wala ignore zoya :( n she, being 'zoya', will demand explanations from asad :D lolzz :p
i'm waiting for part 3 :)

eeep i am dancing!! like seriously! they kissed!!! yay! loved the update!!

hot wala update.
Like it. Very nice.
Waiting for next update.
Thanks for the PM

How beautiful update..loved it very much...poor asad was trying hard to control himself but failed at the end due to zoya's torture.