asya : best friends to best life partners [ upd. thread 2 ] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice update! Please continue soon!!!! I really want to know what happens! Please pm me the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
they r really adorable n cute...continue soon...i'm sure they ll fall fir each other b4 marriage in pretext of spending time wid each other...i love ur story!!!
thanx 4 pm...nxt time make it fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WEL L WRITTEN N LOVLY PARTS...DO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

thanks for ur comments. though i'm not satisfied with response, it's k as i'm new to writing here !!


friends, i've decided to update short updates frequently rather than giving long updates after a week, as m getting bored to write longer updates !!

Part 3 :

Next day, asad wakes up and straightly goes to zoya's room.

Asad: I knew that this stupid wil be sleeping !

He brings a mug of water and throws it on the bvedsheet and zoya comes shouting

Zoya: u r a stupid ! I woke up half an hour ago. Just arranged the pillows to see wat u'll do n here's wat u did…….hahaha

Asad: thinks….i'm first since I woke up an hour before.

Zoya: don't lie asad…..i've asked aunt n she said that u were sleeping. U can ask ur mom n know !!

Asad goes to his house dejected.

Asad: mom ! why couldn't u say zoya that I've already woken up ? now, coz of u, I should first apologise.

Asad's mom: no problem. U'll learn to apologise as u've got a lot of ego n it'll all come to an end !

Asad: that's disgusting mom ! I'm ur son….n remember she'z not ur daughter that u'l always take her side !! but it's k. if u can take her side, there r people to take my side n they r uncle n aunt

Asad's dad: yes yes ! that's wat's happening over years. If they don't support him, from where wil his strength be coming ? I've told them so many times but no use !!

Asad: why to tel them dad? First u know that !! first u stop supporting zoya.

Asad's dad: she's worth it

Asad: so am I !! k bye dad n mom, go to go

Asad gets ready n gets on the bike. Zoya also comes n sits back

Zoya: did u see ur face in mirror before coming ?

Asad: why? Wat happened ?

Zoya: it's looking like a deadpan !! change it asad. It's fine even if u lose on day 1 coz we've got months fro this new game !!

Asad: stupup zoya !

Zoya: thankgod u r back to self !!

Asad: shall we go to class today

Zoya: y? R u not interested?

Asad: I'm not in mood to go to clg

Zoya: but we r having exams n if we miss these classes, who'll teach us?

Asad: k, we'll go! I sometimes get completely out of mind! U r pretty gud making me remember things zoya

Zoya: u've understood that now ! OMG!! after many days, a compliment from u……it sounds wonderful !

Asad: we decided not to fight unnecessarily, so I'm making sure we'l follow that ! n if I daily give compli, u'l not feel their speciality zoya !

They go to class:

To their surprise, they've a new lecturer as the before one is on leave n they can't leave it as exams r nearby.

Everyone settles down. The professor observes the whole class while settling down n after everybody is down, he eyes on asad n zoya. He constantly keeps staring at them all through the class.

Asad: zoya, y is this new 1 looking only at us?

Zoya: don't talk asad. Wen u now that he's seeing us, y r u talking with me? If he'l catch us, we've to get out of class idiot !!

Asad: anything is k for me !

Zoya: shameless !

Asad: dumbhead !

Zoya: please stop it asad ! I don't wanna miss the class

Asad: ur plea's r accepted.

After the class, that new professor calls asad n zoya to come out with him n they follow.

Asad: have this guy gone mad?

Zoya: how can I know? But y is he taking us with him ?

Asad: lets see….

He takes them to office room.

Prof: wil u introduce urselves ?

Asad: I'm asad

Zoya: I'm zoya

Prof: if u both r lovers, then keep it out of class! U both need not show ur llove for eachother in classrooms, understood ?

Asad: Wat the hell this fellow is blabbering zoya?

Zoya: don't shout asad! Wat if it's audible to him ?

Asad: let him hear. I'm not afraid

Prof: why r u both murmering to urselves? I've asked u smthing n where's the reply?

Zoya: asad, I'll handle the situation. Wait for a while

Asad: do as u wish !

Zoya: sir, w didn't get wat u rtalking abt

Prof: don't act smart

Asad: tel him not to be stupid zoya

Zoya: sir, we r not lovers. U've been mistaken. We didn't understand as to y u r hinking so?

Prof: don't lie to me. I can know abt students just by reading their faces….

Zoya: it's enough sir ! we r not lovers. If u don't believe it, then it's ur prob. Lets go asad

Asad: wait zoya. Wats ur problem even if we r lovers ? why r u overreacting ?

Prof: hold ur tongue asad. Remember that u r talking to ur professor.

Asad: that's y we r being so patient

Prof: u both leave the office immediately !!

Asad: we r also not fond of staying here. Lets go !

They go to class n after the classes, they go home. They tel their parents wateva has happened.

Parents: we'l go n talk with ur clg authorities. K ?

Zoya: k

Asad: wat's all that prof was speaking?

Zoya: I also didn't get wat he actually means. Anyway, leave it! Lets go out

Asad: where?

Zoya: beach!

Asad: no, why don't we go to pub ?

Zoya: u know that I hate pubs, then y r u still asking?

Asad: since it's last days of our freedom! come with me just for once n trust me that u'll never regret it later. Please zoya…..for me !

Zoya: k, but this is first n last time.

Asad: once u come, u wil not want it to be last time.

Zoya: we'll see.

reyna

any guesses why professor reacted that way ? know in next update !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I think he is a cupid sent by their parents to make the stupids realize their love...rest is upto u!!!
loved this part...continue soon...thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You rock glitter plaatjes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Loved it it was really cute and thanx for the PM and update soon :D:D:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
nice...lets c whts in ur kitty baby...thnks 4 d pm dear

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Can you pm me




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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
I hope they get married and this stupid professor or may be he isn't stupid he is able to see what this guys didn't even know and may be asad is feeling the way he asked that even if we are lovers why do you have problem thanks for the pm

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