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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

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it was so painful...
please give it a happy end...i want asya bas!!!
continue soon



Awww 🤗 sure...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

So much emotional & touching update

I like zoya told everything to Asad

Now i have faith that he will make everything all right

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm



Thank u so much for liking it aseelah ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

So finally asad knows the truth
His Abu the fault of zoya not being in his life
They both confess to each other
She couldn't hear him saying I hate u to her
She had to confess but she can't be with him
It will make his father word true
She has given her word to her Abu to marry yaseen
So she intend to keep her word
As she said they love each other but they r not destined for each other
She walks away leaving him
Continue beautifully written



Thank u so much anopama... 😊
m so glad that u liked it 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
salam everyone..hope you are fine, please scroll down for part 14..i hope you guyz will like it too...flashbacks are in italic..and this update is dedicated to ..adin.. as she turned dazzler 👏🤗

banner credit goes to my nino (Niya_789) thanks 🤗

PART 14

Ummm Hmm Umm Hmm
Ummm Hmm Umm Hmm


Tune Jo Na Kaha
Mein Woh Sunta Raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha


He sat on his knees, tears continuously pouring down his cheeks...her each and every word rang in his mind.. He was numb

Tune Jo Na Kaha
Mein Woh Sunta Raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha

Jaane Kiski Humein Lag Gayi Hai Nazar
Is Shehar Mein Na Apna Tikana Raha
Koi Chaht Se Na Ab Apni Chalta Raha

Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha

'bhaijan...she won't come' said najma placing her hand on his shoulder..he looked at her with blood shot eyes..and then turned to look at her home, it was locked 'najma there must be some misunderstanding..how can she leave like this?' he said with hope 'no bhaijan..stop hopping, the owner said himself that zoya and her abu left this house and bhopal, it's 4 in morning bhaijan and you are still sitting here outside her house...please let's go home' she shouted loosening her control..'najma let's wait a little more please' ' bhaijan i don't want any excuse..let's go..ayaan please help me' najma called out for ayaan, who was standing a little far with others shedding tears for this incomplete love story


Dard Phele Se Hai Jyaaada
Khud Se Phir Yeh kiya Vaada
Khamosh Nazrein Rahein Bezubaan


'asad i want you to marry tanveer..' announced rashid while having dinner..asad looked at him wide eyed 'abu..bu..i..' 'no asad no excuse..it's been three years since u had joined our business, now u should settle down..' 'no abu..please i don't want to get marry' he said with determination 'so..u are saying no to me..' Rashid asked or to say warned 'yes abu..i m..i am not interested in getting married..not right now' 'asad i have already talked to her parents..' 'i don't care abu..i can do whatever u want but don't expect this from me..' saying so he stood up and left..

Abb Na Pehli Si Baatein Hai
Bolo To Lab Thartharatein Hai
Raaz Yeh Dil Ka Na Ho Baiyan
Hoga k Asar koi Humpe Nahin
Hum Safar Mein To Hai Humsafar Hai Nahi


'bhaijan..please move on..zoya is gone' najma pleaded 'she is right asad..u should move on and accept what your abu is asking for..' requested imran..although they all still hope that may be she will come back, but they said all this for him but was he going to do that..? No..'nahe najma..i won't, not until i find her, not until she confess what she feels for me..not until i know why she left like this..'

Door Jaata Raha Paas Aata Raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha


A tear fall from his eyes as he remembered how he went from one place to other in her search..how he cried every night remembering her..

Aaya Woh Phir Nazar Aise
Baat Chidne Lagi Phir Se
Aankhon Mein Chubhta Kal Ka Dhuan


He remembered when he saw her after those five long years..he knew she wasn't the same..something about her is changed a lot..she looked like a stranger

Haal Tera Na Humsa Hai
Kis Khushi Mein tu Gum sa Hai
Basne Laga Kyon Phir Woh Jahan


'Meet yaseen, my fiance' Asad felt as if someone has stabbed him direct at his heart..she moved on?

Woh Jahan Dur Jis Se Gaye The Nikal
Phir Se Aankhon Mein Kardi Hai Jaise Pehal

Lambha Beeta Hua ,Dil Dukhata Raha

Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha

Tune Jo Na Kaha
Mein Woh Sunta Raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta Raha


'i know asad that it will be impossible for me but i have to...i had promised abu that i will marry yaseen, i can't let him down..i am sorry asad..i just can't'

Jaane Kiski Humein Lag Gayi Hai Nazar
Is Shehar Mein Na Apna Tikana Raha
Koi Chahat Se Abb Apni Chalta Raha

Bhuj Gai Aag Thi Daag Jalta Raha...

And then he placed his head on the grass, sobbing hard...

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She kept walking , tears weren't stopping to fall from her eyes for a moment, until she reached at her home..she rang the bell and when the door opened, she found aliza totally shocked..it took a minute for aliza to come back to the real world 'zoy...zoya..what are you doing here..it's your mehendi tonight?' she didn't replied and stood still, it's only when aliza heard the sound of raining she realized that she is completely drench, she took hold of her and took her inside, making her sit on the couch, she ran to grab a towel and hand it to zoya and as she start wiping her face aliza sat beside her..she knew that asad had did it...'zoya..you love him right?' she asked, zoya stared at her for a moment and then hugged her tightly and start crying, with each passing moment her sobbed got heavier, she cried and cried and aliza just let her cry..she knew it's necessary

'why this happened to me aliza? Why fate played that cruel game with us? Why it was not in favor of our love..? why?' she asked.. 'why i never got a chance to confess my feelings for him before..?why life brought to me at a point where i had to agree for this nikah..? Why asad didn't move on aliza..why?' she started coughing and aliza rubbed her back 'zoya please you won't get anything from crying over past..just face the present and think about your future ' she made zoya face her 'your future with asad..' aliza whispered and zoya looked at her with hopes and dreams in her eyes but then again everything came to her mind, her promise to her abu, her engagement with yaseen, her decision she took 5 years back and the decision she told him an hour back..

'no aliza..there is no future of us together..we can never be together..no' she shook her head while aliza cupped her face stopping her 'why zoya? Why there is no future of you both? Why you can't tell everyone that how much u love him?why?' she retort 'because a day after tomorrow is my nikah with yaseen, my abu wants this and with going back to asad, i can't ditch my abu..i have ot choose my abu over asad..i love him a lot...' aliza looked puzzled with her answer but zoya she didn't let her say anything else and called yaseen to come and pick her up from aliza's place..aliza tried to explain zoya but all in vain..and her last words just pierced aliza's heart 'aliza you will never understand my condition because u never had fall for someone neither you were stuck between your love and your responsibilities'..she looked at the retreating figure of zoya and yaseen 'you are wrong zoya..i know how it feels, because i had gone through the same..i know when u have to choose your responsibilities over your love..i too did it..i choose my responsibilities for my best friend over my love for him' she said as a lone tear escaped from her eyes..

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Asad's mobile rang for the fifth time and he finally received it 'hello' he said without knowing who is it 'asad..' he heard him..his abu, his role model, the perosn who ruined his life..a feeling of hatred passed through him remembering what he did 'asad..where are you? I want you to come back home right now..' ordered rashid and hung up, without even waiting for him to say something 'i am coming..there are few questions you have to answer Mr.Rashid Ahmed Khan..' said asad tightening his hold on the mobile..

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As soon as asad entered inside he saw him again accusing his mother for a new little mistake, and she stood silent listening to all his words without even with a feeling of pain..'Enough..don't talk to my ami like this.' he roared, rashid stood up, shocked written all over his face and dilshaad stared at him not believing he just shouted at him..although there were few times when asad talked to him angrily but his tune was never high, not even when he denied to marry tanveer 'asad..is this the way you talk with your abu?' rashid asked angrily 'first tell me that is this the way you talk to your wife..don't you feel pity on my mother when u accuse her for each and every nonsense thing..tell me? I need answer damn it..' he yelled 'asad beta..keep your voice low..' dilshaad pleaded placing her hand on his arms 'stop with your drama dilshaad, don't pretend ..i know it's you who fill up my son against me with this innocence of your..u bloody b...' 'Mr.Rashid Ahmed khan..don't u dare utter a word after it, i swear i will forget that you are my so called father ' Najma came downstairs hearing the noises

'what the hell is wrong with you beta..why are you talking to me like this' rashid asked horrified thinking about the possibilities, and in return he let out a sarcastic laugh 'don't act as an innocent as if u don't know..' 'what?' 'Mr.Rashid Ahmed Khan, u will love to hear it that i know everything..everything what happened that day in hospital..i know that the person who took away my zoya was none other than my father..my role model..my everything..i know that u snatched away my happiness ' 'no asad..don't believe that fake girl..she is trying to create differences between us..she is after our money..' rashid said trying to prove his point, 'oh please this all won't work on me..i trust zoya' .. said asad jerking away his hands from his shoulder..

'you are believing her, and not your father..i am your abu..i love you a lot..i can never do anything to hurt you..plz believe beta..plz..' 'no i won't, u just want money, u don't have any value for relations in your life..u just care about money..' 'no asad..beta..i..di..didn't..i.' 'stop with this drama ..u know..If u can then you will sold away your wife for money...you ' 'asad' yelled rashid and raised his hand to slap him only to be stopped by dilshaad 'don't you dare touch my son..i swear i will forget that u r my husband..' and jerked his hand away making him yaw back a little 'dilshaad try to understand..i..' 'shut up Rashid..i thought u just hate me because i belonged to a middle class family but i never knew that u hate my children too..how cheap..' 'you are crossing your limits dilshaad..' 'yes i m..why? What can u do?.. what will you do rashid..today i want to see that what u can really do..come on tell me..' 'taalaq dedunga..' he threatened, she felt a dull pain inside her but cover it up 'then do it..from past 28 years i am listening this one thing only..do it rashid now..i want to see that how much stamina you have..you can really do anything or these are just to show your power ..do taalaq..do..'


Asad realized what is happening and tried to stop it 'ami...leave it..najma take ami to her room' he said forcing her to go.. 'no asad..let me see what he can do..i had always tolerated his bad behavior only for you both and your bright future but he just did the opposite , he already had ruined my life but i won't let him do it with you..what are you waiting for Mr.Rashid Ahmed Khan..say it..do taalaq..' 'Dilshaad Yahya, mai Rashid Ahmed khan tmhe taalaq deta hun..taalaq...taalaq..' he said and left pushing her by her shoulder, dilshaad face held nothing..no emotion...no tears...there was no hint of pain ..neither guilt..'

Najma called ayaan hurriedly and then tried to stop asad and dilshaad as they packed there bag and were ready to leave, as they were going to step out, rashid came there 'stop..' asad turned and placing his hand across his chest asked 'now what..?' 'you were right asad..i just love money and i can do anything for it..' 'i know it already..and please don't you try to stop me..' 'who said you i will do that..i don't care you live or die..you just forgot something here..' 'what?' asked dilshaad , rashid came forward and placing his hand on najma's shoulder, pushed her making her hit asad hard 'take this good for nothing girl with you..she is of no use..whatever she had did till is wasting my money..' najma started crying listening all this from him..asad hand turned into a complete fist , dilshaad placed her hand on his, nodding no..

'Rashid Ahmed Khan, we all are leaving and today i break all the relations between u and us..you are not my children father anymore..you are nothing to us..my husband and there father died for us...and remember one thing that if u will ever regret your decision and will come and stand in front of us then we will not let you come close to us..u r nothing but a greedy animal..' uttered dilshaad and taking hold of her children left the house..

As soon as they came out they saw ayaan, nikhat and imran standing there..najma left dilshaad and ran to nikaht..hugging her and crying out aloud.

ohkay..i end it here..thank u all of you for liking last part but i did'nt expected just 45 likes when i got 60+ likes on Part 12..
actually i just want to let u all know that i will continue it once i get 55+ likes, not before that...i hope you guyz will understand...
do leave back your precious comments..

thanks
aroo😊
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res !
will unres after getting free frm clg seminar and exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update aroo 👏 👏 👏
Bang on update...
Loved the confrontation...loved the way how asad answered Rashid. ..
Rashid is such a jerk...bluddy idiot nonsense 😡
I want to kick his ass soo hard ...such a cruel man...I hate him to core 😡
Finally dilshaad spoke up after her long silence...
So finally they all are out of house. ...glad..
Rashid doesn't deserve them...
Soo aliza loves asad bt hide her feelings. .she is really a true frnd...
Only one day left for zoya marriage 😭 😭
And she is being soo stubborn. .not ready to back off from this marriage 😭
Hope asya meet and this marriage will not happen..
Beautiful update...
Update soon
Love u 🤗
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for liyu, niya, jas, gowtu, heena, vaishu
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😆
unres with ;

again i just read the song with some cute romantic lovely moments
but i still dont know the history of this story too
again i big apologize from my side
wait for oct

n
THIS is for dedicating me






Edited by ...adin... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mere hissa k res bhe yashi ne kar diya 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
res...
unres...
aroo a powerful update...
wt a face- off...
dilshaad spoke up aftr years of silence... n the hollow relations came tumbling down...
Rashid... aargghh ... i dont think i hv ever hated him this much in any ff... he is a total yuck... greedy stingy narcissistic person wrapped in himself... 😡 😡 😡 [n i dont think mene aj tak inni gaaliyaan b kisiko di hai ]
i m glad that the three are out of his house... he deserves none in his life...
plz give a very very very cruel type of death to him...
ok calm down!!!
aliza... she luvs asad!!! bt she is such a nice friend...
AsYa ko kb milaying???
continue soon


Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago

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