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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome di 👏
Love the new concept ⭐️
Loved the updates n plz pm next time u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am really very sorry for the late comment.
My exams are going on why not visiting the forum.
The updates were awesome!
Loved them loads!
Continue asap
Thaxx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

**next morning**

Zoya najma and zaara were running around and chasing each other and dilshaad was enjoying watching them none of them noticed when asad and armaan entered .. Zaara kept running until she bumped into a hard chest and was about to fall when someone caught her .. She opened her eyes and got the biggest shock of her life .. She wiggled herself out his arms and screamed..

Zaara: ALLAH MIYAN WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOUU MR KHAN! AISE KOI LARKA KISI LARKE KO PAKARTHA HAI KYA?? (Allah Miyan what wrong with youu mr khan does a random guy hold a girl like this huh?)

While asad looked at zara confusingly

Asad thinking:huh.. Who is this girl what is she talking about I didn't even hold her.. And WOAH! She looks a lot like ms.Farooqui ..

Armaan: oh just shut up miss.Farooqui ! I saved youu from and now youur yelling at me instead if saying thanks ? Oh wow!

Zoya just looked confusingly at armaan

Zoya thinking:huh who is this dude and what in the world is he talking about ..? When did he save me ? And WOAH he looks a lot like mr.Khan..

Asad and zoya were about to say something when dilshaad intrupted them

Dilshaad: armaan beta!

Armaan: A-ammi..?

With that he ran into his ammi's arms after a while when they broke apart

Najma: armaan bahijaan...?

Armaan: najma?

And najma ran into her brothers arms and hugged it out just than zaara interrupted

Zaara: are youu guys done hugging and kissing? God I'm hungry! I want food!

Zoya: ohgod zaaru! Don't interrupt their cute little family moment ..

Najma: aha it's fine zoya and zaara is right I'm hungry too!!

Zaara and zoya: YOUU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS! BREAKFAST TIME!

And with that the the three girls started laughing! While asad kept staring at zoya and armaan kept staring at zaara

They were all seated and started eating quietly when armaan started talking

Armaan: oye ms.Farooqui!

Zaara: yes mr.khan?

Armaan: youu didn't tell me what youur doing at my place ..?

Zaara: I'm here with my Baji! :)

Armaan: oh acha! The one youu told me about that was suppose to be dead ..?

Zaara: MR KHAN! SHE IS NOT DEAD!

Armaan: okay I'm sorry little ms. Aggressive..

Zaara: HAAWWW! I'm NOT aggressive!

Armaan: uuuh yea youu are!

Zaara: and how would youu know ?

Armaan: with all the nights I spent with youu my jungle billi

Asad chocked on his coffee hearing with while zaara dropped her fork with her mouth open and eyes wide
Everyone was looking at duo with wide eyes..

Zaara couldn't help it she got up snatched Asad's coffee that was from his hands and poured it on Armaans head and said ..

Zaara: that is for breaking up with me for that- that CHIPKALI! UGH I HATE YOUU!

And stormed out of the living room holding back her tears

While everyone was shocked at what just happened .. Than asad spoke

Asad: ammi yeh kya batameezi thee.. Aur waise bhi yeh larki kon hai aur yeh yahan kya kar rahe hain..? (Ammi what is this indiscipline behaviour and by the way who is that girl and what is he doing in our house?)

Zoya: for youur kind information that is my sister mr.khan and usne kuch galat nahi kiya apke bhai ne meri behen ka dil toda hai.. Wait a second mein apko yeh sab kyun bata rahi hoon apko kya farak padtha hai apka tho dil Toota nahi tho apko kya patha ke dil thootne ki takleef kya hoti hai .. (For youur kind information that is my sister mr.khan and she didn't do anything wrong because youur brother broke my sisters heart wait a second why am I even telling youu this youu wouldn't even care cause youur hasn't been broken so youu wouldn't know how it feels to have a broken heart youu would know how much it hurts! )

And with that ran behind her sister while armaan excused himself and same with asad

Najma: oh wow ammi .. Looks both of the brothers broke their loved ones's heart.. And ammi .. Where is tanveer..?

Dilshaad: I know right .. Oh allah help my children! And I don't know and really don't care!

**meanwhile in zoya's room**

Zoya: I can't believe that armaan would use youu for a bet and just leave youu hanging like this..

Zaara: I know right Baji! I think it's time to move on what say?

Zoya: yes I think so too! And btw what happened with plan billi out?

Zaara: oh don't youu worry about that I have that total under control we will soon start when she is at home .. :)

Zoya: k babes

And hugged her sister

Zaara: I love youu Baji!

Zoya: aww I love youu too zaaru!

**door bell rings**

Dilshaad opens the door.. And sees zeenat is here with a family..

Dilshaad: asalamualikum zeenat come in

Zeenat: walikumasalam dilshaad appa

When they come to the living room dilshaad tells najma to bring snacks and tea or coffee for the guests with that najma makes her way to the kitchen to prepare the things while Asad and armaan come out of their rooms to see whose here

Zeenat: dilshaad appa where is zoya and zaara..?

Dilshaad: one minute ill go get them..

Dilshaad was about to go when she sees them coming

Dilshaad: never mind than they are already coming here ..

Zaara and zoya: APPII!

Some one shows up on the front door and says .. Wow youu only missed Appi..?

Zoya: JIJUUU!

Anwar: heey Zoe! And zaara aren't youu gonna give youur jiju a hug?

Zaara: of course!

And with that makes her way to her jiju to give him a big hug!

When the lady beside zeenat spoke

Lady: arre! How could youu forget me..?

Zaara: I didn't forget youu Khala .. It's just that I'm still mad at youu.. Btw baaji zaiba Khala ammi's sister..

Zoya: Khala..

Zaiba: come here beta!

Both hug when two handsome guys and a girl interrupts them

The three: ahem ahem.. Youu that we are here too!

Zoya zaara and zaiba Khala broke the hug

Zoya: OMG Farhaan.. What are youu doing here ?

Farhaan: oh wow I think I should be asking that question too youu! .. Wait youur zaara's sister ?

Zoya: yup! .. Wait youu know zaara..?

Farhaan: of course I know her! Aha and zoya it's youu! The one I used to play when we were so small!

Zoya: OMG IKR! It's so hard to believe it youu! Aha OMG remember our engagement!

Farhaan: babes how could I forget that! And little zaara running around calling me jeeju! AHAHA! And little rehaan running around calling youu bhabi ahahha! the elders were like what in the world are they saying!

Zaara: whaat! It wasn't my fault Baji told me that youu are my jeeju so I started calling youu jeeju from then on and I still do! Lol

Zoya: and what about youu and rehaan huh ?

Guy#2: did someone just say rehaan?

Zoya: yes someone did aha I was just asking zaara about youu!

Rehaan: oh really bhabi!

Zoya: ohgod rehaan youu still call me that?

Rehaan: whaat ?!? Zaaru still calls bhaiya jeeju so than why can't I call youu bhabi??

Zaara: shut up rehaan!

Rehaan: anything for youu babes!

Girl: OH HELLO! I'm here too!

Zaara: aww sorry Aisha! We didn't see youu there

And than everyone burst out laughing

Aisha: oh youur soo dead zaaru!

With that Aisha started chasing zaara around when zaara was about to slip armaan was about to catch her but rehaan caught her and they had a eye lock! While looking at them armaan got soo pissed!

Armaan: what the hell! Why is he touching MY zaara! .. Wait a second did I say my? I should be saying that cause I was the one who broke her .. I was the one who left her hanging ...

Aisha: AHEM AHEM!

With that zaara and rehaan came out and stood up while everyone was laughing while laughing Farhaan put his arm around zoya's waist and zoya put her head on his shoulder while asad was ready to knock out farhaan

Asad thinking: how dare he touch MY zoya! I'm so gonna kill him! .. Wait asad youur the one who broke her heart .. Youu don't deserve her.

Najma: oh god youu guys were so naughty ! AHAHAHAH!

Aisha: ikr we were! Especially those four!

Najma: I can tell!

Aisha: oh my I forgot to tell youu why we all are here .. Umm zaara did youu forget..?

Zaara: aishu forget whaa... OMG HOW COULD I FORGET!

Zoya: what is happening here I'm kindof lost!

Aisha: I'm getting married!

Zoya:OMG congrats!

Zaara: OMG I can't wait ! Yo rehaan we need to practice! We are dancing on all the functions understood!

Rehaan: ofcourse babes!

Zoya: hey! What about me! I wanna dance too!

Farhaan: of course we are gonna dance and that too on all the functions! Btw we are here to take youu two to Mumbai!

Najma: no please don't take zoya and zaara away please!

Farhaan: don't worry youu guys are coming with us .. Right ammi?

Zaiba: of course beta! They are anwar beta's relatives so why not!

All: YAY!

Well except for asad and armaan they were just trying to control their anger ...

K that's it for today! And guys this story is gonna be different from the original qabool hai.. Lol when mean different i mean REALLY different cause I'm really tired of the asya and non asya so I wanted to give Asad a taste of his own Medicean ;) I'm sorry if youu don't like it .. So umm yea! Please comment and tell me how it was and guy be COMPLETELY HONEST ! I won't mind :) k thanks bye <3


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
amazing part
thanx for pm
plzzz pm me for the next as well
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
it's too good
please continue soon
Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
It will be easy for new readers... to follow if could do Index..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Wow! Really Interesting!!!👏 Please continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome!!!! Arman and Zaara, and Asad and Zoya...

Then Rehan and Zaara, and Farhan and Zoya!!!!

Awesome!!!! Loving this FF!!!!!

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