Asya OS:All's well that ends well

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Okay this idea just popped into my head and thought of writing it.

Asya nikaah has already happened.Billi's truth is out in front of everyone.Now asya are in their room.

Asad comes towards zoya and lifts the veil off her face slowly and leans towards her.Zoya closes her eyes giving in but when she did not find any contact for ten seconds she opened her eyes.She was shocked to find asad moving towards the bathroom with his kurta in his hands.

Zoya:Allah miyan Mr. Khan whats wrong with you?Kahan jaa rahe hain aap?

Asad:Toronto jaa raha hu.

Zoya:What?

Asad:Bathroom ja raha hu.Isn't it obvious?

Zoya:Aap bathroom jaa rahe hain ye obvious hai par aap aaj bathroom ja rahe hain ye obvious nahi hai.

Asad:Kyun bathroom jane ke lie koi specific din hote hain kya Miss Farooqui?

Zoya:Allah miyan whats wrong with you Mr.Khan or I should say Mr.Farooqui?Aap mjhe abhi bhi Miss Farooqui bula rahe hain,Nikah ke baad bhi?Mujhe to lagta hai ke aage chalke aapke influence mein kahin hamare bache bhi mujhe Miss Farooqui Miss Farooqui karke na bulae.Aur kon sa husband apni suhagraat pe room mein aate hi kapde change krne chala jata hai.You are just impossible.

Asad:Umm..Miss..I mean Zoya yeh aap kaisi batein kar rahi hain bache abhi kaise woh actually i mean..

Zoya:Not again Mr.Khan.Aapke woh actually se mai tang aa chuki hu.Aur sahi kaha aapne bache abhi kaise bache karne ke lie kch aur bhi karna padhta hai jo aapse hone se raha.Aap to ek kiss bhi nhi kar paaye.

Asad: Umm..Mai change karke aata hu.

Zoya:Mr.Khan ka kuch nahi ho sakta.Mai bhi change kar hi leti hu.Yeh budhu ahmed khan to suhagraat pe bhi soenge hi.

Zoya had already changed into her night clothes when asad came out of the bathroom.He smiled at her and she just turned away.Asad very well understood the reason behind this behaviour of her.It was not that he did not want to spend special moments with her,it was just that after the tanveer fiasco he was guilty.He very well knew that about tanveer's true colours and how he tricked him that night.

Still there was that guilt of not trusting his love earlier.He wanted to apologise to zoya for everything as soon as possible so that he can start afresh with her ,but he didnt know how to do so.He loved her a lot and wanted to tell it to her this time without any guilt of betraying her.He knew he had to do this so he went towards zoya who was now standing in front of the window.He took zoya's hand into his and then

Asad:zoya...

Zoya(super-pissed):Kya hai Mr.Khan?change kar lia na aapne ab jaake so jaiye.Aur please pure bed pe mat soiyega mujhe bhi sona hai.Ab ye mat kahiega k mai aapke bed pe nahin so sakti.

Asad(amused):Meri baat to suniye.

Zoya:Oh really Mr.Khan? Aap baat karenge?Vaise mai apki information ke lie aapko bata du k jab koi normal insan baat karta hai to "woh" aur "actually" k alawa bhi bohat kuch bolta hai jo aapse bola nahi jaega islie mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni.

Asad:Zoya please?Listen to me.

Zoya:Kahiye.

Asad:Zoya I am sorry.

Zoya:Mr Kha..

Asad:Shhh..Mujhe bolne do zoya.Tumne mujhe kitni bar batay tha us ladki ke baare mein par maine tum par bharosa nahi kiya.I am soo sorry zoya.I am so sorry.Usne kitni baar tumhari jaan lene ki bhi koshish ki.Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to mai.

Asad's voice broke at the end.He couldnt control the tears any longer hence let them flow.Zoya was so touched by his apology that she couldn't say a word.But his tears brought her out of her reverie and she imnediately moved to cup his face wiping his tears unaware of the ones that were flowing from her own eyes.

Zoya:Nahi Mr Khan please dont feel bad.I cant see u like this.I love you.Main aapse bohat mohabbat karti hu aur main in sab baton ko bhulake aapke sath ek nayi zindagi ki shuruaat karna chahti hu.Mai aapse bilkul bhi naaraz nahi hu.Ab aap please roiye mat.

Asad:I love you zoya.Mai hamesha se tumse yeh khna chahta tha.Mai tumhare sath jeena chahta hu.Tumhare sath apni zindagi ka har ek pal mehsoos karna chahta hoon.Khush rehna chahta hu.Mai hamari love story hamare bachon ko sunana chahta hu.Par mai ek baat apne bacho ko nahi bataunga.Actually do.

Zoya(pouting): Kya nahi bataenge aur kyun..?

Asad:Ek to yeh ke mai aapko Miss Farooqui bulata tha,abhi tak, aur dusra vo jo ab hone vala hai...

Zoya : Hone wala hai !! kya hone vaa...

Realizing what asad meant she stopped midway but then decided to play with him.

Zoya:Bataiye na Mr.Khan kya hone vala hai?

Asad:Aapko nahi pata?

Zoya:uh-huh nahi to...

Asad:To kyun na kar ke hi bata du..

With this he leaned towards her and they shared a night full of love.

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Phewww!It turned out to be much longer than I expected.So plz bear with it.Plz like and comment..:-)
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Aww that was sweet. Very nicely written. Loved it! :)
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main Toronto jaa raha hoon 🤣
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

main Toronto jaa raha hoon 🤣


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Good job, couldn't you add some spice 😉😉
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It was funny and sweet and cute!! Loved it!! 😃
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gr8 job... I love story...!!
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show mein bhi jaldi aisa scene aaye!!!! amazing...

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