*~Devil Land Princess~* part - 1 updted

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ishka virani

@LilApple

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever
<font color="#9900FF" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">its too good
awesome piece of work
i just dont have words to describe it!!!
i am already hooked!plz plz continue!!
one more thing plz plz plz pm me!

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{comment isssey bhi lambhi kar doon 😆(jaldi continue karaney kii liye😉😆)}</font></font>

I think u should try it...wink
kya pata mera mood badal jaye

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: LilApple

I think u should try it...wink
kya pata mera mood badal jaye

next update par lambi kar doon gi promise 😉😆But only if u update fast!

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey My Little Devil...😛 🤗
firstly toh please note its the second time m going to type this longest comment of mine as first time pura comment type karne ke baad before i could post it delete ho gya..😡😕

secondly thank u sooo much mera bachha for dedicating such a wonderful story as a gift to me...🤗

as u know m not such a big Asya fan.😳..but i came here for this... my b'day gift..to see and read it..

but after reading it i was like what the😲...(arnav effect)...it was wowww..👏 👏 👏 👏

you did a great job my baby...⭐️ 👏the way portrayed Asad's emotions, his pain and his feelings for Zoya was superb...⭐️

and with ur urdu effect to the story i fell in love...😳fabulous i must say..and with whole hospital and doctors u gave it DMG wala feel...👍🏼rahula and Anjali awesome buddies hope they make him realize his feelings for Zoya..😛.Zoya shocked him by her batmiz dil..kya baat hai..smart women apni hi shadi tudwane k plans bna rhi thi..i liked it..👏

now babyjaan u have to CONTINUE this SUPER SOON...got it...jara si bahi dairi qubool nhn ki jaygi..😛

thank u so much baby for writing such a beautiful story for me...

(only one thing i wud like to say please shift index of this story in first post and shift the first part in index place...to keep the follow but its upto u baby..aise b acha hai..😊..rest is toh readers have to beware as they might follow in love with this hot MBBS doctor Asad Ahmad Khan... )

love u my baby..thanx for the pm..
urs Jannat

Edited by jannat4ever - 12 years ago

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow...awesum ff di...i luv ur qrk i had read ur...ar wrks..n i jst luv dem..plz continue ur ff humko tumse pyar hai...thnks for d pm...congo for ur first ff on asya..plz do pm me wen u update nxt...