*~Devil Land Princess~* part - 1 updted

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Hye guys

Hope u all know me if not then let me do the honors 'I m ..ishka'

Baki ki tareef mere dear frnds here will do ..(oye ker diyo achha bada bharosa kiya hai tum sab pe'. ;)😳

So as u all know I only right or read on ar\arsh but asad and zoya blew my head''they r so really good

So this is my first ever attempt of writing on asya'.

It my dearest massi akka ur jannat's birthday toh ab my massi is so special toh unka bday bhi toh special hona chahiye naa toh this story is for her .. massi jab bday manane ka man kare ask for update ..winkk😃

Love u and ur smile..

I hope I make u smile thora sa b by it aur agar u doesn't like toh bhi tell I will try something else then romance nahi hai jyada iss part me per agge hoga kyoki picture toh abhi baki hai mere dost'😃

Lil info about the story'

In my story asad owns a hospital, but maintains a very low profile life no tantrums, he works like a normal employ, so mostly new ppl think he is one of them' (yaah sanjeevani , kya karu dmg ko dimag se nikalna mushkil nahi namumkin hai'.) his character is same as QH, yup his dear OCD'.he is a MBBS . my story Rashid and his family lived in a different city 'so no raziya here. Asad's ammi died when he was very young and his father remarried, as a child he couldn't get over the word "step mother " so he use to stay at his nani house mostly and when grew up he completely prohibited his father's house and came to live in a different city with his baby sister'Najma

Only Moto of his life was his ammi's dream''

Zoya have a family including gaffur siddaki as a loving father and her mother died a few years ago, she is his only child so over pampered '.there are dmg characters too '.hope u enjoy

And imp thing'"I WILL UPDATE ONLY IF I GOT GOOD RESPONSE '..GOOD REPONSE.."

p.s.s ' who ever want me to pm should like and comment coz this is ur ticket to bollywood hehehe my ff werna mujhe rude mat bolna ..mai pm nahi karungi'oh yaah no one liners I hate when some one says awesome part '. huhhh

Part - 1

The Devil Land Princess'

I walk through the corridors of sanjeevani ...my whole staff including patients and their family greeted me with smiles I wish I could return them the same but couldn't '.i really dnt know if I could coz i didn't tried'why! Dnt know ..i just dsnt feel like smiling '.shayad mai aisa hi hu'cold..frozen'

I stopped hearing voice from behind'..

"mr.. khan'"


I turned '..and found anjali'a friend and very good doctor here'..u must be thinking friend ? still she called me by my last name'yaah they r my friends and I mean it'but I think they scare what if I got angry, if they called me asad here in hospital and I'mai kabhi unse keh nahi pata ki mujhe bura nahi lagega'so every one calls me Mr. Khan in hospital'

I stud there silent gesturing her to speak''

An '" wo here is the file u asked for ..issme sabhi new equipments ki list and information hai '"

I nodded.."ok I will see to it'."

She left and I walked towards my cabin'passing through the caf I found my interns laughing, giggling hi fiving each other'.i stopped on my tracks seeing what I lack '..they were so happy care free yet very professional when it comes to their work 'a right combination between life and responsibilities' they found me looking at them'.all of sudden there was a pin drop silence where a minute be4 laughter was floating and they all were staring me as if they saw some ghost'..i felt guilty '..they greeted me...i pressed my lips together and nodded 'leaving them in their world I entered in my cabin'.

Sometimes I try to come out of my shell but couldn't '.bahut andhera hai meri zindagi me yaa zindagi hi nahi hai meri'..pata nahi per duniya ke liye mai wo chirag hu jo jahan ko toh roshan ker deta hai per uski duniya andhero me hi gum rehti hai'.i wish allah hear me once'.


I again devoured myself in work this is only this which gives me peace '..oh yaah m expending my hospital, mai sanjeevni ko iss duniya ka sabse behtar hospital banauga'taki meri ammi ki tarah koi ache illaz se marhoom na rahe'.i m going to get world class equipments here''

Again I lost myself in work and didn't realized its almost mid night '..just to stretch my body I stud up and came near the window '.i peeped outside sliding the curtains a little '.and a beautiful sight caught my eyes'..

I saw a girl sitting on the patients visitor bench 'her body was covered with black shaul, only her right profile was visible to me'.i heard my heart beat for the first time mia sirf uski jhalak dekh sakta tha but still I know she was the most beautiful creation of allah '.she was looking down staring the floor '.pearl like tear drops contently falling on floor'.it felt like drops of acid falling on my heart, I dnt know why after so many years I felt again 'I felt pained seeing her crying '.i wanted to run to her hug her comfort her '.whether it was anything which made her cry I will make it right just to see a smile on her face..

Smile an action of body I myself dsnt feel much familiar to which ..but I wanted her to smile'.coz somewhere in my heart I knew she is the one who can taught me that'

She was beautiful her kohled eyes, pink lips 'a pointed nose which was red right now'.i know I dnt know how to complement '.i felt ashamed of myself for the first time'.

I saw a doctor came and said something to her 'she smiled with teas, allah she has dimples'.her smile made my lips curl unknowingly ''i hope the person is alright for whom she was here'.i guess she thanked the doctor and he left, she sat on bench again '.in the action her shaul slipped from her head'.


"Masha allah'." A soft whisper escaped from my mouth''I tried to remember something which could describe her beauty but I failed miserably '.she looked divine as she sat on floor reciting namaj to thank allah '..maine isse paak ajj tak kabhi kuch mehsoos nahi kiya tha'.

Then I realized she was in bridal attire '.my heart shank..is she a bride 'what is she doing here ..where is her husband '.i froze as I thought of her husband'wo kisi aur ki amant hai mujhe koi huq nahi use aise dekhne ka'..my heart pained and eyes watered

I turned controlling my emotions'.. why it hurting me god why' I dsnt even know her'plz god I dnt have heart to love so I doesn't deserve the pain also'.

*********

One month passed to that night but still I cant forget her '.its like her image got engraved in my soul that whenever I close my eyes I find her in front of me smiling, crying, praying '.i feel helpless now '

I think now I have to live like this only '.with her presence in my mind but not in life.. 'I wish I could see her once ''might my heart ache subsidies a little seeing her again coz her thought doesn't leave me for a second now '.how much I try to devour myself in work but when ever I close my eyes I see her '.i know I should be guilty thinking about someone else wife 24*7 but I cant help it either '.every night I break things at my room coz I cant sleep, she come in my dreams too'.

Getting frustrated I broke my coffe mug '.dr. rahul knocked at the same time and without his answer entered his cabin'..he was looking down pouting like a stubborn kid who didn't got his ice cream '.rahul chuckled seeing him like that '.it was rare to see mr. asad ahamed khan having other expressions in spite of straight face'

Rahul was asad's childhood buddy he understood him to a extent '.placing a comforting hand rahul spoke'." What happen asad why are u breaking everything najma told me u break all new vases she place in ur room'achanak se ye naya shaukh kaha se aa gaya tume'"

Asad pouted little more'rahul shook his head he knows he wont tell anything '" asad I know something is bothering u tell me bhai if I couldn't correct still I can hear u asad'.'

Asad looked him with helpless expressions '..b4 he could speak his phone rang and he left for meeting

Rahul cursed the timing and resumed his duties '.

In conference room..

Dr. anwar'." Mr. khan this is out new interns list and their certificates have a look of them and mr. gafoor faroki is ready to collaborate with us he will supply all the latest equipment and medicines to us. He is also giving a big land for our new hospital I know its ur dream 'and now we are on the way to fulfill it'"

Asad heard her silently he was happy that now he is gona built world's biggest cancer hospital his dream''" that great send a thanku msg to mr. farooki from my side and if u checked the documents m ok, when are interns are coming '"

Dr. anwar.." evening 'at 5.30 sharp'"

Asad nodded .." u see to it I have a important meeting to attend '" '..

Reception 5.30'.

Dr. A ' ok so all of u here let me cross check once'raise ur hand on ur name ..

All new interns nodded

Dr. a ' dr. najma khan, dr. reyhan ali , dr. jai Prasad , and dr. zoya faruki '

Anwar raised his head .." where the hell is dr. zoya faruki doesn't she knows doctors ke liye time ki kya value hoti hai'."

He screamed , scaring the poor interns who dsnt even know who is the culprit '

A voice came from entrance'.

Voice '" present sir'."

All looked at d direction '.a tall fair girl in blue jeans and white shirt raising her one hand as other was busy supporting a old man who was not able to walk '..she made the man sit on the wheel chair and asked d ward boy to take him..and stood next to najma running almost '.

Z ' actually I found that old man outside he couldn't walk himself so I was just helping him to hop that why m late ( she checked her watch )ohh just 10 mints..

Anwar glared her hard '" do u know what 10 mints can cause dr. .."

Z ' yup a good deed I helped the old man that's what doctor do'

Anwar greeted his teeth'." Ok today is ur first day here so ajj aap sab dekhiye how we work kal se I will appoint u ok now go'dr. anjali will guide u in d hospital today"

Na.."thank god hitler chala gaya, hye m najma 'and u r zoya I know.."

Zoya smiled seeing her bubbly self'" yaaahhh"

Na.." friends .."

She forwarded her hand and zoya accepted gladly '.

Jp- oh ho ab app sab yaha hi khari rahengi ya hum sanjeevni darshan bhi karenge..

All giggled'

Rey.." karenge bhai wo bhi karenge pahle samne dr. anjali aa rahi hai unse mil le'"

They saw a smiling dr. anjali in front of them'they took a sign of relief atleast some ppl smile here..

Dr. anjali guided them showing sanjeevni all around'.all of them were so happy getting internship in such a nice hospital '.

Zoya stopped on track as her mobile beeped she smiled flaunting her dimples '.

She replied on wts app '" yee as far my day going best'muhhaa"

Putting her cell in jeans pocket she looked above all interns already left with doctor anjali ..and she left alone '.so she started searching them'.

Asad was doing his morning namaj '.." help me allah, meri rooh ko sukoon dijiye plzzz.."


He closed his eyes and touched his face with his palms'." Ameennn" and with the word he slowly opened his eyes'his breath stuck '.his dua was in front of his eyes alive '

She was searching her group and in that she reached asad's praying place, she was peeping through glass walls to see if they were inside '..unaware of the fact someone watching her'..

Asad was again staring her awe stuck, she was looking so innocent with that cute pout'his eyes were glued with the sight'asad was just staring her holding his heart, he just wanted to absorb this sight in his heart 'she frowned cutely not finding anyone there and left to searched other places'

He stud up '..watching her from behind'..his heart spoke'

"ammi uuse dekh ker khud per rakks (gussa ) hota hai kash mai usko describe ker pata apko, per huesha uski khoobsurti ka ek jarra bhi nahi bata pata apko'.. uski hirni jaisi badi badi ankhee, chehre pe bacho jaisi masumiyat, wo undhero me roshni ki umeed jaisi uski muskurahat'.kash mai shayar hota toh bata pata apko ushka vajud uss zindgi jaisa hai jiska khwab hota hai sabko'"

Seeing her again after so many days of craving asad was dazed with her presence '.soon came back in senses 'what he was doing, how could he think like this about someone else wife'but what was she doing here again was everything ok with her'what if she is in problem'.this mere thought made asad run behind her'.whatever it is right or wrong he just wanted her to be happy'

Asad passed though the corridor where anwar stopped him'

An.." mr. khan I was coming to ur cabin'.ye new inters ke internship papers hai apke sign chahiye the.."

Asad dsnt want to waste his time here but he couldn't say no so he took the file and started sighing '.at the last page he saw her pic, he was shocked seeing her pic..( anwar got an emergency so he left')

Asad unknowing walked towards his cabin 'he read her data..

Name - zoya faruki

Age ' 22

Statue - single

A whisper came from his lips'" zoyaaa'..zindagi'jannat'"

Reading her status single he was shocked '.but couldn't help the tingling feeling rose in his heart'

I felt weird in my heart'weird coz I dnt know what it is'I heard of the word feeling butterflies '.shayad isse hi kehte honhe '..i felt as if I got free from the charges of some crime'she isn't someone else'but then what happened I saw her in bridal attire that night what happed to her '.it this the reason she was crying like that'.

His heart shank thinking what she must have gone though '..he wished he could lessen her pain'.he have to know what happened '

He called dr. rahul 'coz that night he saw rahul talking to her'.

Rahul came '" yes mr. khan "

Asad looked him with stern face'. Rahul smiled

Ra.." kya baat hai asad "

Asad was tapping his first finger franticly and looking here and there'.rahul raised his brow'.

Ra'" asad speak now'."

As.." emm wo mai actuly'." Rahul placed shook his his head.." asad I dnt have much time mujhe ek surgery kerni hai toh plz wo mai actually kea age se batatao'"

As.." woo" rahul glared his and he made a helpless face'.

Asad forwarded file in front of him 'seeing zoya's pick rahul spoke automatically '.

Ra.." aree ye toh ms. Zoya faruki hai na, I operated her father that night 'oh she has joined sanjeevni'hemmm

Asad'" her father'.what happed that night'" asad couldn't hide the concern in his voice'

( he looked asad with counfused face..)

Ra.." why u r so interested asad miya'"

He teased and asad straightened his face to hide his feelings'" wo aise hi now she is my employ and for better performance I need to know my employs personal history too'"

Asad doesn't even know what crap reason his was making in front of rahul who smirking now'

Ra.." ohhh'"

Asad didn't looked at him and tried to show he was very much busy in his laptop '

As.." toh tell '"

Ra.." hemmm actually I dnt know much but is was her wedding day, and they found the groom cheating red handed, seeing that her father got heart attack and was admitted here '"

He felt someone stabbed his heart'how much she must have suffered, ..his heart prayed to god'" allah agar maine maine koi b achha kaam kiya ho toh uske badle use iss do jaha ki her khushi dede aur uske hisse ka har gum mujhe'."

He doesn't know why he prayed this to god but from the moment she entered in his life he doesn't know what happening to him..he just wanted to protect her from all the miseries as if its his responsibly to make her happy '.

Rahul was observing so many emotions flowing on his face'.he was amazed to see this side of asad ahmad khan'

But some where asad was happy too she wasn't married '.she wasn't someone else 'he felt guilty for being happy on someone's misery but couldn't help pahli baar ek umeed ek chahat ne basera kiya tha useke dil me' jindagi me pahli baar khush tha wo apne liye'

Rahaul spoke with a smile, he was happy for his friend'" asad baat kya hai'.."

As.." kuch nahi achha mujhe round pe jana hai'"

Asad left his cabin in hurry '.rahul smiled seeing a nice change in his friend..

After his rounds he was going for a meeting when his thoughts again drifted to zoya'when some one banged to him'.it was so sudden that he couldn't help but fall on the floor with the person over him and a loud thud sound following '.

He winched with pain'" ahhh" and opened his eyes

two big eyes staring me with fear '.she was looking like a scared rabbit who by mistake entered the loins den '.i pressed my lips hard to stop the chuckle escaping from my lips 'I was lying on floor and she was over me'.her hairs were disturbing my view, I so wanted to tuck them behind her ears but dsnt have that courage '.she started trying to get up and again fell on me crushing my ribs'.but I didn't felt the pain actually 'I saw najma came running out of blue and helped zoya standing up'.

I straightened my cloths while both of them were staring me as if m a strike head master who is gona punish naughty kids'.

I turned to najma gesturing her to speak'.. she spoke in a shaken voice'" bhaijan m sorry wo galti se I pushed her that's why she fell on u 'm really sorry "

Najma tried to explain while zoya timidly stud next to her'staring najma and asad alternatively ''

Asad.." its ok'dr. najma khan"

Najma bit her tongue'" sorry sir'emmm slaam "

Asad nodded with a tiny se b tiny smile, najma elbowed zoya'.to get her back to real world'

Zo'" ooo yaahh sss salaam walekum '."

Her voice reached his ear like music '." Walekum asslam'." He replied and then asked them to back to work'.they both almost ran from there 'while stared their retreating back

Zo'" he is ur brother'."

Na.." yup and the owner of this hospital but don't tell anyone he doesn't like taking advantage thing '"

Zo.." ohhh"

******

Aisa lagta hai jaise achanak se Wakt badal raha hai '.ajjkal meri tanhaiya bhi akeli nahi aati unka khyal sath lati hai'pahle bhi mujhe sanjeevni aane ki jaldi rehti thi per ab bechani rehti hai waha pahuchne ki taki mai unhe dekh saku, roj jab wo mujhe salam kehti hai toh unki awaz se mera pura din khushgawar rehta hai, unki maujudgi ne kuch badal diya hai mere vajud me'..mushkurana seekh raha hu mai'

At khan mention '

Asad and najma were having dinner silently '..

Najma was amazed as she saw a hint of smile on her bhaijaan's face '.she asked with concern '." Bhai jaan app thik toh hai na'"

Asad was bluffed with the question '" yaah mujhe kya hua hai tamater khan eke beech me baat nahi kerte have ur food silently '"

Na.." jee per aap kaha ja rahe hai'"

As.." wo m done good night'"

After asad gone'" mai kal hi rahul bhai se baat karti hu bhaijaan ko jaroor kuch ho gaya hai'"

Asad sat near the window of his room with guitar in his hand '..he started humming remembering zoya''


Tumse mil ke maine jaana
Ishq kya mohabbat kya
Bhool baitha sab kuchh main to
Din kya, raat kya.. chaahat mein..

Khali salam dua mulakat mein
Chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai teri sohbat mein'
Khaali salaam dua mulaakaat mein
Chehare ki rangat badal rahi hai teri sohbat mein

Yeh tune kya kiya..

Najam heard some musical sound coming from asad's room so placed her ear on his door'" omg allah bhai jaan romantic gane gaa rahe hai'"

******

Asad was walking through the corridors and stopped in front of children's ward coz this is the place she could be seen often..some time convincing kids to take med some time playing with them'.

Yeh tune kya kiya..
Yeh tune kya kiya..
Dooba main dil ki jannat mein
Khali salam duaa mulakat mein
Chehre ki rangat badal rahi hai teri sohbat mein'

He just couldn't help but stare her 'but his reputation come in between so he shows sometime as if reading a file standing there or attending any call '..so that no one can question what he do there '.today again his feet automatically stopped there and found her talking to a little kid'.he couldn't help his lips curving slowly slowly '.he was showing dt he is busy on some phone convo'

Jo khaalipan tha
Jo soona man tha
Woh khil utha hai jaane khuda
Badal raha hai har ek mausam
Bechain dil ka jaane khuda
Jaane khuda.. jaane khuda..

Khali salam dua mulakat mein
Chehare ki rangat badal rahi hai teri sohbat mein'

beautiful song just best for him link

Dr. anjali came as she wanted some suggestion from him'seeing his busy in some phone convo she was waiting standing next to him..and he was as expected unaware of it'it was 20 mintues anjali was waiting for the phone convo to be finished but there was no signs of it'

Anjali felt something fishy as asad wasn't speaking just holding his mobile near to his ear and looking inside the glass walls'she patted asad's shoulder and he turned with a jerk scared to be caught red handed ..anjali stared him with utter confusion but before she could speak his cell started ringing while he was till holding it next to his ear'her mought left open in a o as she wanted to say something asad looked her once and then his phone he was embarrassed'he almost ran from there leaving a shocked anji behind'

Anjali.." isse kya hua'"

He ran towards the exit but a silly smile covered his face '.all ppl who saw this were looking at him with big eyes'seeing every once reaction he took hold of his jaws by his fingers coz he couldn't stop that his lips curving in a beautiful smile'

In rahul's cabin '

Na.." bhai m sure something wrong with bhaijaan '.i dead sure I saw him smiling and kal toh he was singing after ages that to romantic type of song'plzzz app kuch karo naaa'"

Ra.." don't worry najma mai dekhta hu humare mr. khan ko kya hua hai'"

Rahul called asad..

As.." hello .."

Ra.." asad I want u to meet me at exotic club in 15 minutes'"

As.." but kyuu'"

Ra.." kaisa dost hai tu apne dost ka janamdin bhul gaya ..jaldi aa'"

As.." janam din but tera toh'(but a long beep stopped him from saying anything')

Asad reached the place and found rahul and anjali sitting there'they waved their hand to him..

As.." rahul what is this ajj tera birthday nahi hai'"

Rahul made him sit'" hai mere dost hai..india calendar ke hisab se nahi per chines calendar ke hisab se hai'"

Anjali nodded with rahul'

As.." achha to hap chines kab se ho gaye'." He was again standing

Ra.." jabse mujhe bhook lagi hai baith na m hungry '"

Asad sat shaking his head'

Ra.." asad'( but an announcement caught their attention)

They turned towards d stage where a girl was making announcement

g.." hello ppl today is my best friend's birthday toh lets rock the floor thora badtameej ho jate hai'"

asad whispered '" zoyaaa"

there she was dancing on badtameej dil with her few girls all of their faces were half covered with cake '.

Asad was horrified seeing zoya there it was against his tahjeeb and tameej values to dance like dis in public that to on badtameej dil humppp'.

Anjali'" isn't it our new intern zoya faruki '.i have to say she has got good moves'"

She spoke appreciating zoya but bit her tongue seeing asad deadly glares 'while zoya was mast in her own world '

As'" rahul I have some work so I will take a leave now'"

Ra.." aree asad stop dinner toh ker lo plzzz for me'"

He sat again sulking '.

They started eating silently '.

Zo.." hyeee app sab yaha '."

She asked smiling to fullest'..rahul and anjali smiled back to her while asad looked other side ..

Ra.." yaha came for dinner'"

Zo.." ohh me for my friend's birthday'."

Ra.." hye plzz sit naaa'"

Anjali was shocked seeing a new zoya here, the zoya she saw in the hospital was quite but this zoya is chippery and bubbly '.

An'" r u zoya'.." she tried to confirm '.and asad was just taking zoya's silent glimpse

Zoya laughed '" yes I am meri koi twin sister nahi hai'.ahahaha..i know why u thought soo.."

Rahul to accompanied anjali'" yaaah me to seeing new side of u.."

Zo.." naa this is zoya ..zoya faruki wo hospital me sab uss night ki wajah se mujhe aise dekh rahe the jaise mai bahut bechari hu..sab bahut care ker rahe the meri so I was just enjoying it silently '"

An.." ohh yaah ur nikah and ur abbu'but matlab'"

She giggled more and now asad was also curious enough to know so he was also looking at her..

Zo.." are dnt b sorry yaar my abbu is fit and that nikah wo kerna kaun chahta tha but but abbu kea age chali nahi meri'"

She said pouting cutely'

Ra'" fir'."

Zo.." wo actually aseem was my abbu's friend's son toh abbu decided to get me married to him..but mujhe aise boring arrange marriage nahi kerni thi toh'"

Now a dazed asad spoke.." toh fir'"

She looked at him once '" toh fir kya maine abbu se kaha I will take his test if he passed toh I will marry him fir maine uska sting operation kiya wo jaisa tv me hota hai na aur wo toh meri imagination se jyada bada wala fraud nikla but seeing his video my abbu got heart attack so he was admitted'I really didn't planed that I love my abbu so much but allah miya saved him and me too so m happy now'"

An.." achha toh fir kaisa nikah chahiye tumhe'"

Zoya smiled dreamy 'and then like a very excited kid she spoke '.." mujhe nab hag ke shadi kerni hai wo jaise filmo me hoti hai na waise '.i want my princess charming to come on a white horse ang bhaga ke jaye wo mujhe apni duiya mai'.ek dum fairy tale jaisi duiya and then we will live happily ever after.."

she clapped her hand in delight like a small kid...

Rahul and anjali laughed on her childness with her while asad gulped his saliva ' "ammiii"

He looked at her like a kid who was scared of his own toy '

She is different ..hum dono jameen aur asmaan ki tarah alag hai ek durse se jo ek dusre ko dekh toh sakte hai per mil nahi sakte''.

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precap'. Fight with the goons asad saving zoya and their first actual ancounter'.😆

Hello hope u all like it plz press the like tab and comment long and I will pm only those who will comment so if u want then comment '

And massi I love u

Happy birthday

Its from mommy, me behna and nik's side

Love u

Ur devil

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part - 1 page one

part - 2 page -






Do lafzo me..AR ff (completed)


1- beauty and the beast ( completed)
2- snow white and the white horse prince

do visit

Edited by LilApple - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its just tooo good! You should deffo continue it yaar! :D

I just love ur username...its so cute! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Princess

Really love the story

Interesting

DMG and QH hai ka combo

I am loving it

Najma is also doctor

Wow, its going to be fun

Waiting to read more

So do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Its just tooo good! You should deffo continue it yaar! :D


I just love ur username...its so cute! :)

yuppp
and m more cute then my name...😃☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilApple

yuppp
and m more cute then my name...😃☺️


Aww...you seem to be too 😉

So, when are you planning to update? :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_


Aww...you seem to be too 😉

So, when are you planning to update? :D

areee abhi toh kiya hai
abhi thora intjar ka maja
liyee😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
AMAZING...FABULOUS...BRILLIANT...I JUST LOVED IT...PLZ CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
This was really good and interesting plzz continue soon and PM me plzzz once u update :):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
its too good
awesome piece of work
i just dont have words to describe it!!!

i am already hooked!plz plz continue!!
one more thing plz plz plz pm me!


{comment isssey bhi lambhi kar doon 😆(jaldi continue karaney kii liye😉😆)}

Edited by kajen.asya4ever - 12 years ago

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