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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was really good!!!!!!!!! You have to continue!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dotcom

A snap of a finger brought him back from his thoughts. "What?"

"What were you thinking?" she asked with a slight tilt to her head on one side.

"I asked you first!"

"And I asked you second!" the girl countered with a giggle.

"Well, then answer me and I will answer you," Asad reasoned like the way his father used to do with his business deals.

His face fell as it all came back to him. He was ashamed of himself. Maybe his father never loved him. A lump formed in his small throat, as he fought back the tears. No. He would not cry. And that too Never in front of a girl. A girl, who was bathed in... Light.

"What are you?" Asad attempted again, with a wary glance at her.

"The question is who are you, and my name is.."

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Hello, Hello, Hello!!!

Drop in your feedback, guys! Would love to know what you all thought of my work, as you read it! :D
And do tell me if I should continue or not.

Ananya😃


Sorry to say, but somehow it feels like that her namn is Tanveer. His best friend from young age, Who was There, When he needed someone as kid.



Hahahaha... Gee, this is something I never imagined! :D Thanks by the way for your comment!
But this story is different from what you are thinking. The part where his father left him, may have been extracted from the show's storyline, but the rest will be different. You just gotta wait for it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vryvintrstng concept...smthng diffrnt..do continue soon..n thnks for pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakpearl

I can't differenciate between Arhi n Asya now..


My heart went out for Asad...

n beautiful entry of my Khushi like Zoya..

Ainee,my gudiya..I enjoyed reading it n now I want u to continue😃

Same here,Api~~~
Ainee Patakhe~~~~continue soon and pm me,as usual !!! 😃

pls,can anyone pm me the link toAsya scenes~~i've just started QH after crying so much for IPKKND!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Ananya! I swear i am gonna kill you if you don't continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey ...
This is so intriguing !!!
Thanks for the pm ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am I dreaming or is it that Ananya has finally updated something??? Gosh so welcomed to have you back!! And the story well its phenomenal as always! do continue and hey is it Zoya or someone else??

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hey
that was amazing, very interesting
but why'd you stop there???
you should definitely continue this
and please please do it soon
thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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annieee where the hell have you been?? do you remember this star or no?? *Sadie pout* see i even became an IF dazzler in your memory 😆

after such a long time im reading something written by you! its great as ever and it even has a cliffy like always! 😆

continue soon and dont vanish this time 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awww ...so cute...feeling sad for Asad...but you made Zoya angle...
good concept dear...loved it ...do continue and pls Pm...😉

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