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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

hey tis is really amazing...totally luv it...superb...

asad n zoya are too cute...the way zoya tried to hide asad was really hilarious...

thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...

Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Very cute. When is Tanveer getting unmasked?! 😉

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_Kannika_

@_Kannika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Part 6

in the morning

zoya got up with a smile on her face and saw her phone, she got a message from asad saying good morning with a smiley, she remember her last night's chat with asad and blushed and najma was already up and just then dilshad comes

dilshad: good morning zoya

zoya: good morning phupi...

dilshad: ab kaisa tabyat hai tumhari...

zoya: theek hai phupi...

dilshad: accha... ab jaldi se tayyar ho jao... doctor ke paas jaana hai...

zoya: doctor???? nahi phupi... main theek hoon... im fine phupi...

dilshad: aise kaise tumhare ban aid ko toh nikalna hoga na... asad ne kaha ki wo tumhe le chalega... ab chalo

zoya: mr khan ne kaha... okay phupi main tayyar ho jaungi..

dilshad: that's like my girl..(she helps zoya walk upto the washroom)

zoya: phupi main bilkul theek hu...

dilshad: zoya... tere haath aur pair bohot dard kar raha hoga na...

zoya: nahi phupi... main theek hoon... bas thodi si hi moch hai bas...

dilshad:(has tears in her eyes, she caresses zoya's head) par sar toh dard kar raha hoga na

zoya: phupi aap please fikar mat kijiye main bilkul theek hoon... aap chaliye main fresh hoke aati hoon

dilshad: theek hai...

at the dining table:

asad sits in his usual place with his black coffee and newspaper and najma confused at what to eat, her diet fruits or bread butter, just then tanveer comes and greets everyone and sits and zoya comes and asad and zoya stare at each other and smile, zoya sits next to asad and start having breakfast

dilshad: asad zoya ke medicines dedo,

asad: ji ammi...

zoya's eyes widen.. and she gives a questionning look at asad when asad hands over the medicines... asad whispers to zoya

asad: ye vitamin tablets hai...

both smile and zoya takes it

zoya: (to herself) allah miya mr khan toh kita badal gaye he... nikah ke baad toh poora ka poora badal chuke hai... waise acchi baat hai...

tanveer:(to herself) ye jammy toh thoda jyaada khyaal rakh rahe hai zoya ki... isse pehle, jammy ko apna banana hoga... aaj hi main apna pregnancy ke baare main batadungi... ab der nahi karni chahiye

asad and zoya leave...
on the way... in the car

zoya: mr khan... ab mujhe bohot zyaada guilt feel ho raha hai.. pata hai aaj phupi kitna tensed feel kar rahi thi mere baare main sochkar, please mr khan ab hume phupi aur najma ko bataba hi hoga..

asad: zoya first of all... mr khan nahi...ASAD... aur dusri baat... ye tanveer bohot khatarnaak hai... i cant take risks when it is concerning you... ab hume aisa hi karna hoga... ammi aur najma ko kuch nahi bata sakte hai... bas

zoya: theek hai...

asad: waise neend acche se aaya... koi aur khyaal toh nahi aaya(smirking)

zoya: ji... (suddenly realises what asad said and blushes, and hits him sideways with her elbow)
waise kaha ja rahe hum mr kh... i mean asad...

asad: hum wo jagah pe jaarahe hai jaha hum ek dusre ke liye mannat maanga tha...

zoya: mannat??? kaha asad??

asad: wahi jaha tum toote hua taare dekne aayi thi...

zoya: kya baat hai... aap itne romantic kab se hone lage... aap toh nikah ke baad badal chuke hai asad

asad: waise main waha apna mannat wapas maangne jaa raha hoon

zoya:(gets angry) accha matlab... aap regret kar rahe hai na... mujhse nikah karke

asad smiles

zoya: aap has rahe hai asad!!!!(she turns towards the window)

they reach the place and asad smiles at her childishness and gets out and opens the door for her, she gets down and keeps walking, asad holds her wrist and pulls her towards him... the were standing so close to each other, their noses touching, asad bends a little and whispers into her ears

asad:mera matlab tha ki.. maine kaha tha na ki.. aapko aisa ladka milna chahiye jo aapka dimag seedha kare aur aapke pair kaate... main ye waada karna chata hoon ki main wo insaan nahi banna chata jo aapka dimaag seedha kare aur aapko pair kaate... bas main wo shauhar banna chata hoon.. jo aapko respect kare,... aapko jeans pehenne de.. aapki zindagi apni tareeke se jiye...

zoya had tears in her eyes, asad wiped her tears and kisses her cheeks and both blush... zoya hugs him tight, after awhile she looks at him... meeting his eyes and says

zoya: i love you asad... i love you(and kisses his cheek)

asad: i love you too zoya...

both hug each other tight

asad: waise finally meri begab confess kar hi diya...

zoya: waise main aapke jaise nahi hoon... sirf wo aur actually bol bol kar kisiko pakana!!!

both of the laugh and walk holding hands remembering their old days...

zoya: waise asad,,, iss tanveer ne toh abhi tak uske pregnancy ke baare main nahi bataya...

asad: dont worry wo zarron batadegi... im sure aaj toh zarror bomb phodegi... dekhna!! wo der toh zaroor nahi karegi... waise tumhe iss ban aid's se uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi na... isse utarde aur sirf apna sar ka band aid rehne de

zoya: yes jahapanah bond!!

asad: toh ghar chale mrs bond...

both reach the house... dilshad questions asad about zoya's health and asad cooks up and says all is okay... just then tanveer comes up with her plans

tanveer: jammy... doctor ne kya kaha... (she says so and suddenly acts like she is fainting and falls on the couch{smart women stood just next to the couch,,, just to fall})

asad:(whispers to zoya)shuru hogaya... bola tha na maine

dilshad sprinkles water and she opens her eyes and stars crying

dilshad: kya hua tanveer kyun ro rahi ho...

tanveer: wo khala... hum kaise bataye... wo...(she runs off to her room crying)

dilshad: asad... tum aise kyun khade ho... chalo dekhte hai...

dilshad and najma run where asad and zoya follow from behind

asad: zoya... dekho, please ammi aur najma ko kuch mat batana... tumhara liye khatra hai... is that ok

zoya: ok

the all go towards tanveers room and knock, but no response,,, she had wantedly kept her room door open asad pushed the door open... everyone were shocked to see tanveer trying to strangle herself...

dilshad: tanveer ye sab kya hai... chodo(takes away the dupatta)

tanveer: khala hume marne dijiye... maine bohot bada guna kiya hai...

dilshad: aisa kya hua tanveer... batao toh sahi...

zoya hits asad from her elbow hinting him to start his act, though asad was very irritated to do this act, for the sake of zoya's safety he kept his expressions ready

asad: kya hai tanveer batao...

dilshad: chup kyun ho tanveer batao..(shouts)

tanveer: khala wo... hum jammy ke bacche ki maa banne wale hai...

asad and zoya look at each other, both were irritated but still gave that shocking expression...

dilshad was shocked and broken... she just sat down... shocked and najma had tears controlling her mother and dilshad got up and gave a stare to asad and went down pulling zoya and najma... asad too left... every one left to their rooms...

zoya went to her room and gave a call to asad

zoya:asad ab mujhse nahi hoga... aapne phupi aur najma ka halat dekha na... mujhse ye sab nahi dekha nahi jaata...main phupi aur najma ko sab sach batadungi..

asad was already irritated because of tanveer and his mother's condition and her hatred towards him... gets angry and shouts at zoya

asad: zoya... you just listen to me... jo main kehta hoon wahi hoga and thats final!! mujhe apne plan par focus karne do... i dont want to listen to all this again

zoya gets emotional and had teard in her eyes and hangs the call

asad: (shouts)zoya... are you listening...

he gets even more irritated because she hung the call and hits hits the wall and throws his phone

it was dinner time...
at the dining table

everyone were seated in the table except zoya... dilshad gave stares to asad and tanveer... and najma sat quiet.. asad's eyes were searching for zoya... she just came and both kept staring at each other and zoya just bent her head not meeting his eyes any further and sat next to asad as that was the only empty seat... dinner was a silent affair... zoya was really upset with asad, asad kept looking at her, she knew his gaze was on her but she never looked at him, she completely ignored him
:(to herself) yeh jammy toh zoya ko hi dekh rahe hai... ab toh maine bata diya ki main unki bachhe ki maa banne wali hoon phir bhi... pata nahi nikah ki baat karenge ya nahi...maine toh marne ka bhi acting kiya... phir bhi jammy ne kuch nahi kaha...

asad:(to himself) zoya toh bohot naraaz lag rahi hai... ab isse manaana hoga... waise bohot mushkil sa task hai... mujhe aise nahi chillana tha... lekin kya karun... tumhe iss tanveer se bachana hai... tumhe kuch hojata toh mera jeene ka koi matlab nahi hoga zoya...

end of part 6 hop you all enjoyed.. sorry for any kind of mistakes... 😊
Part 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90654780
😊

Edited by zoyaaakhan - 12 years ago

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snehasya

@snehasya

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

aweee poor zoya asad shouted at her but still loved it now tanveer told she is pregnant now it will be ended soon please update soon and love you for your pms dear they really help thanks a ton

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Lovely update...even i am unable to see the pain dilshad and najma are going through...But in a way even azad is right...

do update soooner and how is Mr. Sher Khan going to wooo his begum sahiba...is it pizza or blue berry cheese cake...or something else...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

that was really good... update...

so there is asya romance for the next chapter..

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princee

@princeegoyal

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

arre maza aa gya yr...bs es tanu ka chapter jaldi se khatam kr do

pari

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niayadav

@niayadav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

hey

i requested 4 pm bt im not getting

plss pm me

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

wow it was too good👏

thnx for the pm and pm me again

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_Kannika_

@_Kannika_

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

guys... im soo sorry for those who dint get pm's.. since im a newbie, i cant send more than 25 pm's a day... really sorry for that...hope you understand😔

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