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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

aise kaise raat khatam????.😲

cont.plz

bcoz asli mazaa toh raat ko aata hai...😉

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

( The last bit went into Asad's mouth, his tongue grazing her fingers ever so slightly. Zoya used that her thumb to brush the side of Asad's lip and wipe off a little sauce that was there. She placed that thumb in her mouth and sucked on it lightly, as Asad watched her closely)

you left me with butterflies in my stomach!!! woman this was hot! its like foreplay to a heated night! i am looking forward to the next update!!! and plzzz no raat khatam...let this raat go forever☺️. plz plz plz pm me when you update!

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Omg I an getting so excited now update
Soon please

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Oh no why do you end it here,pls always give a long update
I really love dis chapter especially where both were feeding each othet with Zoya's hand,its really cute
U really did a fabulous job
Keep it up

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Nishita Rao

@Nishitarao

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Wow!What an update! Awesome!

Raat khatam?? no way!!

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

One word: CONTINUE!

I just read all the chapters in one go and I am already loving it.

Those sweet, nice, little, awkward but yet lovable moments between them are the soul of your story. Wanna read more and more.

You don't PM right? Well, then I will just add you as a buddy 😉

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Awesomee updatee! The pizza bit was amazingg! Loved that Zoya was feeding Asad and Asad holding on to her wrist :$

Can't wait to read the next part and raat itni jaldi nahi khatam ho sakti ;) loool

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

oof asad and his shyness
his love feeding him pizza on the sofa in the light of flickering candle during a blackout, and he LEAVES!!
looking forward to the next part because raat baaakiii

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

I just read parts 6 and 7 and you left me wanting for more! Great updates! Loved how Asad teased Zoya about his password. BTW, are you inspired by Gul?! That was such a teaser. I expected it to be "musibat" or "NYHoityToity" or something related to Zoya. But it was in character for it to be related to Dilshad and Najma! So good job! 👏

Loved the pizza eating scene and the last lip smacking! Raat khatam? No way! Is raat ki subaah nahin! 😉 😆

Waiting for the next part! 👍🏼 👍🏼