FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 12

loved it...amazing update

I am so glad you are making another story. Sach mei you r an amazing writer

wait what?!!?! 😲 😲 😲

They are adorable. Love the update.

Originally posted by: mochhug

RES! Drat! So close! 😆

Haha exactly Asad. She never listens, what makes you think she will now? OMG the way he sucked on her finger. How can one action be so flipping adorable and sooo sexy at the same time!?

Loved it hun! Can't wait until the next one! Don't worry! Take your time :) I know how much you care about the quality, and I also prefer good, over frequent updates 😃

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Fantastic updatee! I really enjoyed it as always! Do continue whenever you can! Btw Ramadan Mubarak :)

Originally posted by: webuser7

Great update! Glad you thought of using the flashlight app. I use mine a lot!! The use of technology was a perfect Zoya trademark! Loved it!

Yeah, I can see BNHH part deux coming up! Shhh! 😆 Even without the apple?! Are they locked out? OK, OK. I'll stop. Just too excited to get AsYa moments, considering Gul mata is starving us. Perhaps, you should send the apple to Gul!! Gawd, I am obsessed with that fruit!! 🤣

Originally posted by: stelena94

Adorable! Amazing! Epic! Esp. finger waala scene! I really really really want it in QH!! That was made of awesomeness!! Loved it!!

I dream of the day you write for QH! 😆

I want the next update sooo bad!! Pretty pretty please update soon!

Originally posted by: braich_gal

wait what?!!?! 😲 😲 😲

you can't stop there!!!! no no no!!! 😭

just read parts 3 & 4 together...loved it...but too short yaar...make the chapters longer na...😉

and woh apple ko kya hoga?? who's gonna eat it??? I hope it's Zoya...😈

you started a new fic?? this is what i get for going on vacations 😡 hehe i love them still 😉

the one good thing is i get to read all 4 at once lovely going so far- i was so sure one of them would take that apple and then will get stuck in the hut- idk why i bother predicting anything in your stories 🤓