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Posted: 12 years ago

Gosh these two bicker at almost everything but that adds to the charm that these two share. Lovely! Asad I believe is torn between amusement and dejection...well our Mrs. Khan can undoubtedly make him emote a lot. Beautiful update and would be looking forward to the next!

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Posted: 12 years ago
don't Zoya me! 😆
loved it! continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Asad knows from where the lines come... but still the meaning he interprets will be different... as you said different readers different meanings... every reader creates new texts...
I've one meaning for that poem which is quite different from what people usually associates with it... let's see what's their interpretation!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww superlike dear.. Good write up..
loved their cute fight... cocontinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meself

Gosh these two bicker at almost everything but that adds to the charm that these two share. Lovely! Asad I believe is torn between amusement and dejection...well our Mrs. Khan can undoubtedly make him emote a lot. Beautiful update and would be looking forward to the next!


he really is ! and to say there bickering is what keeps them on their toes! and it is what leads to the hottest moment they will share!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Finally Asad knows from where the lines come... but still the meaning he interprets will be different... as you said different readers different meanings... every reader creates new texts...
I've one meaning for that poem which is quite different from what people usually associates with it... let's see what's their interpretation!!!


yes true.! the meaning behind the lines is what only zoya can tell him! 😃. asad has made progress up until here but still has to know about it from zoya. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
asad was so cute
i loved the way asad asked appi and jeeju for help
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

asad was so cute

i loved the way asad asked appi and jeeju for help




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Posted: 12 years ago
Disclaimer: guys read only if your 17+
chapter 4 !
Miss Musibat and broken tongues!

What does he think of himself? Intimidating and reprimanding her as if she is the one who did something wrong, treating her as an unruly child!! She fumed looking at asad in their wedding picture, placed above the bead's headboard.

Asad entered the room just then, looking straight at her and asked her "zoya, what had happened to you? Why did you do it?"

"She had it coming, I told you! And if it was the other way round you would have reacted even worse, you bloody well know it!

"No way I would have reacted like that, if it was the other way round!" he spoke

"Exactly! Like I told you, you wouldn't have reacted like me but even worse! "

"Don't put the blame on me and change the subject!" he put the finger an inch away from her nose and spoke furiously.

"Asad take that finer away from me, I will use my teeth if I have to" zoya interrupted growling'

"go ahead then ! Forget the finger; why not take the whole hand! Considering you have me in your pockets already! Miss. Musibat! "He said knowing, this will definitely set her off!

Suddenly zoya curved her fingers on his finger near her nose and, yanked her hand down bending his finger as far as back she could. Twisting it.

"I told you to NEVER call me that!" She yelled. Asad looked on incredulously at her his sore finger in his hand rubbing it to lighten the ache

"Really miss Musibat? You don't like me calling you Miss Musibat? He said stepping closer And kissed her on the lips, careful not to touch her with his hands...Knowing this was her final straw.

Before she could stomp over his foot Asad stepped back 'smirking at his victory'.

Zoya groaned in fury, and an escaped strand of hair grazed her face'he instantly saw his weakness, and could not control the irrational thoughts rising in his mind 'the anger, taken over by complete desire'all over a single strand of hair..

He softened instantly seeing the condition zoya was in, caught her by her wrist, he pinned her against the wall his knees between her legs and her arms pinned behind her holding her in place.

It was late at night, but the moon filtered through the window and hitting zoya's features at the right places... unable to control himself , he leaned forward and whispered'"why did you do it zoya? You were jealous' weren't you? He asked her nuzzling her ear.

"I told you she had it coming! I was not JEALOUS! I knew she wanted you the way she was touching you , I am a woman , I know such things, now let me go!" she pushed him with force ..

"ohh no you don't!" He grabbed her by the waist and pulled her to him again, pinning her against the wall.

"no you were jealous, admit it or I will say it again. Miss musi...'"

"okay fine! Zoya exclaimed , she dropped her head back until it rested and glared at him "I was jealous, okay? Just don't say that word again." She mumbled then bit her lip as asad laced his fingers with her and slid her hands down to her sides..

"I love it when you are so fiery, getting hot and bothered because you think she wanted me" he whispered close to her ear and sending out delicious shiver down her spine with his hot breath on her..

He bit her earlobe getting rewarded with a moan , he paved his way down to the nape of her neck'biting and sucking at it reaching a sensitive spot'

"asad stop ! I am mad at you"

"why? what did I do?" asad asked not caring who won the argument and went on further to plant soft kisses along her jaw and nudged the other side with his nose to repeat the process and continue to the spot behind her ear.

"let me go..ohhh! she breathed , Asad had again bit down on her ear making zoya gasp and squirm even more.

"quit moving around, will you? He spoke, Now nipping at her collar bone and going down towards the valley of her breasts'

"then let me goo!!! She tried hard to loosen his grip on her'

"why? so you would , hit me again? Violent woman'I like you like this, all desperate and edgy. Red suits you...'" indicating her blush that had spread on to her cheeks' and her neck which had blotches of red from all the sucking and nipping at the neck"

"well yes, but being thick doesn't really suit you" she replied, indicating his blondeness.

"Interesting choice of words!" he said rubbing his erection near her core'.

"asad.." she whispered throwing her head back on the wall..

Asad got hold of her jeans and slid it down' feeling the dampness between her legs ,he slid his hands up over her shoulders until they landed on her breasts, his thumb rolling across her hard nipples.

He watched her bite her lips and ground her pelvis on his knees.

"You are beautiful! Completely Mental... but beautiful!" he said before kissing her full on the mouth.

Their lips and tongues moved furiously over one another, while hands touched everywhere. At one point asad found his hand below her waist and on her damp core ,he quickly pushed her knickers aside and slid his fingers along her wet fold.

"aren't you glad you dint bite this thing off?" Asad said before letting the finger that zoya had previously offended inside of her.

"Ohh sh-" zoya gasped as she took handfuls of asad's hair and pulled his head down to meet hers. "More", she moaned, her breath hot on his face.

Asad kissed her again, as he slid his middle finger inside to join the first one. Zoya led out a loud groan that sounded like she was frustrated so asad quickly added a third finger, pumping them in and out making wet sounds which were like music to asad's ears.

"yes' ohh god'faster.. asad 'faster" zoya moaned as she tried to match the pounding of his fingers on her. He braced himself with one arm against the wall over her head as the other slammed into her repeatedly. his thumb hitting her on her sweet spot. Sending her into ecstasy.

Both of them breathing heavily, sweat forming on their brows. She gripped his shoulders tightly as asad watched her come undone before his eyes. He was never this rough on her, and was surprised how much she enjoyed it. He needed more...he needed her more than just his hands..seeing the sight of her , messy hair and red blotches of his bites marking her skin at the right places did something to him.

"f**k this," he said taking his hand out of her without warning and ripping her knickers off with one swift movement and throwing the ruined piece over his shoulder. Before zoya could protest, asad silenced her pushing her back against the wall. He yanked the sleeves of the top down , her breasts spilling out. He did not waste any time before unfastening his trousers and pushing them with his underpants down to his ankles.

"asad" zoya exclaimed holding on to him so she wouldn't topple over.."what.."

"shh'you speak too much.. I need you now! " he hissed and kissed her to shut her up..

He reached down to palm her ass, that rounded curve of her giving him what he needed. She instantly lifted her legs up and wrapped it around his waist. Their pelvises aligned perfectly allowing his member to slip into her wet folds with one swift thrust. They both moaned together, their foreheads meeting in the middle as they paused to catch their breaths.

"say it asad, use that dirty mouth of yours, say what you want to do to me, say it" zoya spoke in between her heavy bouts of panting. Asad's heart caught in his throat. He had never seen zoya so wild and forthcoming. Yes she was fire' he was a moth'running too close to the light'but he never had seen zoya so full of passion'it drove him crazy to see her craving 'demanding to be rough with her'he considered it a personal triumph that he brought out this in her! Spit fire! Yes, definitely!

Asad swallowed, he buried his hands in her silken tresses tilted her head back so he could see her face..they stared at each other with so much lust and want, that he found he had to concentrate to just open his mouth to speak.

"I am going to take you, take you so hard you won't be able remember your own god damn name!, I am gonna get you so sore, you will not be able to walk up on those sexy legs of yours! You will be screaming my name, for the world to know you mine. "he whispered hoarsely.

Zoya bit her lip and moaned "now call me that name. please"

Asad paused and didn't understand what she meant . so he said the first thing that came to his mind "you bitch!" he said and went ahead to kiss her and found nothing but air.

"excuse me! " she yelled!

"what? Come on! your killing me! I am gonna die here, zoya!!" he said desperately sliding himself deeper into her making his point. Zoya moaned and hit his shoulder

"no I'm talking about the other one, from earlier", she said rolling her eyes.

"ohh right...musibat!" he said with a grin.

"I hate you," she snarled before grabbing him by the back of his head and pulling him to her , crushing her lips on his surprising him with sucking on his tongue and biting down on him hard!

"hothy thit!" asad yelled grabbing his bruised tongue between his two finger.

His senses went into overdrive when he got a taste of her still on his fingers and found himself sucking on it. He noticed zoya licking her lips and shoved his fingers into her mouth . he panicked thinking she would bite him again but was stunned when she flicked her tongue over them and sucked them . he pulled them out and gave an incredulous look towards zoya.

"that was so...'"

"hot?" zoya asked smirking, with this he grabbed her waist and pushed even deeper as he could go.

"let go asad, I am not going to break! " he did not need further instruction as he held her up. And pounded her, spreading her legs apart even more. Making her whimpers turn to loud moans. The faster and harder he pounded into her the louder she screamed.

Her nails raked on his back and dug deeper onto his flash. he leaned forward to lick her nipple . Sucking and pulling at it using his teeth . the dull ache on his tongue reminded him he needed to seek revenge and so he moved his mouth to the flesh next to her nipple and bit her hard enough to leave an impression and awarding him with a pinch on his bum .making him growl..

he pounded harder..." hell, I am close' " he panted


"Yes! I'm there. Keep going'," she cried out before shuddering and convulsing around him squeezing down hard on his erection.

He lost it then, both of them coming harder then ever. Zoya let go of his hair and asad buried his face in the crook of her neck'heaving slightly, trying to calm their breaths'

Asad took hold of zoya and laid them on their bed'carefully' she was exhausted but the exhaustion was blissful'

Asad snuggled next to zoya in the duvet as she laid her head on his chest...beautiful' his wife was so beautiful. She made him the happiest man on this planet. Just by being with him'

He watched her as she was drifting off to sleep'.he could see her lips forming a smile as she played with his chest hairs'

zoya woke up a little while later...seeing he was still resting'seeing him she couldn't help but recite'her favorite lines once again'

"Drunk as drunk on turpentine'"

"From your open kisses" asad finished .

Seeing zoya's shocked face he continued "Neruda'its from Neruda 'isn't it?

Sitting up on her knees and staring at asad with astounded silence.

"How?" was the only thing zoya managed speaking.


comments and likes would be appreciated! i hope you like it! was a bit skeptical about the chapter earlier but the encouraging comments kept me going😃. will be happy to read what you think of this one!

Edited by zoas91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hot as hell
enjoyed it a lot

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