SS:First date Chap.1 p.3

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

"Bhaijaan please ..."

"Mr Khan why are you overacting ?"

"Shut up Ms Farookhi ! Just Shut up , I knew it ! My Sister can't behave like that you were behind all this !"

"Mr Khan Ladka bohat acha hai..."

"Zoya i don't care ! "

He massaged his forehead as usual , but this time he was very angry , Zoya felt a grip it was Najma , she was scared she has never seen her Bhaijaan like that Zoya saw tears .She couldn't see her best friend sad , she tried again to talk to Jahapanah again.

"-Woh ... " But he cut her

"Ms Farooki remember that night in Farmhouse?" Asked Asad .

she nodded confused , why was he changing the subject ?

"I meant it ! You are a misfit but not only in my life but for my whole family !
You poisoned our life ! My sister till now she never lied to me but because of you now ..."

He felt disgusted , Najma was crying more she couldn't face his brother , and Zoya felt tears coming up , she just left ...

"Bhaijaan... Zoya"

"Don't..Just leave ... And you will never meet that guy again ."

Edited by SanayakiBarun - 12 years ago

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Note!
Hey guys i was so bored that i came up with this ,
Tell me if you want me to continue or not
And if you want Pm 😃

Now You can throw me chappals or what you want 😆

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Chap.1 : page 3

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princee

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Posted: 12 years ago

sounds good...pls continue..& let me c hw asya act on najma BF..pls pm me whn u update

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sonia555

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Good teaser plz continue soon

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bindasss

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was great! Please continue soon and pm me when you do! :)

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Priya Tilva

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Posted: 12 years ago

good one.. pls continue and pm me the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@ChaiTeaWali

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Posted: 12 years ago

sounds interesting 😊 pm me please! 🤗

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aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

sounds good...pls continue..& ..pls pm me whn u update

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Asmaa

@Asma-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Hey guys thank you so much for your comments , i must tell you i am not a pro ...
Sorry if you are disappointed with my writing style 😕
sorry for the mistakes please try to ignore 😕
This SS will be short i think Maybe two or three part 😳

Chapter One

Zoya was looking through the window , tonight she could see the full-moon .

How can he react like that? Misfit he said ... he always blamed her .

he never talked to her nicely , was she so wrong to everyone? She thought.

He will never change she exclaimed , She used to not listen to people but now

each word coming from Mr Khan's mouth seemed important . She cares for him.

But why so much ? She always tried to help him,to make him feel better , but it seems that her efforts were useless.

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Asad opened his laptop trying to focus on his work but he couldn't . Her sister has broken his trust and it was all Zoya's fault , Just few days ago , he was enjoying her presence .

He thought they were a team , he remembered how she helped him with his mother .

"Bhaijaan" he heard

"Tama... Najma just go away " He said without looking at her

Najma closed her eyes

"Bhai You are wrong" she blurted out

She saw his eyes widened , before closing them again , she could see the anger coming up .
But she continued trying to ignore him .

"You are completely wrong , woh ladka..." Managed to say a scary Najma

"Najma , we have al ready talk ab.." said a fed up Asad

"No bhai this time i will talk you just listen , please let me explain "

Flashback.

"Hello .. Zayed?! What ?! Okay i'll meet you in 5 mins .." Najma cut her phone , she sighed

*5min later *

"Zayed here we go my flashcards good luck for your exam !" Grinned Najma

"Najma you saved my life ! Infact i am lucky to have a beautiful and intelligent tutor "

"Zayed ! "She blushed

"Now i understand why your family keeps calling you tamatar !" Joked Zayed

"Zayed ..Seriously !" Managed to say Najma embarrassed

"Najma?!"

"Zoya ..You .. "

"Najma what are you doing here ? Who is that guy?". inquired Zoya with suspicious eyes

"Hi I'm Zayed Najma's friend i am sorry to bother you at this time , Najma is my tutor , i just came for these flashcards "

"Oho i thought you were her Boyfriend and i was ready to kill her for not telling me !" Zoya said with a big smile on her face

Zayed and Najma flushed looking shyly to each other ...

"Acha Now you should go i think Mr Khan will not appreciate this ,But thank god Mr khan is not here otherwise he would have kill you , meeting her cute sister in the night .."

Zayed gulped , who made Zoya laughed

"Anyway i should go then " Said Zayed looking down Zoya was ready to go to her bedroom again
"And Thank you so much Najma you are the best , I can't do anything without you "

Suddenly he hug her tightly , Zoya turned and opened her mouth widely , In the same time Najma was flabbergasted , then she felt ashamed , did not know how react ...

"Najma!"

End Of the FlashBack

"Bhai i know, i made a mistake letting him come at night and i will accept your punishment "

she said embarrassed
"but kya karoon i am just helping him , he comes from a modest family .
he is working as a waiter then he studies at night i was just helping him for his exam , tonight he needed my cards , i just gave him i swear Bhaijaan . Zoya wasn't aware about this , infact she cared about you .Please Bhaijaan don't blame Zoya .."

"She must be upset.." he replied confused

Najma rolled her eyes "Zoya upset ? No upset is a light word to definite her state right now .."

"Tamatar ! "

"Sorry Bhaijaan , i think you should convince her "

"It's very late Tamatar just go to sleep"

"But.."

"Najma.."

"Okay Okay sorry" she smiled

"No im sorry sis , i should not have to react like that but what to do i thought you and this.."

"it's Okay Bhai " she replied shyly but tryto tell this to her not me .

She left the room letting a confused Asad ,

"What a fool ! Why do i have to hurt her ! God this time i am clearly dead , she must angry right now, Ya Allah how will i do to convince her to forgive me? "

He took his laptop and sat on the couch , he type on Google "how to convince my GF"

"Wait Girl friend she is not my girl friend ! Is she ? "

*************
"Zoya look someone send you a package !!!" Yelled Najma

"Tamatar i am just here you don't need to scream like that , and i am not blind"

"Sorry sorry but open it please !" Pleaded Najma

Zoya grabbed the package , and start to open it , she saw a beautiful red-black saree

"Wow this is so beautiful ! Omg who could have send you this gift ?"

"I dunno , ek sec there is a card "

The card said
Tonight it's just you and me
Meet me at 8pm front the house
J.S.P

Zoya couldn't help to smile , she blushed as she touched the card . She was sure... it was him

End of chapter 1

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