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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for late update. I guess many must have forgotten the ss by now.Anyways,here is the next update. Dorry no pms again. Enjoy!

Part 4a
Zoya: Mr Khan, yeh ladki...yeh ladki..ise... I don't know! Who is she?
Asad, najma and DIlshad relaxed visibly. Tanveer was hell shocked.
Najma: Zoya yeh Tanveer hai. Bhaijaan ki dost!
Zoya put her hands on her mouth shocked.
Zoya:allah miyaan,17th century mughal-e-azam kiy koi friend hai? Woh bhi ek ladki? Unbelievable!
Asad rolled his eyes.
Zoya;: Anyway, hi myself Zoya, Zoya Farooqui!
Tanveer didn't respond.
Zoya:Hello, aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho jaise bhoot dekh liys ho? I am living!
Asad: Ms Farooqui, actually she doesn't know of your memory loss. ..
Zoya: Oh Tanveer actually meri 2 months ki memory loss ho gayi hai, ,so I don't remember anything. So yeh yahaan par kabse hain tamatar?
Asad-nearly one nd half months!
Zoya:aapko bahut information hai Mr Khan, kya baat hai?
Zoya smiled at Asad teasingly.
Asad: Ms Farooqui!
Zeenat:Zoya jiju tickets bana denge. You are coming back ASAP.
Zoya : appi, you know aapne Abb...I mean jis kaam ke liye main India aayi thi, woh kiye bina main kahin nahin nahin jaungi!
Zeenat : Zoya! tu usi ghar mein rukegi?
Zoya : yes! Mr Khan ko koi problem nahin! Please appi, you know it's important for me. Please!
Zeenat : Zoya Asad ka nikah ho raha hai!
Zoya was too stunned to react
Zoya:what? With whom? Aap kishse nikah kar rahe hain Mr Khan?
Asad turned away.
Zoya : Mr Khan I am asking you something!
Tanveer:humse!
Zoya's eyes popped out in shock
Zoya: mr Khan how can you do this to me? What do you think of yourself? How. ..I thought you saw me as your. ..
Edited by PreetiASYArocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
how can u leave us hanging...
awesum update..
wen did asad decide to marry tannu??? :0
anyway thanx for the update.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Wow really like your story continue soon plz pm me for next part if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
wow
awsum please update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

how can u leave us hanging...
awesum update..
wen did asad decide to marry tannu??? :0
anyway thanx for the update.. :)


It's in chapter one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update. ...plz continue soon with a longer update. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello beautiful people! Thanks for your likes and comments. Here's the next update. Enjoy!
Chapter 4b
Asad and others were baffled by her reaction and Zeenat cursed herself mentally for bringing up this topic as Asad had already told them regarding doctor's advice. Asad looked down.
Zoya : Mr Khan I thought you considered me you...friend! Then how could you hide this from me?
Asad and others sighef in relief.
Zoya : Aapko pata hai main kitna guilt feel kar rahi thi? Lagta hai janab aapne nikah ke sapne dekhne mein busy the!
Anyways, congrats to both of you. And Tanveer, meri sahanubhuti bi tumhare saath hai jo tumne Mr Khan se nikah karneki sochi!
Seeing their confused faces, Zoya continued about how Asad is emotionally challenged and all. In spite of the tragedy, Dilshad najma couldn't help smiling and Asad too smiled remembering their past.
.Zoya's voice brought him out of reverie.
Zoya : By the way Mr Khan aap donon ki jodi bilkul 1st class hai! You have made an excellent choice i must say.
Asad couldn't take it anymore and nearly yelled: Zoya!
Zoya neglected that completely and turned to her appi
Zoya : appi Mr Khan ka nikah hoga and main present na rahoon, is that possible? No way! Aab toh main mr Khan ka nikah attend kiye bina kahin nahin jaungi.
As Zeenat started protesting, Zoya pleaded with her and ultimately Zeenat gave in. Zoya did a victory dance in mind.
Zoya : Najma, we have got some gifts for you. Main aabhi change karke aati hoon.
Saying this Zoya left for her room.
Asad stared at her door and talked
Asad: Tanveer (yes after the sr fiasco he doesn't call her tannu) Zoya ko kuch yaad nahin hai and use kuch batana bi mat. Doctor ne kaha hai kisi bi tarah ka shock uske health ke liye achha nahin hai! So be careful.
Saying this Asad strode off to his room and shut it with a thud.
Najma and DIlshad also left the room. Tanveer stood all alone thinking of ways to come out of this mess. She decided to check on Zoya first and peeped in through Zoya's door to see an ecstatic Zoya taking out things from her bag. Tanveer was now assured that Zoya has actually lost her memory and sighed. As Tanveer turned around, she faced a raging Dilshad glaring at her.
Tanveer:umm... khala..woh.
Dilshad: bas! Tum meri bachhi ko bahut dard de chuki ho. Uski ish halat ki zimmedarr bi tum hi ho. Isliye ushse door raho warna humse bura koi nahin hoga. Yaad rakhna, mere bete se nikah kar rahi ho iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum Zoya ki jagah le rahi ho!
Saying this Dilshad left.Tanveer was fuming in anger and decide d to get Zoya gone forever.After giving her evil smile Tanveer went to her room. After a while Zoya went to Tanveer and brought her down. Zoya gave the gifts to Dilshad and najma. When it came to Tanveer,
Zoya: Tanveer I am really sorry. But tumhare hone waale sauhar ne mujhe tumhare hone ki khabarr hi nahin di. So I couldn't get anything for you.
Tanveer: koi baat nahin hum..
Zoya : But I would like to give you this bracelet. Please maana mat karna, take it as your engagement gift from me. And if you relly think of me as a friend you will never take this out.
Tanveer was quite happy as the bracelet was diamond studded and she put it on immediately and Zoya beamed.
Night
Tanveer went to Zoya's room and started normal conversation with her. Meanwhile Asad also returned home after getting Zoya's medicine and made way to her room.
Tanveer: Zoya humain maloom hai aap yahaan kyun aayi ho. Aap aapne abbu ko dhoondne aayi ho na?
Zoya dprang out of her bed and yelled. Just then Asad was about to knock.
Zoya : tumhe kisne kaha main yahaan abbu ko dhoondne aayi hoon? (Asad pushed open the door bewildered) aisi koi baat nahin hai Tanveer.
Tanveer: humain sab such pata hai. Aap aapne Abb...
Asad yelled from behind
Asad: Tanveer! !! ! What the hell are you doing? Kya badtameezi hai?
Tanveer: Jammy, hum...hum toh. .
Asad: just shut uppp!!
Zoya : Mr Khan! Relax. What is this? Koi insaan aise treat karta hai aapni fiance ko? At least let her explain mr Khan! Koi aapse muhabatt karta hai iska matlab yeh nahin ki uski koi feelings koi self respect nahin hai, okay? She was just joking!
Zoya turned away from him.
Zoya: it's not true. Koi aapne abbu ko kyun dhoondega? aur woh bhi aapne ghar se itna door? huh! Rubbish!
As Zoya laughrd ruefully, Asad could sense her lie and he felt angry at Tanveer.
Zoya : ek baat yaad rakhiyye mr Khan, husband wife ke beech jitni bi muhabatt ho agar trust nahin hai then woh relationship kabhi successful nahin hogi.
Asad recalled the incidents in past when Zoya had accused Tanveer and he had cursed Zoya without listening.
Asad became thoughtful and Tanveer started panicking.
Zoya : don't let a third person come in between you and your fiance Mr Khan. The consequences are dangerous. by the way aap mere room mein bina knock kiye kaise aa gaye?
Asad: woh aapki medicines.
Zoya : oh thanks. Aab aap really chahte hain ki main theek ho jaun then say sorry to her.
Asad and Tanveer were shocked.
Zoya : please...for me?
Asad sighed: I am sorry but dont talk like that to Zoya again.chalo yahan se.
Tanveer stomped off and Zoya c smiled at Asad. Asad smiled at Zoya
Zoya : thanks.
Asad left and Zoya's smile got wider ad she analysed Asad's changed behaviour.
precap
Asad Zoya heart to heart talk

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update... plzz continue sooon... cant wait for the heart to heart talk... :D
n i hated the greeedy tannu... kick her out sooon... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
plzzz pm me for the next part

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