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Posted: 12 years ago
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waw! that was hot! very well described! more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Omg wow... Too hot to comment LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant and beautiful. Great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
THAT was something! It was really erotic! You nailed it.

I started reading the OS with a smile sth like this =>

and then when zoya asked him to make love to her I was like: "W*F?" 🤔
and then when he agreed I was like: "yay" (I thought zoya just screwed it by asking him to have sex with her, but after his response I was like - "you go girl")

And then came the erotic part which was so well written! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all so much for your supportive feedback. I blush too at my own boldness--can't believe that I actually put my thoughts to paper and then publicly shared this. But your comments have been an awesome shot in the arm and I may soon come up with more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sizzling hawt

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Klondy

Thank you all so much for your supportive feedback. I blush too at my own boldness--can't believe that I actually put my thoughts to paper and then publicly shared this. But your comments have been an awesome shot in the arm and I may soon come up with more.



Please do! You're a natural!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god this was AMAZING!!!! i LOVED it!!!!! sooo HAAWWWTTT!!!! do write more!!! i'd love to read more of ur works!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dis was sooo cool, no I mean hot!!
I really loved it, for AsYa to cum dis close we'll hav to wait for a century.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itz superb. Ur a good writer. Continue it

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