ASYA FF:my love. asya married abbu truth track p23 updated 8/12 - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariam1368

That was so Romantic Ritz
Asya scene was superb
A naughty Asad n a shy Zoya...jst too good

this is what opposite to what they show in the soap.. we always get naughty zoya and shy asad in soap so i changed it here...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the concept.. Update soon!!
😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved this update...cute n lovely asya moments!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Chapter Rithz! ❤️


Continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
so here comes the next part...

PART-13:

It was dawn.. zoya and asad moved back for the guest house to Khan villa.. Asad and zoya got ready. Zoya wore a white suit which had a maroon dupatta and zoya went to help dilshad in the kitchen.. everything was set and asad and najma too joined them..

N: so zoya from today u are gonna sit here beside bhaijaan ok..

D: najma no more zoya u need to call her bhabhi..

N: oh sorry.. I just got habituated to it.. will surely call her bhabhii only.. ok zoya bhabhijaan..

Z: come on tamatar u know I don't consider all these formalities seriously so call me zoya only..

N: its ok zoya when I wanna call u zoya I will call u and when I wanna call u bhabhi I will. Ok..

Z: done..

Saying this both hugged each other and then sat to eat.

Asad and dilshad loved the bonding both of them shared.. in fact zoya is the only one with whom najma shared everything and is extremely close to her.. najma was the one who loved zoya first in this house and always wanted zoya to be with her.. even zoya loved najma in the same manner and she can do anything for her.. and today both the friends are together and will be happy for ever..

After breakfast asad sat in his room with his laptop and was working and zoya najma and dilshad were watching movie in the hall.. asad for a coffee from the room and zoya made it and took it into their room.. as she was about to enter she got slipped and the some coffee fell on her dupatta..

Z: ahh my duppatta..

A: its ok.. did the coffee fell on u did it burn..

Z: no.. ok take this I will clean it and come..

Asad took his coffee and thought " she is still a kid don't know when she will grow up."

Zoya went into washroom and started cleaning it.. and zoya being zoya with her extra talents made the whole dupatta wet instead of just the coffee part and so she cant wear it now.. " what's this the whole dupatta is wet I cant wear it now.. I will keep it to dry in sun later and for now I will change my dress.."

She came out into room and saw that asad was in the hall with others and she started searching for another dupatta as she is not in a mood to wear jeans on her first day after marriage and moreover dilshad had presented her this suit.. so she tried to match some dupatta with the dress.. when she was searching in her part of the wardrobe suddenly she could find something in red colour in asad's part of wardrobe.. she thought to check it as she know that asad never wore such colored shirts and he always preferred subtle colors.. so she removed it and it was a dupatta.. she was shocked to see it..

It was the same dupatta which she wore on the wedding day that did not happen.. she lost that in the godown where she saw asad and tanveer in the worst position.. all those memories filled in her mind and tears started filling in her eyes..

Z to herself : Allah miyan.. asad kept this dupatta with him only..

She hugged the dupatta to her chest and closed her eyes.. when she opened she could see asad standing in fornt of her looking at her in shock..

A: zoya where did u get this?? And why did u take it out??

Z: asad why is this with u???

A: ha.. when u left I had this with me.. so I kept it as ur memory..

she went near him and hugged him..

Z: asad im sorry.. im so bad I left u without thinking once about u.. I just thought that u cheated me and here u still loved me and kept all my things as my memories... I love u asad.. and im so sorry for misunderstanding u..

A: zoya its all over and promise me that u wlll never talk about those things again..

Z: ok..

A: u know I have one more thing of yours..

Z: one more thing.. what??

A: it is the most precious one to u.. and u love it more than anything..

Z: what is it??

Asad moves towards his draw and takes zoya's earring and holds it in his fist..

A: this is the muhdikaayi for u..

Zoya was closely looking at his fist and when he opened it she was shocked and happy to see her earring which was her ammi's memory and which she thought that she lost it..

Z: it was with u asad.. then why didn't u ever return it to me???

A: ya It got stuck to my shirt after that fight with akram and his goons and I tried to return it but whenever I thought so something or the other incident stopped it.. when I realsied that I loved u and I was not ready to accept it for myself and when I was unable to express it to u I decided to keep it with me as ur memory and finally today u are mine so I thought to give it back to u..

She was extremely happy that she had kept it safe and understood his love for her..

Z: u know asad I feel that ammi has chosen u for me.. I always had a feeling that if ammi was alive she would have been very happy and she would have blessed us whole heartedly and today after seeing this with u I feel she herself has chosen u for me that is why even before I could realize that u are meant for me she has sent her wishes to u..

Saying this both hug each other.. while hugging..

A: so take it and wear it..

Z: no keep it inside only. I will wear when I want and I have worn it always and I wanna preserve that for my daughter now..

Making her face him..

A: daughter??

Z: ha when we wil have kids they also need some memories of their grand parents.. and I cant share anything about my mom and dad as myself doesn't know anything about them so I wanna preserve this atleast for them..

Asad hugged her more tightly and thought to himself that he will soon find out about her father when they were like this ayaan enters the room through the window... and they doesn't notice it..

AY: wah wah I never knew that my bhaijaan was so romantic..

Asad and zoya break the hug immediately and stood in a shock..

A: ayaan how many times did I say u to use the door not the window.. learn atleast now im not single any more..

AY: sorry for that bhai.. but aadat se majboor. Will take care of it next time.. but bhai I thought u would be normal atleast now but It looks like still u are in romantic mood..

Asad moves to give a hit on his head and both the brothers hug each other with a wide spread smile..

Z: hello even im here.. wont u wish me??

AY: oh sorry mona.. saying this he will move to give her a hug.. but asad pulls him back..

A: bhabhi hey teri..

AY: I know bhai.. but she is my mona first then bhabhi next.. so I can greet her in this way.. no problem right mona..

Zoya to tease asad.. " ha no problem raburt.. after all u are my friend and partner in crime too"

Asad rubs his temple at the two mad people in front of him and then ayaan moves and gives zoya a side hug..

AY: thank u so much mona for coming into my bhai's life. Only u are perfect for him.. and I know how much he missed u and loved u and cried for u..

Z: even I know that.. ok ok.. now tell me why are u here??? Any problem..

AY: ha.. a big problem..

Z: is it regarding humeira?? (after staring for a few seconds at ayaan)

AY: how did u guess it so correctly???

Z: ur face says it..

Saying this zoya looks at asad saying that what she was telling was right..

AY: I love her mona..

Asad was shocked at his words.. his brother who shared everything with him did not tell him that and shared it with zoya..

A: u love humeira then why didn't u say me??and now u say it to zoya before telling it to me..

Z: ha someone is jealous here..

AY: sorry bhai.. u had many problems around u and I did not want to make u more tensed.. and moreover zoya knows everything about me and humeira before than u so that is why I told her openly..

Asad was shocked to know it.. he knew that zoya and ayaan are friends but he never knew that they share such a great relation.. he was a little jealous at zoya and happy too as she was close to all who are important in his life and was jealous that everyone shared everything with her more than him..his sister ammi and now ayaan too.. and he thought nikhat nuzhat and humeira will soon join in her gang if she met them once or twice more..

Ayaan then explained what all happened and how he realized that he loves humeira and was trying to tell her but cannot as she was not allowing him at all..

Zoya assures him that she will solve his problem and asks ayaan to prepare himself to tell her what he feels when she comes to him..

Asad and ayaan will be confused about her plan but they know when zoya plans to do anything she will deffo do it.. so ayaan leaves.

Zoya calls humeira and asks her to meet at the mall without telling anyone as she need her help.. humeira agrees.. zoya asks asad to drop her at mall and asad agrees to her as he planned to go and meet the frame person who said about zoya's father's death.. and he thought it was apt as even zoya wont be there and more over he wanted to keep it all a secret as she said him that she was not ready to build false hopes and see them breaking again..

Asad drops her at the mall and leaves to frame person..

AT MALL:

Z: hi humeira

H: hi bhabhi..

Z: humeira im bhabhi of ayaan not to u.. pls don't call me that I have many more people who will call me that..

H: so what should I call u.. aapi.. can I call u aapi..

Z: aapi.. great.. I never had siblings u can all me that...

H: ok why did u cal me..

Z: ya I wanna buy gifts to all of asad's siblings and u too.. I know najma's taste but I know nothing about nikhat nuzhat and ayaan so I thought u can help me..

H:: ok I will do it for u aapi..

Z: thank u humeira.. and one more thing I did not mix the poison on the day of ur engagement it was by tanveer..

H: I know it aapi.. u can never do such things.. when u did not know who I was u helped me in the ramp walk.. and after knowing that im gonna be ayaan's fianc u can never do that.. not only me u can never harm anyone..

Z: thank u humeira.. so lets shop now..

Zoya and humeira completes shopping and moves to do lunch.. they place the order and will be waiting for it..

Z: shall I ask u one thing??

H: definitely aapi..

Z: when u love ayaan so much why are u avoiding him??

H: because he doesn't love me and so I myself wants to free him from my relation..

Z: hmm.. humeira don't u think u are thinking too much.. ayaan did not love u in the beginning I know that and he was so confused and tensed when he came to know that u loved him.. but he is not the same now..

H: how can u say aapi.. he directly said that he doesn't love me on my face.. what else does that mean??

Z: humeira.. what he said was before one month and a lot changed in this month and even u know that.. look humeira time and people and situations will not be the same always and even the feelings towards a person also.. they change with time and incidents.. I don't wanna say whether ayaan loves u or not but I just want to say that give him a chance to talk to u..

Look humeira sometimes we will want to listen something and we may not get that chance and when someone wants to say something we will not give them that chance and the result is always same.. it gives us pain and regret that we should given a chance atleast.. u know when I wanted to listen I love u from asad he was not able to say and situations did not allow that.. and when he wanted to say I did not give him a chance... but finally Allah gave us both a chance and we used it and we are together today..otherwise that would be the biggest regret of our lives. so pls give ayaan a chance to say what he wanna say otherwise u will regret for ur life long that u did not give him a chance..

Humeira understands her words and then says she will try to talk to ayaan and then both of them leaves..

PHOTO FRAME SHOP:

Asad moves to the photo frame shop person and asks him about the person who said him about zoya's father.. but he came to know that the person was out of the town and went to his village as his father died and may return after 45 days nearly as he has many problems to handle with..asad wil be disappointed and returns to khan villa.. he remembers zoya's words that "time should come for anything to happen.. we need to wait for it.."

THINGS TO REALISE: (guys im gonna start this new column in my parts so that u can get what i meant to say thru these scenes if u cant understand any so that u can get my clear POV)

the dupatta scene made zoya realise once again how much he loved her and missed her once again and the earring made asad realise how much zoya miss her parents and especially her father.. though she doesnt talk about him he understood that she always wanted him beside her.. so he determined to get her father back..

THINGS TO AWAIT:

ayaan realised his love for humeira and zoya adviced humeira in her relation with ayaan how will she take it?? how is zo and humzie are gonna get bonded further?? so some more days asad needs to wait to get to know about zoya's dad what wil happen with in these days??

so stay tuned to this ff till my next update...

NOTE: many more twists on the way...

with love

Rithz...😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
FANTASTIC RITHZ...IT WAS AWESOME...CONTINUE SOON...WAITING...THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE PM DEAR...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is superb...
luv it...
asya are too cute...
its fabulous...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a cute update... siblings bonding n all...
Zoya is close to everyone who are important to Asad...
Asad will first know about Zoya's Abbu??? May take time but still...
Loved the new columns you started 'Things to Realize' n 'Things to Await'... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved zoya ayyan bond
also zoya humeria bond
lovely update

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