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guys im really over whelmed with ur comments love u all alot for this.. seriously i didnot expect that u will love it so much..
love u all...
here is the next part..

Part-4:

Zoya entered into the khan mansion in the evening and after all the discussion everyone left to their rooms and no one came out..

Dilshad was in her room along with najma and asad was in his rooms lost in thoughts and totally confused.. he doesn't know whether he should be happy that zoya is back in his house and more over she is pregnant with his kid or he should be sad that unknowingly he spoiled zoya's and tanveer's life.. he was hating himself for everything that was happening in his and zoya's life especially' he did not try to clarify anything regarding what zoya said and decided to accept her words and get her back in his life at any cost..

It was almost 11 in the night and the house was still quiet.. zoya slightly moved to dilshaad's room and tried to open the door.. looking at zoya dilshaad and najma stood in a shock.. zoya stood calmly at the enterance a liitle inside the room.. dilshad went fastly towards zoya and pulled her in suddenly and peeped out to see anyone present around and locked the door tightly and dragged zoya towards her bed and stood by the side of it' and hugged each other tightly.. zoya released herself from the hug and then hugged najma too and all smiled at each other'

Zoya: wah phupi what an acting.. u need to try in films seriously..

Dilshad: shut up u silly girl.. kuch bhi.. I don't know any acting vacting'

Zoya: u say najma didn't phupi give killer looks to me in the evening when we did all the drama' and seriously that was too good..

Najma: ha ammi u were good but zoya u were awesome.. the way u spoke to ammi and then to bhaijaan in front of tanveer was just superb.. u both need to try in telly soaps atleast'

Everyone smiles at this and then najma says.. what did u say to bahijaan he was so calm suddenly..

Zoya: I just said him same the way we planned and he believed it.. even I was in shock that he believed in my words so fastly' and seriously I did not expect that he will accept so fast'

Dilshad: he will zoya because he now really understood what u meant to him and more over he believes that no woman can lie in such things..

Zoya: I know phupi that is why tanveer wanted to use this idea and I think she did not expect this shock.. Allah knows what she is planning now'and I really feel bad for playing with asad's emotions'

Dilshad: beta.. she is so clever that she knows how to play with people but don't worry u don't feel bad what ever we are doing is to get the truth out and make the good win over evil and u know everything is fair n love and war and this is war for the truth and justice and we can do anything'

Zoya: smiles.. its ok phupi now I will go we need to be careful and u know what to do 2mrw right..

Dilshads nods and then kisses zoya on her forehead and says good night..

As zoya gets down to the stirs she sees tanveer moving near asad's room and staring at him through the window.. she gets furiated seeing her and more over how can she get into her room.. so she goes back to dilshad's room and says her everything.. dilshad and najma gets irritated and dilshad says to zoya.. beta asad is ur husband the day when u both got engaged and confessed ur feelings so he is only urs so u need to protect him and prevent him from meeting her ok..

Zoya nods and says some thing in najma's ears and then najma moves near the stairs and says ammi I will be back I need to get laptop from bhaijaan's room to do my assignment.. I will be back in 5 minutes'and she starts moving down..

Hearing najma's voice tanveer runs in to kitchen and starts filling her jug with water.. najma sees tanveer and moves towards asad's room and takes laptop and closes all the curtains saying there are many mosquitoes and moves back to her room.. and tanveer gives a faint smile and moves back'

Zoya slowly tiptoes to her room and gets irritated at the thought of tanveer peeping into asad's room and remember phupi's words and decides to stay by the side of him at any cost and if at all she will see him then she will get a shock by seeing me and will never dare come to meet asad in the nights.. so she decides to go and sleep in asad's room'

She takes her mobile and slowly moves to asad's room and knocks the door.. asad' opens the door and will be surprised and shocked to see zoya' he smiles and then asks whether she wants anything..she just nods and enters his room.. he doesn't understand anything..she looks around the room and then looks towards him ..

Zoya: can I sleep in your room here along with u..

Asad eyes grows wide and he opens his mouth a little in shock and says what???

Zoya: I said can I sleep here for this night..

A: (composing himself) why is there any problem with ur room do u have any problem with bed or fan or anything??? Let me know i will get it done..

Z: no actually.. since many days I was getting some very scary nightmares and when I asked the doc about it she said some ladies in pregnancy will face this problem due to the hormonal imbalance.. and since last few days I was in madrasa where I sleep along with others I was little ok.. but today all of sudden sleeping alone in the room is not just fine with me.. im scared and u know phupi is angry with me and i even cant sleep with her so I have to come here out of no choice'

A: (happy that she chose to come to him atleast when she faced troubled) its ok u can sleep no problem.. and are u sure this is all normal right no problem with ur health??

Z: no Mr. Khan.. no problem at all.. pregnant ladies will have cravings mood swings and such night mares due to hormonal imbalance and it will be more in the first trimester so there is no problem its quiet normal and perfect..

Asad feels relaxed to listen to her words and smiles which she reciprocates faintly still to show him that she did not forgive him totally.. as she was about to lay down on the left side of the bed asad went to take the pillow from the right side.. as soon as he took it zoya shouted no'he was totally confused and looked at her in a shock..

Z: what's wrong wih u Mr.Khan??? If u are gonna go out then I could have slept in my room itself what is the need to come here..

A: im not going out zoya.. I will sleep on the couch and u can sleep on the bed'

Z: but Mr.Khan its raining out and If u sleep on couch then u may catch cold so pls sleep on the bad and I don't like any one to suffer because of me..and I will keep this pillow in middle of us..(she keeps a pillow in middle) and more over i want some one by my side not far away.. the dreams are really scary (makes an innocent puppy face..)

Asad was shocked that she asked to sleep with her on bed'more than shock he was happy that he never imagined to get a chance like that in his life after she left him and s not sure whether he will get this chance ever in his life again so he just nodded..

Both of them slept side by side with a pillow in middle and it was about 11:30 by the time they slept in and zoya dozed of fastly into sleep'but asad was not able to sleep with all the shocks he got today.. zoya's entry, declaring that she is pregnant and the baby is his and today she is back in his room and is sleeping beside him..

It was about 12:30 when he got up to drink some water breaking the chain of thoughts.he saw her sleeping peacefully, she pulled the pillow in the middle to almost other side of her and it is now present almost at the corner of the bed.. he smiled at the way she was sleeping and the way she looked peaceful and the beauty of her face made him stare at her.. he was lost in thoughts admiring his beauty..

Suddenly he could see the ring on her left hand.. he was too happy that she still wore it after all the things that happened that made him feel that whatever may be the state of their relation might be at now but they always remain one and will be back together in each other lives' he then noticed the way she kept her hand on her stomach (normally we sleep keeping our hand on our stomach zoya did the same but asad felt in this way).. he had a smile on his face.. though she hated him she cares and loves his baby that was what he thought and was about to touch her stomach to feel his baby. But stopped remembering zoya might wake up and that might cause her irritated and so he doesn't want to spoil the movement and just slept beside her and started talking to her and explaining her how he felt through the whole month when she was not there with him and how difficult it was for him and how happy he is today to see her back in his life'

Zoya who actually woke up when he rose to get water was just watching his face by opening her eyes slowly and listening to him.. she was enjoying the attention she was getting and felt happy that he loved her so much.. she was upset when he withdraw his hand from touching her..

She knew that he wanted to touch her and feel her and make himself assure that she was really back to him.. even she wanted to do the same.. she wanted to touch him and stay in his arms which was the place where she feels secured.. but she cant do it'

Her stupid mind got an idea so she thought to simply follow it without any hesitation after all he is hers and his ammi has already given his copyrights to her..

Asad was just staring at her and the zoya slowly moved towards him and placed her hand on his abs as if she held a pillow or doll in deep sleep.. asad was stunned at her reaction.. and he was just lost for few minutes and actually enjoying what was happening.. he then remembered her anger and tried to remove her hand from him and so caught her hand and tried to lift it up.. as soon as he lifted her hand zoya fastly moved in her sleep and came near asad and held him more tightly and resting her head on his left arm.. she almost placed her head on his shoulder and her face was above his chest and held him tightly against his waist with one hand and other hand she left free laying it on his chest again..

He was absolutely stunned, shocked and surprised at the moment.. perhaps it was the best moment of his life.. he was totally fixed and cant move as if he moved she will wake up.. he looked at her face and could not see it properly. He just enjoyed her fragnance.. this was the way he wanted to stay with her all his life but he couldn't and today he got the chance so he was just enjoying it'

He was just looking at her and held her by her waist and slightly kissed her forehead so that she wont be disturbed and slept cuddling her..

Both of them were enjoying the way they were in but couldnot admit them or even show them.. zoya promised to her that she will always be like this with him,and in his arms till her life ends and slept peacefully..

PRECAP:

Scene 1: zoya faints and doc checks up'

Scene 2: tanveer decides to kill zoya..

guys pls do like or comment... it means alot...sorry for longer one but didnt want to break the asya scene so it was longer..

hope u love it...

Edited by rithika2012 - 12 years ago
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stunning and amazing shot

do continue soon

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thnxalooot for this amazing part... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
it ws amezing Ritika. I wonder if we cn get such scene in show ever. Cnt soon
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ufff... no words,,, Amazing... loved the part...
well written...👏

wating for the nex part...

n thhanku thanku...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...
superb yaar...
realy loved it...
amazing...
love ur story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
KYA??? DILU N NAJMA KI MILI BHAGAT...
U R THE BEST WRITTTER MAN!👏
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Wow Wow!! Update soon 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: rithika2012

guys im really over whelmed with ur comments love u all alot for this.. seriously i didnot expect that u will love it so much..

love u all...
here is the next part..

Part-4:

Zoya entered into the khan mansion in the evening and after all the discussion everyone left to their rooms and no one came out..

Dilshad was in her room along with najma and asad was in his rooms lost in thoughts and totally confused.. he doesn't know whether he should be happy that zoya is back in his house and more over she is pregnant with his kid or he should be sad that unknowingly he spoiled zoya's and tanveer's life.. he was hating himself for everything that was happening in his and zoya's life especially' he did not try to clarify anything regarding what zoya said and decided to accept her words and get her back in his life at any cost..

It was almost 11 in the night and the house was still quiet.. zoya slightly moved to dilshaad's room and tried to open the door.. looking at zoya dilshaad and najma stood in a shock.. zoya stood calmly at the enterance a liitle inside the room.. dilshad went fastly towards zoya and pulled her in suddenly and peeped out to see anyone present around and locked the door tightly and dragged zoya towards her bed and stood by the side of it' and hugged each other tightly.. zoya released herself from the hug and then hugged najma too and all smiled at each other'

Zoya: wah phupi what an acting.. u need to try in films seriously..

Dilshad: shut up u silly girl.. kuch bhi.. I don't know any acting vacting'

Zoya: u say najma didn't phupi give killer looks to me in the evening when we did all the drama' and seriously that was too good..

Najma: ha ammi u were good but zoya u were awesome.. the way u spoke to ammi and then to bhaijaan in front of tanveer was just superb.. u both need to try in telly soaps atleast'

Everyone smiles at this and then najma says.. what did u say to bahijaan he was so calm suddenly..

Zoya: I just said him same the way we planned and he believed it.. even I was in shock that he believed in my words so fastly' and seriously I did not expect that he will accept so fast'

Dilshad: he will zoya because he now really understood what u meant to him and more over he believes that no woman can lie in such things..

Zoya: I know phupi that is why tanveer wanted to use this idea and I think she did not expect this shock.. Allah knows what she is planning now'and I really feel bad for playing with asad's emotions'

Dilshad: beta.. she is so clever that she knows how to play with people but don't worry u don't feel bad what ever we are doing is to get the truth out and make the good win over evil and u know everything is fair n love and war and this is war for the truth and justice and we can do anything'

Zoya: smiles.. its ok phupi now I will go we need to be careful and u know what to do 2mrw right..

Dilshads nods and then kisses zoya on her forehead and says good night..

As zoya gets down to the stirs she sees tanveer moving near asad's room and staring at him through the window.. she gets furiated seeing her and more over how can she get into her room.. so she goes back to dilshad's room and says her everything.. dilshad and najma gets irritated and dilshad says to zoya.. beta asad is ur husband the day when u both got engaged and confessed ur feelings so he is only urs so u need to protect him and prevent him from meeting her ok..

Zoya nods and says some thing in najma's ears and then najma moves near the stairs and says ammi I will be back I need to get laptop from bhaijaan's room to do my assignment.. I will be back in 5 minutes'and she starts moving down..

Hearing najma's voice tanveer runs in to kitchen and starts filling her jug with water.. najma sees tanveer and moves towards asad's room and takes laptop and closes all the curtains saying there are many mosquitoes and moves back to her room.. and tanveer gives a faint smile and moves back'

Zoya slowly tiptoes to her room and gets irritated at the thought of tanveer peeping into asad's room and remember phupi's words and decides to stay by the side of him at any cost and if at all she will see him then she will get a shock by seeing me and will never dare come to meet asad in the nights.. so she decides to go and sleep in asad's room'

She takes her mobile and slowly moves to asad's room and knocks the door.. asad' opens the door and will be surprised and shocked to see zoya' he smiles and then asks whether she wants anything..she just nods and enters his room.. he doesn't understand anything..she looks around the room and then looks towards him ..

Zoya: can I sleep in your room here along with u..

Asad eyes grows wide and he opens his mouth a little in shock and says what???

Zoya: I said can I sleep here for this night..

A: (composing himself) why is there any problem with ur room do u have any problem with bed or fan or anything??? Let me know i will get it done..

Z: no actually.. since many days I was getting some very scary nightmares and when I asked the doc about it she said some ladies in pregnancy will face this problem due to the hormonal imbalance.. and since last few days I was in madrasa where I sleep along with others I was little ok.. but today all of sudden sleeping alone in the room is not just fine with me.. im scared and u know phupi is angry with me and i even cant sleep with her so I have to come here out of no choice'

A: (happy that she chose to come to him atleast when she faced troubled) its ok u can sleep no problem.. and are u sure this is all normal right no problem with ur health??

Z: no Mr. Khan.. no problem at all.. pregnant ladies will have cravings mood swings and such night mares due to hormonal imbalance and it will be more in the first trimester so there is no problem its quiet normal and perfect..

Asad feels relaxed to listen to her words and smiles which she reciprocates faintly still to show him that she did not forgive him totally.. as she was about to lay down on the left side of the bed asad went to take the pillow from the right side.. as soon as he took it zoya shouted no'he was totally confused and looked at her in a shock..

Z: what's wrong wih u Mr.Khan??? If u are gonna go out then I could have slept in my room itself what is the need to come here..

A: im not going out zoya.. I will sleep on the couch and u can sleep on the bed'

Z: but Mr.Khan its raining out and If u sleep on couch then u may catch cold so pls sleep on the bad and I don't like any one to suffer because of me..and I will keep this pillow in middle of us..(she keeps a pillow in middle) and more over i want some one by my side not far away.. the dreams are really scary (makes an innocent puppy face..)

Asad was shocked that she asked to sleep with her on bed'more than shock he was happy that he never imagined to get a chance like that in his life after she left him and s not sure whether he will get this chance ever in his life again so he just nodded..

Both of them slept side by side with a pillow in middle and it was about 11:30 by the time they slept in and zoya dozed of fastly into sleep'but asad was not able to sleep with all the shocks he got today.. zoya's entry, declaring that she is pregnant and the baby is his and today she is back in his room and is sleeping beside him..

It was about 12:30 when he got up to drink some water breaking the chain of thoughts.he saw her sleeping peacefully, she pulled the pillow in the middle to almost other side of her and it is now present almost at the corner of the bed.. he smiled at the way she was sleeping and the way she looked peaceful and the beauty of her face made him stare at her.. he was lost in thoughts admiring his beauty..

Suddenly he could see the ring on her left hand.. he was too happy that she still wore it after all the things that happened that made him feel that whatever may be the state of their relation might be at now but they always remain one and will be back together in each other lives' he then noticed the way she kept her hand on her stomach (normally we sleep keeping our hand on our stomach zoya did the same but asad felt in this way).. he had a smile on his face.. though she hated him she cares and loves his baby that was what he thought and was about to touch her stomach to feel his baby. But stopped remembering zoya might wake up and that might cause her irritated and so he doesn't want to spoil the movement and just slept beside her and started talking to her and explaining her how he felt through the whole month when she was not there with him and how difficult it was for him and how happy he is today to see her back in his life'

Zoya who actually woke up when he rose to get water was just watching his face by opening her eyes slowly and listening to him.. she was enjoying the attention she was getting and felt happy that he loved her so much.. she was upset when he withdraw his hand from touching her..

She knew that he wanted to touch her and feel her and make himself assure that she was really back to him.. even she wanted to do the same.. she wanted to touch him and stay in his arms which was the place where she feels secured.. but she cant do it'

Her stupid mind got an idea so she thought to simply follow it without any hesitation after all he is hers and his ammi has already given his copyrights to her..

Asad was just staring at her and the zoya slowly moved towards him and placed her hand on his abs as if she held a pillow or doll in deep sleep.. asad was stunned at her reaction.. and he was just lost for few minutes and actually enjoying what was happening.. he then remembered her anger and tried to remove her hand from him and so caught her hand and tried to lift it up.. as soon as he lifted her hand zoya fastly moved in her sleep and came near asad and held him more tightly and resting her head on his left arm.. she almost placed her head on his shoulder and her face was above his chest and held him tightly against his waist with one hand and other hand she left free laying it on his chest again..

He was absolutely stunned, shocked and surprised at the moment.. perhaps it was the best moment of his life.. he was totally fixed and cant move as if he moved she will wake up.. he looked at her face and could not see it properly. He just enjoyed her fragnance.. this was the way he wanted to stay with her all his life but he couldn't and today he got the chance so he was just enjoying it'

He was just looking at her and held her by her waist and slightly kissed her forehead so that she wont be disturbed and slept cuddling her..

Both of them were enjoying the way they were in but couldnot admit them or even show them.. zoya promised to her that she will always be like this with him,and in his arms till her life ends and slept peacefully..

PRECAP:

Scene 1: zoya faints and doc checks up'

Scene 2: tanveer decides to kill zoya..

guys pls do like or comment... it means alot...sorry for longer one but didnt want to break the asya scene so it was longer..

hope u love it...

loved it!! amazin pls continue

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