AsYa OS: The Last Touch

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow..awesum os..a sad one..painfil..thnks 4 pm..

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Mood ka waaise hi band bajaa hua haai aur tum mujhe aur rulane par tuli huyi ho! kyyyuuunnn??!!😭

great work though! ur awesome when it comes to describing emotions!

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Nai

@zoas91

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

salty tears rolling out!!! 😭

great update but ohh so sad this has made me! i wish it naver happens but it is going to at some point only hope is that asad wont give up and relentlessly work for it and get her back!🥱 thanks for the pm!

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Tv_wale_babu

@Tv_wale_babu

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: keshiya
Ya Allah!! My heart aches to see them in so much pain.
You've penned it to perfection. Flawless would be a perfect word.
I've never commented on your works before this but have read them all and to say I'm your biggest fan would be a gross understatement. You're better than the best writers I've come across in expressing the inner most feelings of AsYa.
This OS compelled me to express my contentment. :D
You're just way too awesome girl!!
Keep up the great work 👍🏼

I totally agree with her... but the difference is that I have commented on other of your works as well.

Now to my comments: OMG, this was frickin amazing! the scene just played through my head while reading it. SO realistic. LOVED IT!

But it was so sad 😔... I wish she would listen.

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

touchy and hear breaking...u made me cry...

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

AWWW u made me cry badly ...

bt stilll i loved it dea,,,,👏👏👏 ❤️

pleeease continueee ths ...

uv written it verryyy beautifullly ...

pleeeachh pleeeaach continue...

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: iaddiction

I totally agree with her... but the difference is that I have commented on other of your works as well.

Now to my comments: OMG, this was frickin amazing! the scene just played through my head while reading it. SO realistic. LOVED IT!

But it was so sad 😔... I wish she would listen.

Both of you are tooo sweet! Seriously smiling like an idiot right now 😃😆

@iaddiction I looove your comments and this one didn't disappoint either :)

@keshiya: you've seriously made me so happy! But aw you should comment 😛 with comments like these I'll start dedicating my posts to you 😆

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awww!! 😭

This was so touchy!! ❤️

Written very very beautifully!! 👏

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Omg! Ya Allah, why is this so painful?
Girl!!! This had me in tears, their pain was unbearable! I cannot see my babies in so much pain, I just wanna grab them and cuddle until both have relieved their pain! *sighs* I think I need a hug *sniffs*
This was too beautiful for words, i'm still in awe of your writing, you portrayed their emotions wonderfully!! I wanted to write something like this but I was crying so much that I couldn't. You've done an amazing job beautiful!!!! Are you going to continue this one? I want you to give it a happy ending! Love love love it girlll!!!! Flawlesss! <3 XOXOXOXOXO