AsYa OS: The Last Touch - Page 3

Wow..awesum os..a sad one..painfil..thnks 4 pm..

Mood ka waaise hi band bajaa hua haai aur tum mujhe aur rulane par tuli huyi ho! kyyyuuunnn??!!😭

salty tears rolling out!!! 😭

Originally posted by: keshiya

Ya Allah!! My heart aches to see them in so much pain.
You've penned it to perfection. Flawless would be a perfect word.
I've never commented on your works before this but have read them all and to say I'm your biggest fan would be a gross understatement. You're better than the best writers I've come across in expressing the inner most feelings of AsYa.
This OS compelled me to express my contentment. :D
You're just way too awesome girl!!
Keep up the great work 👍🏼

touchy and hear breaking...u made me cry...

Originally posted by: iaddiction

I totally agree with her... but the difference is that I have commented on other of your works as well.

Now to my comments: OMG, this was frickin amazing! the scene just played through my head while reading it. SO realistic. LOVED IT!

But it was so sad 😔... I wish she would listen.

Omg! Ya Allah, why is this so painful?
Girl!!! This had me in tears, their pain was unbearable! I cannot see my babies in so much pain, I just wanna grab them and cuddle until both have relieved their pain! *sighs* I think I need a hug *sniffs*
This was too beautiful for words, i'm still in awe of your writing, you portrayed their emotions wonderfully!! I wanted to write something like this but I was crying so much that I couldn't. You've done an amazing job beautiful!!!! Are you going to continue this one? I want you to give it a happy ending! Love love love it girlll!!!! Flawlesss! <3 XOXOXOXOXO

Finally some asya dose😊 beautiful wrriten 👏