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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
Omg! Ya Allah, why is this so painful?
Girl!!! This had me in tears, their pain was unbearable! I cannot see my babies in so much pain, I just wanna grab them and cuddle until both have relieved their pain! *sighs* I think I need a hug *sniffs*
This was too beautiful for words, i'm still in awe of your writing, you portrayed their emotions wonderfully!! I wanted to write something like this but I was crying so much that I couldn't. You've done an amazing job beautiful!!!! Are you going to continue this one? I want you to give it a happy ending! Love love love it girlll!!!! Flawlesss! <3 XOXOXOXOXO

Aww you should still write something! You're no less, my dear! And thaaank you!! 😳 Really glad you like it 😃 Although I'll probably get chappals for making so many people cry 😆

I don't know if I'll continue it. Hadn't planned to. But maybe if I get inspired 😳

P.S. Patiently waiting on your unres from my FF 😛

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

That was excellent. Please continue it.

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

It was very touchy, but beautifully written

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww you should still write something! You're no less, my dear! And thaaank you!!😳Really glad you like it😃Although I'll probably get chappals for making so many people cry😆

I don't know if I'll continue it. Hadn't planned to. But maybe if I get inspired😳

P.S. Patiently waiting on your unres from my FF😛

No waaayy! Yesss you did make us cry but this a beautiful piece of work and you deserve all the praise coming your way! Awww, no worries if you don't want to but do write another OS sorta continuing this but a happy onee! It's upto you, I didn't want to continue mine either, atleast you ended yours beautifully. My one was abit abrupt and i don't think anyone understood the ending! Loool!
Ahh yess don't be too happy about that one i'm so bad with comments... But i loved it to the coreee! I've unres'd though nonetheless. I've been so lazy, i've not had the chance to read it as soon as you posted.

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

good one dude...but very emotionalll

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

what was that?????

why'd you do that???

you made me cry so much😭

and you broke my heart all over again💔

you're mean😡😆

but great job

that was very emotional

thanks for the PM😊

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: amri123
what was that?????
why'd you do that???
you made me cry so much😭
and you broke my heart all over again💔
you're mean😡😆
but great job
that was very emotional
thanks for the PM😊

Aww i'm sorry it made you cry :( but glad you liked it :)

Lol i'm not mean :P am I? Haha sorry hun just really in a sorrowful mood asya wise because of all the episodes recently :(

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

No waaayy! Yesss you did make us cry but this a beautiful piece of work and you deserve all the praise coming your way! Awww, no worries if you don't want to but do write another OS sorta continuing this but a happy onee! It's upto you, I didn't want to continue mine either, atleast you ended yours beautifully. My one was abit abrupt and i don't think anyone understood the ending! Loool!
Ahh yess don't be too happy about that one i'm so bad with comments... But i loved it to the coreee! I've unres'd though nonetheless. I've been so lazy, i've not had the chance to read it as soon as you posted.

Wait, ypu already posted yours!? I wanna read it!!! :D and aww thanks hun! I might make a new OS as a continuation :) cause i'm actually really with the ending, despite the multiple tears its caused 😆 please please show me yours! I wanna read it :P

And are you kidding me? Ypur comments are one of my favourite ones! I always look forward to your gushing of my work. Makes me feel so good about it

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: mochhug

Wait, ypu already posted yours!? I wanna read it!!! :D and aww thanks hun! I might make a new OS as a continuation :) cause i'm actually really with the ending, despite the multiple tears its caused 😆 please please show me yours! I wanna read it :P

And are you kidding me? Ypur comments are one of my favourite ones! I always look forward to your gushing of my work. Makes me feel so good about it

Loool! No you've already read it, it's a OS but peeps want me to continue. I literally melted seeing everyone's comments! I have so many pending works though :( hahahhahaha! Yaaayyy, I'm glad you are because I'm dying to read it, I always look forward to your work! I know you'll do an amazing job no matter what you write, I wouldn't mind another sad one, as long as my Asya are there!
Aww seriously? OMG I'm so glad I could do that, you really should feel good about it, you should be proud of your writing skills! I will make more effort with my comments, I need a dictionary seriously because your work usually leaves me speechless! ❤️ 🤗

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

haven't you had enough of making me cry? First in the FF and now here?? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I was hoping for some positive stuff in this.. I was already dancing that AsYa already met.. Thank God for that.. 😆

this was a beautifully written OS.. the only spoken words were from Asad and I absolutely loved the dialogues especially that "Jabse tum aaiho, mein sirf aur sirf apne iss kambhakat dil ki suntha hoon" beautiful dialogue 👏

yeah then the rest of the OS was filled with heart breaking, emotional, heart rending, poignant, gloomy, depressing, miserable, distressing, demoralizing, shattering, disheartening and God knows what other words that made me cry.. but nevertheless it was a wonderful story 😃