Dark Passion T2! Note on Pg 158

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

really sorry for not commenting regularly

was really busy

why does zoya always end up in a mess

asad was right damsel in distress

first tanveer n now sonia

god save her

wonder how asad will react to this

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

hey!
The last Chap. you updated was hell boring :( Sorry but i've to say it yaar that this story is loosing its taste, this is one of my fav ff's honestly but now i dont enjoy reading it as much as i did before.
Please add some spice in this story, Specially add some super hot moments ;) i am always interested in reading them :p
Update Soon :)

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada
I had thought you have forgotten to update
It's mind blowing .

I love your narration style it's awesome p👍🏼

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: Kyara.95
hey!
The last Chap. you updated was hell boring :( Sorry but i've to say it yaar that this story is loosing its taste, this is one of my fav ff's honestly but now i dont enjoy reading it as much as i did before.
Please add some spice in this story, Specially add some super hot moments ;) i am always interested in reading them :p
Update Soon :)

I wl add 'hot moments' but it has to be according to the story. I'm not writing an erotica here.(Rt now I'm not but I add erotic if the story needs it which is 90%) I know have been very late in posting my updates so naturally you'll have a disinterest. I am really sorry for that. Oh and if you want to read erotica with super hotness there are numerous writers over here who have written exceptional work.

You can chk out the works of Fizzy's gutter posts, -Starstruck- and Sand_Princess.(There are more writers but I'm pointing out to you the ones I who I remember have written some good stuff on the topic you want.)

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

hey Kaya I read the whole story... the transformation of Asad is nice...enjoying your story...waiting for the update...

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Well is d update on its way? 😳

waiting eagerly 😃

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

wow...read all partss in 1 go...ur story is superb...

pls continue sooonnn

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Hey Please update super soon. 😃
Cant wait to see what happens when asad returns and his reaction to zoya being called someone elses girlfriend.

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#579

Update soon ⭐️

p.s hope everything is fine wid u? 😊

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#580

Hey ...

Brilliant update !!

Awww Zoya was actually missing Asad ... How sweet !! :D

Double awww Asad was also missing Zoya ... ;)

Whoops Zoya your knight in The shining armor is a possessive guy and might get really out of control when he gets to know about your lie and I could just feel that she had fallen in deep mess by actually lying about being 'the girlfriend' ...

Thanks for the pm ...

And take care :)

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