Dark Passion T2! Note on Pg 158 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Kaya13

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Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Yay yay yay finally we got an update

So the banshee is indeed tanveer...i loved how you described our beloved billo rani...i just couldn't smile laughing🤣and the best part was zoya imagining her like a cat😆

So zoya got jealous again seeing tanveer drool over asad...well accept it girl asad's closeness with somebody else makes you angry and jealous coz you are no ordinary girl and neither he is just your boss nor you just his secretary

Ohk so Miss tanveer is throwing herself on asad...i could totally imagine her doing that with that disgusting smirk on her face🤢

Wen asad said that zoya was not as good as tanveer i was like dude dis he really say that?😲but i am glad asad cleared up why he said so...

So zoya said yes for the movie and yes i remember soumya...he was zoya's first friend in the office😃So she takes out her anger by going to movies with soumya and others and that too without telling asad man he will be pissed...so is this her plan to make asad jealous😉

Oh i loved this possessive asad...the passion and authority in his voice i could totally imagine that and the best lines of the update "She is MINE"...oh i could totally imagine asad and the hint of finality,authority and anger in his voice

I loved asya convo near the pillar or shall i say seeing asad worried and confused and dumbfounded zoya...oh i loved how asad understood zoya's worry and read her mind...man i am loving this budding understanding between the two...and i loved asad's explanation for calling tanveer better...man she is psycho and m glad asad knows that...

Awww that hug was so so so cute...and the way he told her to keep on talking shows how much he loves her constant batter no matter how much he complains...

so tanveer is watching them...

can't wait for the next update...i hope this time you won't make us wait this long...

looking forward to asad's reaction wen he gets to know that zoya went to movies without informing him...

And thanku for such as amazing update..🤗

YEAAA u finally updated I loved this just as always thanx for the PM and Update soon pleaseee :D:D:D

Originally posted by: sheilasandhu

😃 YAAAY finally an update. Loved it and waiting enthusiastically for the next one. Hope it is soon enough. PM please for next update.

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

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Oh I wish it didn't end so soon. Loved it!! I'm so hooked, can't wait for the next part! Please make it longer. 😊

Originally posted by: Kaya13

aieee!!!( yup this is the sound I'm making now) I love you so much for this...I really really look forward to analysis...I grin so hugely like a Cheshire cat ( though I haven't actually seen one)...thank you thank you thank you!!!!

Aww i am glad i could make you smile...coz well i have to return the favour coz you make us smile by giving such wonderful updates and since you mentioned that you love my analysis and lamba sa comment it encourages me to write even more...i hope i did good with my analysis...and your welcome,welcome,welcome😃

I was waiting for a update. And, here you go. I have always said this is one of my favorite stories. Today when Asad agreed upon tanveer for she being more efficient then zoya I was like I wanted to kill tanveer.. But then how true.. Asad cared for zoya and he din't want her to be in any sort of trouble moreover efficiency for tanveer is different then zoya..

Nice please contniue soon 😊

Thanks! It's always a pleasure to read your work. Though short, enjoyed reading it. Eagerly waiting for your next update.