AsYa OS: One Look - Page 7

Originally posted by: astonm

You succeeded in cheering everyone up! You are an amazing writer! Love love love this! The trust Zoya had in Asad in this OS is what I actually thought would happen. Zoya knows Tanu's challenge and the moments between her and Assd all week would have led to something like this!

CONTINUE PLEASE? This is really good, I can actually fool my brain into thinking that this happened, atleast until Monday :)

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Can I have a hug? Please? *cries*

Omg this made me cry so much, the beginning I could feel their pain, his plead for her to hear him out and her in disbelief. I just wished he caught her words 'akhir ussine mujhe galat sabit kar hi liya'
I loved the way you described their emotions, although I was annoyed with him for not thinking it could be Tannu's fault, I was screaming for her to look up.
Her hesitation to look up to see what there was in his and finally seeing love and care for her BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, damn how could she even think that he loves Tanveer? Anyhoo, the hug was too adorable for words, I teared up because finally they were together, they were holding each other, she trusts him, he loves her. I'm glad she told him about Tanveer and he believed her. It's going to be hard but he trusts her, finally. Everything was perfect, this OS is too beautiful for words. I loved it, that's all i'm going to say. I love this ending, my heart is at rest finally after crying all day. Thank you so much for writing this lovely, you certainly do have your way with words and you have totally melted my heart away. Thanks for the PM and cheering us up! That is all my heart can write for now, me will come back and read again...

P.S. can i have a Tannu bashing OS? Continued from this, how her plans fail and how she should just commit suicide? How she gets bitch slapped by everyone? Please pretty please. I'll be waiting with my chocolate and tissues for the happy ending!

Much lovess xoxo

Originally posted by: goingreen

Ahhh if only this happened in the show as well!! ): Unfortunately Asad and Zoya in the show don't trust each other as much as Asad and Zoya in your story. Love how you described their emotions, I felt like I was on an emotional roller coaster along with them!! Beautiful read (:

Originally posted by: Amita111

its good but

i want zoya to throw her out of the house😊

Originally posted by: malini1996

wow

it made me show all my 32 teeths together

it made my day

love u

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Hi, Thank you so much for this one shot...it was so well written and actually helped me calm down and strengthened my belief in the fact that no matter what happens...AsYa will fight those barriers and be together. Her tears...Asad's pain...their love...it was beautifully depicted and all I can say is thank you...thank you for this.

thanks for the pm too...

lots of AsYa love...

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Oh My God.

This was SOOO beautiful that its making me mad that it didn't happen in the show! You wrote the emotions so well Mochu! 🤗 The OS was really about "one look" and OMG you described the intensity so aptly! And the hug...*faints* ..no really I LOVED IT!

Ugh now I really really cant wait for an intense AsYa hug - for such a romantic pair, they have too few dont u think? Always when her life is in danger..like that day when he saw her burn marks... okay admit it, that day, a hug was NEEDED! Okay I know Im going off topic but this OS of yours has just made me more greedy 😳

Beautiful job! 👏 It did cheer me up :)

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Thank you. SO MUCH! For this OS.

I was so bummed out by the episode, but I have to say I was loving the intenisty! And the fact that its a weekend sadened me.

But im sooo glad you wrote an OS on this! Sooo beautiful! The trust, the conffession, the hope of being together, fate still bringing them together! Lovely!

If you continue, please show Asad blasting off Tanveer. :@

Originally posted by: AdorableTrouble

Gosh re girl!

Now you've made me dream

If only yaar, if only..frankly, Asad doesn't deserve it

He has never trusted Zoya with proofs while she trusted him completely blindly!

Serves him right for not paying heed to Zoya's continuous arguments abput Tanveer's credibility!