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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Oh...They finally together... I was so waiting for a hug-that-looks-more-like-a-jump-on Mr.Khan and him to hold her tighttt...and for both of them to cry...But even A hug and I-love-you-Zoya from Mr.Khan was more then enough...cant wait for Zoyas...Up-date sooon...😊

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Omg omg omg you can't stop there! Please please please!!!! Next part pretty please!?

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

superb yr..loved it...

this time i guess asad need to do sm homework to bring zoya back..d chatterbox zoya...

pari

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Tv_wale_babu

@Tv_wale_babu

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: mochhug
Omg omg omg you can't stop there! Please please please!!!! Next part pretty please!?

I would have given an update straight away but i've been sick today😭 and i'd my bed is desperately calling me 😆... but I promise for tmr 😊

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

finally together...come on...need confession soon :)...thanks for the pm :)

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: iaddiction

I would have given an update straight away but i've been sick today😭 and i'd my bed is desperately calling me 😆... but I promise for tmr 😊

Awww ok get better soon 😛

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

oh...they're finally together...yay😃

i expected more of a show, but the hug and an i love you was nice too

i can't wait to read Zoya's part

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

i'm on edge here😆

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

awesome chapter continue soon can't wait for zoya's confession

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kundra

@kundra

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Shouldn't Asad be traumasised or something? He seems to have come out of it quick.

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Just read all the parts in a go and i love it...i just loved how you described their pain...very touching...and in the latest part i love how zoya was so nervous about meeting asad ...can't wait for the next part😊

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