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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome please continue it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon ... coz i really ned an ff like this with all the tannu evil plans working
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Posted: 12 years ago
tis is really awesome...dilshad is just awesome...finally the truth is out n zeenat also knows about it...rehaan is really superb n hw he concluded tat asad is innocent...waiting to know hw will asad n zoya react to tis...thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finalllyyy the truth is out of a best friend is crystal clear to another best friend...wat a huge difference in characters played by best friends(Tanveer and Rehaan)...curious to know more...do update soooner and thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update at last asya would be together...waiting for the update please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello! Today's ep was so sad that I didn't feel like writing anything but sad stuff. Bear with me please 😕

And before anyone says this is a short update - it's 1000 words. If you want longer updates, I won't update so frequently. Monster updates and frequency don't go hand in hand for me 😭

so decide and let me know 😊

Part 6:

Rehaan and Zeenat headed to Zoya's room just to find her asleep. It had been a long time since she'd slept like this, they couldn't have disturbed her. She was already weak and exhausted and venting out her frustrations and emotions had definitely helped her achieve this kind of sleep. Yes the news they were about to give her was positive, but then she would be anxious about reaching out to Mr. Khan, so it would be better to tell her the next morning instead.

"What should we do Aapi, shall we wake her up?"

"No Rehaan, let her be… we'll tell her tomorrow"

I heard them approaching my room, but I didn't want to talk to them anymore. Rehaan had spent the whole day with me, and I hadn't asked about him – not even once. I feel so selfish. I've spent a whole week crying, being a mess and not getting out of my bed or my pyjamas. I can't continue like this. I'm hurting the ones I love the most. I need to start afresh, but that can't be done here. I think I should leave tonight. I'll go to Ajmer and serve there, serve till I heal. Serve till I have enough strength to spread light again. The flight to Delhi is normally early morning… I will leave once they sleep. I'm sorry Jeeju, Aapi and Rehaan, I have to do this. The more I'm in front of you, the worse you'll feel. I'm sorry.

x-x-x

While Zoya was planning to escape, Asad had just woken up from his deep slumber.

Why Allah, why? Why did I wake up again? I can't take this anymore, it hurts. Opening my eyes feels like a burden. I don't deserve to live. I don't want to live without her, and I don't deserve her after what I did.

Tears rolled down his eyes even before he could open them. He wanted to drift off to sleep once again, but sleep wouldn't come to him. He sat up. The silence, the space, the emptiness, the void… they killed him, bit by bit. His emotions were flowing through his eyes. He had never been so lonely. There was no body he could talk to or share his sorrow with. Nobody cared. As he sat there looking out the window, he felt the urge to barf. He ran to the washroom. Since he hadn't eaten for the longest time, the discomfort made him vomit acidic bile.

Just then Dilshaad came to check on him. She looked around the empty room and saw the toilet door open and just then she heard a sound. She went up to the washroom to find an unconscious Asad again. She also saw his vomit. She felt horrible because somewhere deep down she should have listened to him. She was his mother, his strength, and his support – but she abandoned him at the time he needed her the most.

Lost in my own emotions while identifying with Zoya, I forgot my son. Yes I thought he's at fault, but he's still my responsibility. I have raised him, I should have known better and at least given him a chance to speak. I've wronged him. I'm sorry Asad beta. I've never made such a bad decision in my life. I've been unjust towards you. I'm sorry.

"Najma, Najma" Najma came running

"Ji Ammi" Najma was shocked at the sight that welcomed her.

"Help me get Asad to the bed" The ladies struggled but they were successful.

"Najma get the soup and a glass of water, till then I'll try and wake him"

Dilshaad sprayed some water on his face and that was enough to bring him back.

"Asad… Asad, are you ok"

"Hmm"

"Get up" she helped him sit up.

Najma walked in with a tray, Dilshaad took the bowl of soup and started feeding Asad

"I don't want it Ammi"

"Asad, don't argue beta. Have it. I have some good news for you, but first you need to eat"

Good news? Can anything be good anymore? Where there is no life – nothing is good and nothing is bad.

"Good news"

"It's about Zoya, but first you have to drink this" she saw his eyes sparkle at the name of Zoya. He obediently drank the soup.

"Tell me now, please" he begged, he just wanted to know about her.

"That night, nothing happened. Tanveer framed you because she was already pregnant with someone else's child" Najma told him.

His expressions moved from confusion, to disbelief, to anger.

WHAT? Nothing happened? I'm not at fault, I didn't break her trust? Ya Allah, thank you! I have to go get her back. Tell her the truth; tell her that I love her. Tell her that I've lived through a thousand deaths each day without her. I need to tell her to never leave me again. Will she agree? I'll do anything, ANYTHING to get her back. I can't believe Tanveer would do something like this. But are there any proofs – no that doesn't matter now, all that matters is that there is hope for Zoya to walk into my life. Ugh, why did tanveer do this – she will pay for it.

"Calm down Asad, you're not feeling well. You need to get well soon and go bring Zoya back" what Dilshaad said made sense to him. His anger cooled down and he started to get up.

"Where are you going bhaijaan?"

"To go get Zoya, I'm leaving for New York today"

"Asad, relax. I've called Zeenat to explain everything to Zoya, she's not running away. You can leave tomorrow, I just want you to eat healthily and sleep well today so that I can let you go tomorrow."

"But Ammi"

"NO! Zoya will not like to see you in this state."

x-x-x

Dear Jeeju, Aapi and Rehaan,

I'm leaving for a few days. I can't go on like this. I'm hurting you all. The more time I spend here the worse you'll feel. I'm going to start a new chapter to my life… Once I feel that I am back to being myself, I will return. Don't worry about me, I won't be the mess I've been so far – I guess life won't allow it for me. I would tell you where I'm going but I know you will come after me. Just know that I'll be safe and sound. I have a plan. And I will call you every so often. I love you lots, but there are some things that need to be taken care of.

Lots of love,

Zoya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anweshacullen

I AM GONNA KILL THAT TANVEER>>> WHO WILL AID ME OR BAIL ME OUT OF JAIL?


I'm sure most of the IF qubool hai fans will bail you or help you 😛

Originally posted by: rajnid68

friends...are precious...

but there r those who can lead us to our downfall. .
someone like rehaan is a blessing in disguise..
but issay tho bahut kam milthay hain..
loved the update...
thanks and looking forward for more



true that!

And thank you for looking forward to my updates 😊
Edited by iaddiction - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Damn! Missed it again! Lol

This indeed was sad. BUT YES ASAD KNOWS THE TRUTH!!!!!

Omg zoya so impulsive! Ugh. Well I'm hoping they meet soon :)
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no...Zoya leaves before knowing the truth...what a twist :)

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
please continue
i want asya in the nxt pt!
make it long plz!!
n do pm me!!
thanx!

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