TS: Don't Disappear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys… This is a TS based on the spoilers which is that Asad hasn't showed up for his Nikah and Zoya finds Tanveer and Asad together. Hope y'all like it.

Don't Disappear

Zoya could not believe this was happening to her. She knew that this may have not been Asad's fault completely but if he only listened to her earlier, this wouldn't have happened. Asad on the other hand didn't know what to say… how could he possibly make up to Zoya? Was there even a way? Would she in any way still consider being his? All he knew was that he would have to give his everything to make sure Zoya forgive him and he didn't care how long it'd take cuz he would give his all.

Asad: (walks towards her with tears in his eyes) Please Zoya.. I swear I had no idea this had happened. I know this isn't enough for you to forgive me but..

Zoya: (cuts through) You're right.. it isn't.. and neither do I want your explanation.

Asad: Zoya I swear… believe me please! I did not do this on purpose..

Zoya: Oh that I know… I know that its all her fault… but that doesn't mean youre innocent..

Asad: I know im not…

Zoya: good that you do… but I would like to clear myself out though… I would like you to know that this isn't why im angry with you…

Asad: I don't understand…

Zoya: Can you count the number of times ive told you about her?

Asad: (realizes the number of times she's accused Tanveer)

Zoya: And everytime I tried warning you…. Who's the one ending up with a broken heart? ME! You have insulted me every single time, gave her the priority and made me apologize to her, how do ou think that made me feel? Or would you still say that im crazy and I had some stupid motive or that I was just being a silly little girl? I have been selfless.. I have forgotten my ego and gave up my all to help you and your family just cuz I loved you and your family… and this is what I get in return… Thank you very much Mr. Khan for wasting all my emotions. (starts walking away)

Asad: (stops her by holding her wrist) I cannot say or do anything that could make up to you. You forgot to mention one more thing that I've been too much of a coward to say. To tell you that I love you and that ive never felt that way about anyone. You had to tell me first and the situation had to come to this for me to understand your value in my life. I have been a very selfish person and trusted the one who I thought was my friend since god knows when… I wont be surprised if you never forgive me cuz you have the right to do that.. but I can promise you this that my life is dedicated to you and that I will wait for me no matter what… I will wait for your forgiveness and will never have any kind of expectations from you… I always judged you harshly.. so this all serves me right.. the truth is that I am a bad person.. and have always been one..

Zoya: You saying all these doesn't change a thing Mr. Khan… it doesn't change the fact that I got humiliated in front of hundreds of people who came to wish us well on out Nikah.. It doesn't change the fact that you didn't believe me even when I told you that it was my life in danger and not hers… it doesn't change the fact that you judged me every single time in regard to her and in general as well.. and all I did was wish well for you and your family. Your are right.. nothing you do or say could possibly make up for the damage you've done..

Asad: What can I do to make it up to you?

Zoya: What makes you think that theres anything that you'd do that would fix things. Let me go Mr. Khan… you have made it pretty clear since the beginning that I was a misfit for you, then congratulations cuz you have found the perfect girl.. someone who would never love you but will use you for your money… You don't deserve me… and I definitely don't deserve a husband who basically has not for a second trusted me.

Asad: You are right… but for the time being let me make the things right which I know I can do…

That's all for now… I'll continue based on your response…. For Pms add me as a buddy… Please comment and hit the like button if you thought it was worth a read..

Cheers! 😊

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shami810 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very nice...I so wanna read it..!!!
Please continue soon...Nd pm me when you update.!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow,,,,loved Zoya's dialogues!! Good one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really good. Look forward to reading more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome..please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was really good please send me a pm when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME START CONTINUE LOVED IT DAMN RIGHT ZOYA GIVE HIM HELL THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its just so good.. Loved it. Do continue soon and pm me ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a realistic piece. Great to read.. Cont soon pls!
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Plz conti soon n do pm me.. I don know y bht i m not able to send buddy requests..

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