AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

It was really beautiful! Please update soon. 😊

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

omg..!! beautifully written...so well u have depicted asad and zoya's emotions...really amazing...truly luved it...conyinue soon

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

1st part was awesome

Quite similiar to the show though

But emotions were more clearly explained

Waiting to read the next 2 parts

Thx for the pm

Update soon

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
1st part was awesome

Quite similiar to the show though

But emotions were more clearly explained

Waiting to read the next 2 parts

Thx for the pm

Update soon

Thanks :)

Yeah i'm kinda setting the scene for my story lol :P

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hayeee! Loved it yaar! Update soon and I mean super soon.
PM me too pls?

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Laxmi

@asyarocks1999

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow... asad could see through zoya's mask unlike in the show..

IT WAS NOT HORRIBLE OK?

don't ever criticize your writing..

great update and thnx for the pm

continue soon plz plz plz

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sheet_leher

@sheet_leher

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

This is beautiful... Actually both Asad and Zoya's eyes express more than their words...you portrayed their emotions so well...just loved it.

Waiting for the next part eagerly...

PS- the title is awesome!!!!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Beautifulll very very very nice job i
loved how u described their
feelings

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

very well written! love love loved it! please do continue and thanks for the pm!

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Are you serious? You find this horrible?

O.o

This is so beautifully written, and of course executed. You changed the scene and wrote it in your way, rather flawlessly, and I could imagine it all in front of my two eyes.

Wonderful, I loved it. So soothing, and yet very expressive.

Continue Soon!