AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: irock321
Loved it!!! Amazing! Continue soon! If you do ...please PM me!! Thank youu :))) LOL but I doubt you'll continue this. But still ..one can only hope! xD

Aww haha i will :p its a three shot (possibly 4) :) and will PM for sure :)

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: friendsall
Vry nice as usual! ur writing s so soothing n next part?? today?? :)

Haha maybe :) its only evening in canada. I'll have the next one up before i sleep :)

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
BEAAAUUUTTTIIIFFFLLL ❤️

😳 😳 😳

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linta

@Linnet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Its really very nice and cute update 😛

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesum..luvd it...plz continue soon n pm mexwen y update nxt..

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

You write very well. Good job yet again. Why didn't Asad question her tears and obvious pain? How could he let that go? While it irked me to watch Zoya bear the pain in the show, I really liked how you laid out her feelings: love For Asad and family and the unwillingness to allow Tanveer disrupt yet another rasam.

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Tv_wale_babu

@Tv_wale_babu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Res

unres finally

Only if episodes could be this detailed! Every expression made so much sense while reading your ts. It was like I saw the episode happening again and yet there was a deeper connection with those expressions etc. Very well written :)

Edited by ws12 - 12 years ago

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

itz superb..
Verz nice TS. continue it soon

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Omg omg!!! When will u update dear ??
U wrote it so well.. Especially their emotions.
Asad should ask her about her years and not just let it slide..
Please continue soon.n Mujhe pm karna..
N ya please update meri jasbaat soon.
I'm still waiting