AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: astonm
You should press edit and change "horrible" to "so amazing that it will make you fangirl"!
You made the scene better by adding the cute thoughts! sho adorableee 😉
Eagerly awaiting the next part! :)

Aw thanks! 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
This was beautiful. The way you described their emotions, their pain, their happiness was just amazing. Please please update now! I can't wait. I wanna see him finding his name and his shocked yet painful face when he sees her burnt hands! Please please continue soon. This was so well-written.

Thank you! 😳 Aw I will soon promise 😃

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

uh..uh..it was awesome thanks 4 pm

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

this was beautifully done, it took me back to the episode.

I wish some of the mendhi has gotten into tanu good eye.

Looking forward to your next update.

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bindasss

@bindasss

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Omg! Omg! Omg! You haves to continue this!!! It was absolutely amazing!! Loved it! :)))

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

that was beautiful

i loved the way you described their feelings

and their conversations with their eyes

great job

and please continue soon

thanks for the PM😊

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved it!!! Amazing! Continue soon! If you do ...please PM me!! Thank youu :))) LOL but I doubt you'll continue this. But still ..one can only hope! xD