WHY US? - 1: The First Night. - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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You Are Awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unresed page 1 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...do continue n olz pm me wrn u update..wil luve 2 read it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... Pls continue soon... And I hope that he has some doubts, maybe u could write a flashback that he overheard zoya and tanveer confrontation after when zoya told him that tanu is that stone eye person. Please I want a smart Asad and want him to trap her in her own plan of drugging, pretending consummated...And i wish they show something like this and If they did, that will be an hell of a twist as no one would have expected...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its absolutely adorable!! ❤️ You write beautifully! 👏 Please continue sooon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!

This was absolutely beautiful. Loved it!

I have been wanting to read something like this! Thank you for this Soup 🤗

After that horrible article, I needed something to calm myself down 😆

Please update soonest. Can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Noddle Phhooppiiee 😳 😆 😆 🤗


Next part aaj hi please 😳 😳 😳

Asad wanted to have a Dori undoing Scene! where is S? marr gayegi woh yea padd kar 🤣

Haiiyye so RO-MAN-SICK 😳 😳 ☺️

ps. for the SS 😳







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And Thank you for crediting me well all the time when i am not even worth it 😆 .



S is right here 😆 And I love love this story. Thanks Ankie for letting me know or else I wouldn't have logged in now.
Ankie, you know my problem with dori scenes very well 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Noddle Phhooppiiee 😳 😆 😆 🤗


Next part aaj hi please 😳 😳 😳

Asad wanted to have a Dori undoing Scene! where is S? marr gayegi woh yea padd kar 🤣

Haiiyye so RO-MAN-SICK 😳 😳 ☺️

ps. for the SS 😳







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And Thank you for crediting me well all the time when i am not even worth it 😆 .





😆Wrote part of this, last week when the mehendi spoiler came out... I had abandoned it, because I thought there was no point dreaming up a nikah now. You were so adamant..plus I did not have the heart to neglect when I re read the part where Asad proposes to her...😆

Issi liye credit aapko milta hai.


Second part: Can't get past mehendi with your avi...kya dialogue tha woh...I want to hug Gul...😃

So, credit for not coming up with a second part also goes to you...(he he..only you know noodle is lazy!😉)

Uff...yeh new spoiler...Yeh Gul bhi na, peechha nahi chhodti...looks like she is going to fry AAK if the spoiler is true...it will be quite a juicy barbecued chicken then...


Fore shadowing: There was a barbecue scene..aha!🤣




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki_12

I love it! Very creative and very well written! After reading this-i have a new prediction! Maybe after the mehndi AsYa collaborate and Asad tells her how he is doubting Billi. Wow it would be a treat to watch!


Once again great job!


Thank You so much.


Hmm..in my FF.Asad suspects Tanver is upto no good- only he doesn't know exactly what she is after...

In the show, well, Gul's heroes are not well known for their IQ!😕😆
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