Asya SS Aghosh (Complete) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kukuzgeet

i am truly sorry yaar i never mean to hurt someones sentiments, i shaped the story this way becuz i have seen this happening around so much. why do we women get blamed for something that is so out of our reach.
I am ssooo sorry i truly feel guilty for making ya feel upset.
Forgive me for that.
and am glad that you are finally relieved. thanks for likin.


Hey hey... Dear..
why are you being sorry.. You never meant to upset anyone.. You just wrote something that really happens around us. .. In the most perfect manner you depicted what a women goes through during these situations.. Never did I say that you made me upset.. This story is really been close to me... 1. because of the plot , such a perfect concept to write and 2. the way you wrote it.. with full perfection... I have said it before and will say it again you are a very good writer.. And, I love reading your work.. They appear so real.. And, please don't feel guilty , by saying so you are making me feel guilty because I din't make my self clear to you.. I was just upset for such behavior portrayed by men.. never did I say wrong about this story or you made me feel guilty.. Okay... Now don't feel sorry.. I must thank you for writing such a story with such a strong plot... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
great one. Finaly realisation hit him
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was so touching!!!! yes no one knows the pain of a mother seeing her child getting hurt...and loosing them is the worst of all!!! asad's situation too at some point might be understandable just that it isnt too long to realize what err he has made!
loved the updae! plz continue soon!
thanks for the pm!! :D looking forward to the next!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written! The realization ...spectacularly written!!! Loved this chapter! Amazing job! Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey , i am just waiting for this turn of ur SS
Just Speechless, Sooo heart touching feelings, i fully lost in this update
for a moment i feel so lonely like Zoya & the next moment i feel that pain, realization, helplessness, just like asad feels after realization hits him
I like that one line so much "Our heart can never stop beating for a person once it starts doing so"
such a beautiful thought & truth of our life
hope its not too late...
looking forward for their reunion
Thank u so much for pm 😊
Love u dear <3
Edited by skavya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally he realizaed..
i didn't know you were writing this one or else i would have seen it earlier..
anyways my zoe baby suffered so much..
hope asad treats her well now or else... i ll become lady bhim
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Posted: 12 years ago
atlsrt mr khan realise his mistk...

nice part...

cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Hey , i am just waiting for this turn of ur SS

Just Speechless, Sooo heart touching feelings, i fully lost in this update
for a moment i feel so lonely like Zoya & the next moment i feel that pain, realization, helplessness, just like asad feels after realization hits him
I like that one line so much "Our heart can never stop beating for a person once it starts doing so"
such a beautiful thought & truth of our life
hope its not too late...
looking forward for their reunion
Thank u so much for pm 😊
Love u dear <3

i wanted ppl to see boths pain, but at the same time realize that it aint anyones fault... and i think i did it. thanks for liking...will most likely update tonight...IA
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Oh Thankd God...he is starting to see how much what he did hurt her...how much she needed him and he was not with her...Now I know that he will be there for her every second...God knows she needs his love to see beyond the pain...Can't wait for next chapter...Up-date soon...😊


You shouldn't be surprise...You write very well...make us feel the pain they are feeling and other then that our attechment to the story was obvious...as we are after all women...even though Not mothers...but to feel that kind of loss you just have to be human...My Mother says "No one can/should wish that kind of pain to even their greatest enemy..."

love your mothers saying but is it the pain of giving birth or the pain of losing a child? in any case both are horrible, even though i have not been through any, but being a women one can feel that it has got some terrible intensity in it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress


Hey hey... Dear..
why are you being sorry.. You never meant to upset anyone.. You just wrote something that really happens around us. .. In the most perfect manner you depicted what a women goes through during these situations.. Never did I say that you made me upset.. This story is really been close to me... 1. because of the plot , such a perfect concept to write and 2. the way you wrote it.. with full perfection... I have said it before and will say it again you are a very good writer.. And, I love reading your work.. They appear so real.. And, please don't feel guilty , by saying so you are making me feel guilty because I din't make my self clear to you.. I was just upset for such behavior portrayed by men.. never did I say wrong about this story or you made me feel guilty.. Okay... Now don't feel sorry.. I must thank you for writing such a story with such a strong plot... 😊

Thanks.
i just dont wish any girl to face these circumstances in life...
but the kind of society we live in and the kind of mentality we have one needs to do what ZOya did ...she was patient...she didnt lose hope...she seeks help from the Almighty...she prays and prostrates...and is hopeful for a better future... she didnt do anything stupid like Asad...i hope you know what i mean by stupid here...
anyways the next part will hopefully be updated tonight.

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