Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129

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Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Take asad and zoya to mangalpur they will again fall in love there

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Parneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Finally I found ur ff once again... :)

What a wonderful part... Honestly ur writing reminds me of old QH days when we use together these family moments and I loved it :) <3

I'm so happy Zoya is reconnecting with everyone bit by bit :) and wud luv to see how her and Asad gets back or get more closer now :)

Cont soon :)

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Im loving this! Update soon plZ !

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JJN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Aww so sweet. I love it that Zoya is bonding with the family and she's finally calling Dilshaad "ammi". Great update. Can't wait for the next one.

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Noe123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_
Aaawww... Thank you sooo much for the beautiful update !!

How I wish it never ended ! I got soo involved while reading the story that I didn't realise when it ended ! :D

The first part of the update was really really cute !!

You take a leap of so many days in one update that I cant stop wondering... How many have days have passed since she came from the hospital !? :|

I completely loved the update based on Dilshad and Zoya too ! Glad that she's started thinking abt Asad...:)

Does Zoya know that Asad is the one who took care of Dil and Naj after their abbu left ??

Anyways, thanks for the awesome update that was beautifully written ! Loved the last part too...where she says 'Ammi' and Zeenat stepping back !:)

Thank you. Glad that you noticed parts that I also like a lot. 😊

It has been about 1.5 months since Zoya came from hospital. Add 1 more month for their Nikaah. Each chapter lasts from a day to a week.

Zoya knows about Asad taking care of Dilshaad and Najma once he was old enough.

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Noe123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: webuser7
👏 I loved it! Great update. I was disappointed when it ended. Wanted to keep on reading! Getting greedy, you know! That only means I am hooked to your story line! Zoya has re-bonded with Najma and Dilshad! Loved how she called her Ammi and stunned everyone! Now, it's time to bond with Mr. Khan. Can we get a 6pack scene? She needs to be reminded why she gave him the nickname!! 😆

Aww..thank you 😳😊. Yes, now the focus will be on Mr.Khan. Six packs scene - I will try if it fits. No promises though.

Glad to find you here!

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Noe123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: spn2013
Ur really a gud writter.
Dilshan and other family members relation is beautifully casted.
I really like it.

Thank you. Glad that you are liking Zoya's interactions with other characters.

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Noe123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Okay i cried. Thanks for the song, that's my fav most! :') Beautiful ❤️

Sorry for making you cry. It's an amazing song, nahi! Sad that it hasn't got its due appreciation.

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Loved the update. And, Masoom is my favorite movie too.. And, this song I love it.. Really.. Their other song too .. Tujse naraj nhi zindagi.. that is also my favorite.. Some way Do naina .. suits the Khan family a lot and especially Dilshasd.. The motherly affections that she portrays.. Just perfect. Loved it genuinely...

Do continue soon!!!

Dee

Thanks!

Massoom is a movie that excelled in every aspect be it songs, acting, story. I love all the songs of this movie - RDB and Gulzaar ka combo - phir kya kehna.