Hayee, so Allah does love me! Along with your mindblowing ff, I get to read brilliant, and I mean brilliant one shots by you?! Dil kush kar diya ap ne! Lol! When I started reading it, I assumed it would be about how her hands were dark and Mr. Khan did love her and that way it would be a sweet OS. However, in te direction that you took it, you made it 1000000 times better than I could've ever imagined! Zoya's light mendhi brought upon so many insecurities that you showed two sides of Zoya absolutely beautifully. As any other girl would be, she was vulnerable in this situation and questions and Tanveer came in the middle. However, then you showed the Zoya we all know and very much love, the bold one! She had the guts to go and confront him! And then he in his room was dreaming about her. -sigh what a perfect couple man- The way he knew what she came for just by looking into her eyes magnified their love and like made me so happy I cannot explain in words! The way he consoled her, and with the simplest touch, wiped away her tears and insecurities, I was sooo proud of him! I wa afraid Zoya will have to pull it out of him but all he needed was a little push which he got through the love in her eyes! And then when she was pouting about her mendhi- so cuteee!
The ending nearly killed me. The last line. OMG. Perfection. Together, they'll fix her mendhi, their love and their future. So freaking perfect.
Beautiful, beautiful job! YOU MUST WRITE MORE <3 Or update your ff. Or both! I'm happy with either of the three :D
Parineeti
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