||Asya FF|| Bring me back to life - pt 23 -pg151!! - Page 86

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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update Farah! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Bring me back to life

pt 23:

I didn't need to ask her because before I could, she spoke up. "He found me, he is going to kill me" Why would someone want to murder her? More importantly, who would? "Shh... Nothing's going to happen. Don't worry" I wanted to ask her regarding the person but I was very well aware that it isn't the right time. "He saw me" she said holding onto me. Who is she referring to? "Forget him Zoya. Forget the past." I said stroking my hand on her hair though I didn't know who I was asking her to forget. "It's impossible to forget someone who gave you so much to remember." she broke the embrace and wiped her tears.

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"Okay, tell me what happened and who are you talking about?" he asked once I calm down. Should I tell him or not? Granted that he have been a big help but it doesn't necessarily mean I have to pour my heart out to him, or it does? "Outside... he's there! He will murder me." These words have been replaying in my mind like a mantra. I pointed towards the window while my lips were trembling with fear. He speedily paced to the window and peeked from the curtains.

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When I caught sight of him sitting and drinking tea with others, my eyes were left wide. I couldn't comprehend anything. Only then adeel's words came into my mind, "Talking of coincidence man, believe it or not but he is also in lucknow right at the moment. It's a game of fate and I'm freakingishly serious." He really is in Lucknow, how am I suppose to act? Wait, how did Zoya know him and why would her murder her? Was it really a game of fate or just a coincidence? I wanted to beat the daylights out of him but I couldn't for all I know is Zoya need me the most. I can't force her to acquaint with me the whole thing but I can at least be there for her when in need. I closed the curtain and returned to Zoya holding her hands in mine while sitting in front of her. "I don't know how do you know him or why will he murder you but I do know that I can't force you to tell me everything so I will wait until you ready to spill the beans. I just want you to know that he can't do anything and if he did, I'll hand him over to the police" I said while removing the strand of her hair behind her ear allowing me to see her properly.

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I was overwhelmed with what he is willing to do yet here I am doing nothing but hiding everything from him. He placed his hand on my neck stroking my cheek with his thumb, his sincere eyes gazing into mine. He slowly leaned in with my heart thumping faster than a drum. I closed my eyes in anticipation and felt a light brush of his lip on my forehead. It felt like electric was swimming through my body and made me realized how a little touch of his make me shiver. He then moved down towards my right cheek and brush his lips faintly against them and doing the same with my left cheek. I know where was this leading but weirdly I didn't want him to stop. I wanted to feel him; I wanted to feel his lips against mine.

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[A/N] hey guys i know it took me like a month to update this tiny bit of chapter but i stopped here because i wanted to know something. Actually this story is my only story which has exceeded chapter 20 without any romance and im finding it really boring so i wanted to add a tiny bit of romance but i asked a fellow reader of mine and she believe the it is quite early for that so i wanted to know what you guys think. My next chapter will be based on your comments.

In case any of you wanted to know then no im not planning on giving up on this story but im just busy with my school life. im already trying my best to write despite having tons of hw. Oh! by the way, i'll be starting a new thread for this story wen i update the next chapter so look forward to it.

P.S. my new readers, please add me so i can pm you :)


Edited by Endless-LOvE - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
plz update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Romance can be added anywhere anytime 😆
I don't think its early btw it has been long they felt for each-other!
Damn! They are in love from childhood how can it be early? :P
Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee updateee👏
even i think few romance scenes shld be added since they both feel for each other
for a longgg tym😳
continue soonish😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome!
If romance is neccesary in the story then you can
I just need Asya scenes even if it is not romance
And i think romance is a bit early
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Posted: 11 years ago
Btw its time to open new thread it has crossed limit of 150 ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
no i dont think its early...they feel for each other from childhood
plz update soon and open new thread

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Hey Farah. Iam so looking forward to reading more of your story. Please keep writing n please pm me whenever u update next.

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