FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2) - Page 83

Awesome chapter! Loved the jealousy argument ;)

NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why would you make them stop right then?!?!?!? couldn't najma have called hem a little later??!?! i HATE YOU!!!!! 😭

Amazing ...thnkfully thy tk a stp forward. ...

Hey sorry, could not reply on i think last five parts but was really in too much love with this FF that used to check time to time just for this one and i am loving it, so now jealousy may not be main part.. as they are open now... lets see what you give us but whatever you will write will be best...

zoya took charge

Unres-dd page 101.

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT UPDATE!

Damn Zara i loved it so much i am not even kidding! 😆

The whole dining scene was so amazing i was actually enjoying te biryani part and ofcourse the ending bit was the HOTTEST! Amazing amazing update.

I love how Zoya is taking the charge too and they both were totally lost in each other. I wonder what would've happened if Najma's hadn't interrupted. I was so enjoying reading it. 😆

I am curious to know what happens next with Asad and Zoya. Also what made Najma shout. The Rajastan thingy will be even more fun now as after all that happened they would be alone in Rajastan. 😆 Wooohoo! More hot scenes coming up i guess?

Btw you are the best! Loved it man. Also i didn't unraziad my previous comment as you'd have to find it in those pages. Next time i will try to reserve first. MWAH BABY LOVED THE UPDATE.

Hey zara
Firstly
I was a silent reader of this FF
And never commented
Which for that I AM SORRY
Anyway this us one of my favourites FF's of ASYA
Plllzzz PM me when you update as its just amazing
What an update
Ending was HOTTT
nah man this is the only FF where I hate najma for interrupting lol
Hope you update soon

hey tis is really an amazing ff...just came across it n read it all in a go...it a really brilliant piece of work...totally mind blowing...totally luv the way u potray asad n zoya in tis ff n hw they are atracted to each other...the bond tat dilshad n zoya share is really beautifull...wonder wat happen to najma...totally tis is a great ff n its one of my favourite edi...great skills or writting...luvall the asya moments n hw jealous n possesive is asad of zoya...please continue soon n do pm me ...eagerly waiting for the next part...it superb...