AsYa OS : Tired Of Being Sorry - Page 4

Originally posted by: nihamrm

That was just amazing!!
and i loved the doormat thingy! and how you showed the emotions

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox

eeekkksss i love this so much saba.. awesome awesome.. 👏. i want a confession like this...Asad pouring his heart out and Zoya giving him back in his face... finally he moved on from the woh main actually mode... kash QH me bhi aisa ho jaye...

p.s. for the first time i didnot res 🤣

totally awesum dear!!!realy enjoy reading ur writing...keep it up😊

Originally posted by: stellababes

Waah aapi!!very well written!! I so loved it!!

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

so nicely written...

atlst asad cnfs his flings...yeah da way he cnfs it...very nice...

thnx fr da pm ..

Originally posted by: Arnavdewaani

refreshing story...like that first rain, loved the "girl has brains...she's mine"

Res

Sabaaa :*
m gonna read it soon and unres it ...abi g2g 4 dinner :D
tu kaha h :/..miss u
join AAK AT na ...we can chat over there :D

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Its absolutely fantastic!!!! i really hope for that one day when Asad will apologize exactly this way to Zoya...again, wishful thinking!!! i really loved the confession part, the beginning was really awesome! thanks so much for the pm!!!

Unres
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
You know what is the best thing about this OS Saba ...
Its simplicity ...And I am glad you didn't hesitate to keep it straight and simple ... And I love that for a fact ...
The way in which you portrayed everything ...Their inner turmoil and the silence b/w them which wanted to speak millions but their ego stopped them midway
I loved how Asad ...for a change apologized without much hesitation ...and Zoya gave the most appropriate reason for her being hurt by his actions ...
Her love for him and undying faith in him that he will reciprocate some day ...It sounds so real and practical ...and I loved it
And I am Glad Asad too kept his ego aside and conveyed his feelings to her ...
An awesome piece of work Saba ...Enjoyed reading it to the fullest🤗

Originally posted by: -Khwahish-

Unres
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
You know what is the best thing about this OS Saba ...
Its simplicity ...And I am glad you didn't hesitate to keep it straight and simple ... And I love that for a fact ...
The way in which you portrayed everything ...Their inner turmoil and the silence b/w them which wanted to speak millions but their ego stopped them midway
I loved how Asad ...for a change apologized without much hesitation ...and Zoya gave the most appropriate reason for her being hurt by his actions ...
Her love for him and undying faith in him that he will reciprocate some day ...It sounds so real and practical ...and I loved it
And I am Glad Asad too kept his ego aside and conveyed his feelings to her ...
An awesome piece of work Saba ...Enjoyed reading it to the fullest🤗