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A two shot OS for you all,i can;t finish it now and this is the first time i am writing a OS on this forums..Please free to tell me what went wrong and next part will be up soon,depending on ow many people read the OS...
I haven't proof read so please excuse the mistakes..I feel like i wrote a lot of crap
~You First ~OS


Asad! What the hell are you thinking? Why are you even shouting at me, what did i do now?

It was three months after Asya's wedding, Stupid Asad still could not express his feelings, and by now Zoya understood his feelings but was frustrated. She was trying every step to make him just blurt his feelings out,but no Asad was just too crazy. This ''throwing herself on him" was getting him frustrated now. Today it had worsen,he couldn't even talk in his meeting properly. Instead of Mrs. Zaqri he said Mrs Zoya..and thats just many of the times he embarrassed himself. He came how shouting at Zoya, and though she was guilty and knew what was wrong she still played along.

Asad run his hands through his head. He just didn't know how to explain to this girl, and knowing how stupid and spoon-fed he is,he just couldn't understand that Zoya realized his feelings for him and he just couldn't understand why she was acting like a wife?A WIFE?
Asad just realised what he thought, and he scratched his eyebrows and nod his head. But if Zoya was stubborn he was Asad Ahmed Khan, he isn't going to let her win, regardless of he being the man, it is ladies first, she must express her feelings first.😆

Asad went up to Zoya,just looked at her and walked off to the bathroom. This just annoyed the hell out of Zoya.

Now Asad this is just too much, i am finish trying and moving back to my old room,plus Phuphi and Tamatar has gone off to Roquiya(Dilshad's niece) wedding and we couldn't make it because of this aqru(ego-head) Asad. I can't stand anymore with this joker. A fool for a husband.

Zoya started taking out some necessary items from the wardrobe, like undergarments and a few tops and jeans. Asad comes out of the bathroom.

Zoya where are you going?

To my room Asad, can you not see?

But this is your room Zoya!

How is this your room Asad?I am just staying her temporary, plus it doesn't make any sense living this nonsense with Phupi isn't here.

But Zoya. it doesnt make any sense!

We have to leave in two days to the wedding anyhow..
Asad forget it, seriously.

Umm ok Zoya, how about dinner tonight? At your favorite pizza place?i can see you are in a bad mood and being your husband its my responsibility to keep you happy.

Zoya face light up quickly,not by the dinner plan but by Asad calling her, her husband..She was getting there,slowly but surely!

What should I do? Take it or give him more trouble?,take it or give him more trouble? Zoya be fast!

With an opened-mouth,Zoya said Fine, Asad,what time?

At seven,right after work and please don't be late.

Asad left and Zoya smiled. She just had a weird feeling Asad would tell his feelings and if he doesn't she surely would,cause he is slower than a snail.

Zoya got ready, a simple orange and green salwar kameez but was tight fitted and you could surely see her hips and but clearly. By that time Asad came, he went for a shower and wore casuals, a well fitted light green V-Neck T-shirt and simple dark blue trousers. Zoya pretended she was still in the mirror and made Asad go outside, by then she pull the roses and threw them on the bed and place the candles ready to use.

She came outside and they left. They had a peaceful dinner, and were walking towards the car park.

Asad don't you have anything to say?I am very upset with you!
To be continued






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Wow that was really good!!! Please pm me for the next update!
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That was really good
I loved it
Awesome yaar
Do continue it :)
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very nice os...
Do continue it ...
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dats jst wndrful..plz pm me nxt tym
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haha ur OS name is nc hehe cont soon nd pm me if possible
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good...pls continue...& let c bechara asad kya krega,...good one...if possible thn do pm me too

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wow! It ws vry nyc. Cnt soon plz
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aww thank you so much everyone..just buddy me so i can pm you easily...next part..>>.im working on it

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