~AsYa- You are beautiful~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with my 3rd OS .. I am so pissed of with this forum's bashing so thought an OS will change the atmosphere ... As we all know this beautiful and emotional scene is coming up on QH sometime in next week ... Asad getting to know about Zoya's scar ... I am sure Gul ammi has some special plans for the scene and I am really looking forward to it ... But I have some of my wishes regarding the scene so thought of converting this to an OS ... I would like to dedicate my OS to Sohu because she is my KSG drooling partner ... hahahaha 🤗😆😳


~AsYa- You are beautiful~

" Excuse me " said Asad in a morose tone and left the photo shoot ... Zoya sensed his anger and went to his room ...


" What's wrong Mr.Khan ?? Why are you so upset ?? " ... " Nothing Ms. Farooqui ... I am not upset " ... " Oh please Mr.Khan don't lie ... I can sense that ... " ... " As if you care " came the instant reply from Asad ... " you think I don't care for you ?? " replied back a little hurt Zoya ... " Yes you don't ... otherwise you would have worn that dress Ms. Farooqui ... but no you always do what you want to do ... I felt guilty that I shouted on you the other day for your attire and that's why I gifted you that dress that too a sleeveless one because I wanted to tell you that you were right ... I shouldn't have judged you for that dress ... and thought you will wear that dress for the photo shoot ... " But Mr. Khan you don't know ... " interrupted Zoya ... " Please Ms. Farooqui can you just leave me alone ?? " cut her short ' " But Mr.Khan atleast listen to me once I ... " as usual Asad asked her to leave the room without even listening ...


Zoya went to her room ... teary-eyed she took the dress which Mr.Khan has gifted her in her hands ... she kept on looking at the beautiful white dress and Asad's words were going ringing in her ears ... " Why does Mr.Khan never listens to me ... he thinks I don't care for him ... I do Mr.Khan ' I do care for you ... " tears rolled down her cheeks ...

Asad was sitting in his room ... lost in his deep thoughts ... suddenly he felt Zoya was in his room ... he turned around and saw this beautiful girl in the white attire which he gave her looking ethereal ' he fell in love all the more ...


Zoya slowly came towards him ... and stood there without a word ... Asad broke their eye contact and turned around reluctantly ...


" what's the use wearing it now Ms. Farooqui ?? when you were supposed to wear it you didn't care to do so ... "


Zoya went in front of him " You want to know why I didn't wear this for the photo shoot Mr.Khan ? "


Asad without looking at Zoya said " No Ms. Farooqui I don't wa ... . " Zoya removed her dupatta from her right arm suddenly ... Asad saw her right arm was fully burnt with scars ... he didn't find words to say ...


Zoya burst out in tears " Mr. Khan I do care for you ... I really do but I didn't have the courage to wear this dress in front of everyone ... I know phoopie and Najma won't have said anything ... trust me I tried but I couldn't ... "


A pearly tear drop made it way from Asad's eye ... He felt Zoya's unbearable pain inside his own heart ... He could not think of a way to reduce the pain his love, his Zoya who was crying inconsolably ...


He went forward and touched her scar ... Zoya was going to hide it with the dupatta but he stopped her ... He caressed her scar and kissed her arm ... Zoya was overwhelmed at this gesture of Asad ...


Asad cupped Zoya's face and wiped her tears ... " You are still the most beautiful girl in the world Zoya ... You don't need to feel hesitant in front of me ... Your scar does not affect me at all ... I love your soul ... your heart ... " and wrapped her up in his warm hug ...


" Then why did u say I don't care for you ?? do u have any idea Mr.Khan how rudely you talk to me sometimes " complained Zoya in a baby voice crying ... " I am really sorry Zoya ... I was hurt and angry at that time because I thought you deliberately didn't wear that dress ... and you know right I am bad at controlling my anger ... I can never comprehend what I am saying when I am angry ... " ... " Ya right " said Zoya making face ...


" You take it out and give me the dress " Zoya was shocked and narrowed her eyes ... " Allah Miya what's wrong with you Mr.Khan ? " ... Asad understood what he had just said and felt embarrassed " No I mean you go and change and give the dress to me ... I will ask the tailor to make it full sleeves ... then you wont feel uncomfortable " ... " Ok that's great Mr.Khan " ... and Zoya gave a jump like a small girl who just got back her lost doll ...


Asad smiled at his Zoya's childishness ... he could not resist himself ... he leaned forward and sealed her lips with a kiss ...

Ok I agree I went a little over board with the scene and I know Gul ammi will never make it like this ... 😆 I can always read my own OS and get happy ... hahahahaha 😃anyway chappal, tomatoes, eggs ... billi all are welcome ... lolzzz 🤣

Love

Ridz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye tu ye bhi karti hai..
wah wah kya talented ladki hai👏
OS is awesome..keep it babes..loved it
kaash gul maata bhi ye pad ke kuchh inspiration le le
but koi nahi ab tak ye wala version zindabad😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujataraje

oye tu ye bhi karti hai..

wah wah kya talented ladki hai👏
OS is awesome..keep it babes..loved it
kaash gul maata bhi ye pad ke kuchh inspiration le le
but koi nahi ab tak ye wala version zindabad😆


lolzzz... thank you suja di...i love you BAS 🤗😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oyyye hoyyeee

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Posted: 12 years ago
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eee the armaan... shubhankar avi is sho cute ...i love you bas basanti 😆😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is lovely 😳

" You are still the most beautiful girl in the world Zoya."

How I wish we get to see this line in that scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ayye hayee!!! Kya baat hai!! I really love your rendition of this scene!! Superb OS!!!Kash aisa sachhi mein hota...especially the last line...
but that's just wishful thinking...*sigh*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: s120

This is lovely 😳


" You are still the most beautiful girl in the world Zoya."

How I wish we get to see this line in that scene


yes shreya ... i want gul ammi to read this and change her plans 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Ayye hayee!!! Kya baat hai!! I really love your rendition of this scene!! Superb OS!!!Kash aisa sachhi mein hota...especially the last line...
but that's just wishful thinking...*sigh*


sigh tere mooh me chocolates noddy ... 😳
Edited by RiDz_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it❤️ Beautiful!! This forum is a bundle of amazing writers!!

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