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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Holy crap! I was about to go to bed and saw your PM. You know I love this story! So had to read the update!

Wow! Wow! Wow! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 What a twist! Never thought that bimbo was behind it all!! Poor Malak, he is almost a victim too. I say almost, because he was involved in trying to get Zoya's codes!

Zoya is brilliant. She didn't have a phone but reached out to Asad in an ingenious manner. Thank god for Prasad, else technology un-savvy Asad wouldn't have figured it out! 😆

I pity Dev and Tej. Especially if they will hit Zoya. 😡 Asad will tear their limbs apart! Anxiously waiting for the next part!

Did I mention I love this story?!

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

great update! I swear u come up with something better with every update ahh surita! I was kinda suspicious of her when she took Zoya's phone and then I thought that all the guys were involved. yup it definitely changes what I imagine malak to be like now that he's not involved. love the story! plz continue soon!

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Unrsd pg57

p.s- I see that you had to manually handle the quotes..its such a pain but you still posted it!! Appreciate it!!

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Fantastic plot--I avoided it for so long for one because you had just begun and I am bad coz I like to finish a book in one reading! and two coz of the dark name to the story-----today by mistake I got onto the page ---glanced at good language and easy reading format so began! Brilliant -- it is going to be finished in a while so please update fast...I have enuf suspense in the serial to deal with!!

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Awesome ❤️

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Rattyswami

@Rattyswami

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

wow the Sunita twist was unexpected...gr8 story👏 now waiting to see how Jahapana 6 packs is going to save his musibat from this problem😛

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

wow...amazing update..👏

never expected that surita is behind all..😲

i always thought its malak as he asks zoya her codes

now conti ASAP

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

I'm totally in love with this story!

The twists were amazing

Zoya did a fantastic job by connecting to Asad's server

Asad will now save his lady Zoya

You are one of the best writers on this forum

I loved your previous story too

and so looking forward to the another's you had suggested

👏

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Am always avoided espionage or detective stories but how I got into this I dont know and now am hooked so please update fast---wan tto see the Asad brand of saving Zoya!