FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Thanks for the beautiful update

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Yah, you updated! And what an update!! 👏 Thanks for the PM.

This is one of my favorite FF on this forum and you are one of my favorite writers! I love mysteries/thrillers!!

OK, first lets talk Malak. Previously, I thought he was physically sick. Now, it's more apparent that he's getting beaten up. He's definitely into something fishy and has dragged Zoya into it. I hope for his own sake that Zoya does not get hurt, especially physically. Asad will rip him apart.

Asad: Why is this man so complicated? Obviously, he cares about Zoya and is very jealous of Malak. Why can't he admit his feelings? I guess that would be at the end!

Loved the following exchange:

She blows carefully on her drink to cool it. "How is he any different than the other hot-headed, bad-tempered coworker who keeps glaring at me?"

"What other coworker?" Asad demands.

She raises her eyebrows meaningfully. He has the grace to color at her gentle accusation.

"I am not your co-worker," Asad mutters.

What exactly are you, Mr. Khan? Can you define your relationship with Zoya?! 😆

Zoya is very smart. She knows something is amiss at K-7. Will Malak break her trust? Time will tell. She is snooping, so will find out soon. Loved how she "borrowed" Asad's laptop, told Asad off and pointed out that he's always finding fault with her. How long is she not going to speak to him?!

Until your next update! 👏 👏

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Akilla

@Akilla

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Ur an amazing writer. It's just so intriuging it's hard to put down...awesome update

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Malak malak malak!! Nw evn I m tired of malak like Asad :|

Get rid of him asap ;)

Your knowldge in computers is FAB !! 👍🏼

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Again an AWESOME Up-date...😳

Even though in this chapter Malak's action sometime showed that he doesn't want to hurt Zoya or he is somehow in pressure to do that (as in every chapter he had broken bones...or was hurt somehow) I STILL hate that Malak...He did trap Zoya thinking to use her...even if he was thinking that she won't get hurt, he still did what was wrong and now day by day the situation is getting worse and out of his control...the broken bones of his prove that he can't do anything now...he is also getting trap on his own trap that was made for Zoya...so even if he thought that Zoya won't get hurt...that somehow he is her friend...it doesn't justify his actions...That is why I still hate him and I am desperately waiting for the day when Asad will beat the living daylights out of that Malak...Muahah...😈 lol

Sometimes Kesavan aka the old man acts like he doesn't know and isn't involved in this all...But thats all is just an act...I feel like he is the main antagonist...after all he has Taj, the ex wrestler as a bodyguard and his right-hand man...He must be doing something wrong...🤓

And Dev...Oh hoo...now I can understand why he is there, if Zoya thinks that he doesn't even know a C of Computer...he is related to the old man...

Or he DOES not know anything or he is just appearing like that so they can trap her...I mean yes, he isn't good like Zoya is...but he must know some tricks to use Zoya's hacking codes or something like that...This is why Malak and the old man insisted to know about her hacking codes in the start...

Hmm...I can't understand what is the story behind "the Firewall" episode...I mean there is something more about this then it appears...They must be after something...maybe it was a poor and desperate attempt to have her hacking codes...?? 🤓

Suritaaa...Haha...🤣 that woman killed me when she said that "All the vegetation around here is soft and moist. I don't think they'll catch fire easily." I was so confused that should I laugh or smile at her for being thoughtful for vegetation...😆

Love that Zoya is in her Ms.Bond mood...and is trying to catch Dev red handed...But Asad won't let her even now...What to do...That name of Malak makes him snap. He loses control whenever she says Malak's name or does something for him...🤣

Oh, did I said that I really do love that Gentle, possessive and territorial man...☺️ lol

Asad's thoughts about serials made me laugh...🤣 He is so concerned about her brain and her health...and was just showing that in his own way...but as always, Zoya being Zoya can't understand that...😆

That sneaky Ms.Farooqui broke into his room again...🤪 And then his worn copy of "The Art of War" with multiple page markers just shows that he is more of a book person...I am so curious to know what he has underlined written in the notes in the margins...🤓 lol

"What am I saying? Mr. Khan is never right." Loved the ending...🤣 lol

Edited by A.Hajnal - 12 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes
Firstly..i want to share something with u...I don't know what kind of telepathy it is..but whichever day I think about "why has web of lies not been updated yet"..it gets updated...

This is the most ingenious story that I have read on this forum...if u aren't planning to...think about becoming a writer..u are very very good👏

Hhaha...It happnes to me too...I start to waiting at least 2-3 days before and then when she does...I always am somehow un-able to read it this is why I am always late... LOL

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

I think its Malak too. I think all those men in that office are fishy... I trust none!

It was a great update! 👏

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

this was just wow loved it and the details I wonder if any technical expert could write with such a flair and such fluency and I guess something big is coming zoyas way but as long as asad is there to her back up need not worry but now even malaks behaviour is confusing and devs and mr.nair also he hired zoya only for her codes its getting really interesting with every update. thanks for the pm