Parting Ways: AsYa OS - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
totally get u dear... even I really felt bad and hurt after that sorry scene.
and this is really well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah poor you! But honestly, even I felt kinda sad when Zoya had to apologize to Tanveer. And you nailed it with the dialogue that every relationship is build on trust and love. There can be plenty of love in a relationship but if there is no trust, then its basically pointless.
Jab tak Mr.Khan Zoya per trust nahin karta hai, tab tak woh aapna mohabbat ka izhaar nahin kar sakta hai...that is what I think.
Exactly like you said, how can Zoya say 'I love you' when he even can't say 'I trust you'

Btw, nice piece of writing! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Woow!:)
Just awesome OS!
Todqys epi..was really sad!:(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg thats so sad but well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You are a very good writer. It's sad, but I liked that Zoya stood up for herself.
Thanks for the PM! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you. Seriously. I was on the verge of tears when I saw that scene. I couldn't believe it. I could understand where Asad was coming from. But the fact that he still chose to believe her over Zoya in a split second and MADE HER APOLOGIZE had me fuming with anger. And Zoya.. her tears pierced my heart. THIS THIS IS exactly what he deserved in that moment. Granted he said that he agreed she might have proof, but he should've told her to find more. He should've told her that if she did he'd accept it. He should've told her that if, and only if, she didn't find any proof and she herself realized that Tanveer is innocent, only THEN should she apologize. How can he not see to this day that her actions mean no harm? That she does and believes things FOR A REASON!?

All I can say is that when Tanveer's truth is revealed, Asad will get what he deserves from her. I'm sure of it. And she won't have to do a thing but ignore him. Until he learns that all she ever wanted was for him to trust her. Just once.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome.. I felt the same way as well. Glad zoya stood up for herself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..asad ka toh aisa hi hona chahehe..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one...u've hit the nail on the head...how much ever asad claims to love zoya, if he doesn't even trust her and keeps questioning her motives, then there is really no love and no relationship...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
That was awesome! Sad but awesome!

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