SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

please update soon...yaaa
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niki_12

@niki_12

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Absolutely loved the update! Please continue soon. I am a big fan of this SS :)

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

loved the update!

the precap😲 ye ashfaq kaun hai??

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

I just started reading your is and it's amazing!! Please pm me for the next part!

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

OMG OMG OMG! *fangirling*

This-Was-So-Epic! And-There-Are-So-Many-Things-I-Want-To-Say! *fangirling some more*

Wait, I think you just overloaded my brain with Asad!

*takes a minute and forces herself to calm down*

Okay, as it is, the very concept of Asad makes me go all !

And as if that wasn't enough, you chose to write action, Ranjana?! *narrows eyes*

Holy sh*t! That was the best decision you've made so far!😳

Okay, not really. That was one of your best ideas because your writing isalways so full of brilliant ideas!

I cant even begin to explain what effect this chapter had on me when Asad went all Alpha-male on Zoya!☺️ I mean- Ohmigosh-I lost my head again! 😡

I loved- I just friggin loved the protective, possessive Asad who'd beat the sh*t out of any A-hole that messes with his Zoya!😳

But you know what I loved more?😉

"Ms. Farooqui... woh umm... dimples-wala smile!" Asad blurted out.

Aww..just Awww!😳😳😳

That was SO sweet! And the fact that it came from Asad makes it even more Aww-worthy because he always does this unknowingly and has no idea of just how cute he looks while doing so! 😳

Thank god, you didn't leave this chapter mid-scene! I would have had to hunt you down otherwise! And the teaser is urgh torturous..but I think I'll survive because a drunk Zoya will definitely make up for the wait. But don't you get any ideas! You better update this ASAP if you know whats good for you!😈(hmm, that came out more threatening than I intended it to)

P.S. you know, I was feeling kinda low since yesterday because of some things that were bothering me. But as you can see, you just shooed that bad mood away by this one chapter! Though unknowingly, but thanks man!😊

Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago

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Aaniya

@_Aaniya_

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Hey... This was superrbbb !!
You write amazingly beautiful ! And moreover the story is too good !

Loved that you stayed true to their characters...:)

Plz cont soon... Cant wait after the precap ! :D

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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Love this SS... and so excited for the next update..precap is exciting

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

its gonna be fun seeing a drunken zoya

do continue soon

waiting eaerly for the next updte

plz plz lz send me a pm

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Loved how Asad held Zoya's hand as they came face to face with Akram and how he beat the hell out of Akram after that. The last part where Asad cheers Zoya up was super sweet. Precap was too good and I can't wait for the next update !!