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I really loved it! Asad has a lot of redemption to face and if its his bro he's gonna be jelly of, I'm SO READY for it! If you have this in mind I don't mind Mona and Rabert cute and romantic scenes, as long as we get Asya pain filled but romantic ones as well! I loved the ending! Continue soon (:
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this is really good please PM me once u update :):):):):):)
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Chapter 2


Just as the rain stopped, Ayaan took the leave from the khan family. Asad had retired to his room while zoya to hers. Dilshaad has been thinking for a hile that why Zeenat had came alone and not with Anwar. Making up her mind, she left for her room.

"Zeenat?" she spoke knocking her door and turning the knob to enter inside. Zeenat greeted her with a smile and asked her to come inside. "Kya hua aapa? Aap yahan achaanak? Aapko koi help chahiye kya preparations mein?" she asked, adjusting her dupatta properly. "Arey nahi. Wo main ton bas ye puchne aayi thi ki anwar kab aayega? I mean, zoya aur asad ka nikaah hai aur wo nahi hai. Tum samjhi na?" dilshaad hesitated a bit. "Arey aapa kuch nahi, bas wo aaj unki ek important meeting thi. Wo flight mein baith chuke hain. Bas kal tak aa jaayenge" she replied with a smile. Dilshaad too greeted her with one of the smiles of her.

***

Asad paced in his room thinking "How the hell did he forgot that he had to tell zoya about his feelings". Letting out a sigh, he took his car keys and left the house. Today, he had decided that whatever the situation may be, he will tell his feelings to her by hook or by crook. Parking his car in front of the galaxy mall, he went inside to buy a gift for her.

***

As zoya entered her room, she found a box wrapped in a white gift paper with a red ribbon adoring it. She picked it up thinking who could have gifted her box. Just the moment she picked it up, she found a paper lying on the table folded neatly. Picking it up, she started to read it off.

It read…

Zoya,

I know I had been rude with you for a while and I am seriously sorry for that. Since a past few days I had wanted to tell you something important, but one or the other thing comes in between and I am not able to let it out to you. Hence I thought I should take you out and just finish it up all. Please get ready in the dress I had kept. The driver will take you to the desired place.

Asad

'Finish' the word rang in her ears as she felt the earth sliding down before her feet. "Allah miyan Mr. Khan itni choti se baat ke liye ye sab kar rahe hain? Seriously? I mean if he is so so so much wanted to call of this wedding then he could say it here also na? arhh I will never be able to understand him even a bit!" cursing him up, she open the box to find a beautiful saree with full sleeves blouse. She took a sigh of relief as it was full sleeves. She never ever in her life had wanted him to know about her scars when they both had nothing between them but pure hatred and just a little bit of understanding to be prescribed.

Changing into the saree and putting up a pair of matching earrings, she left. Luckily no one was at home as they had left for dargah to offer prayers for her and asad's happily married life. "Little did they knew, this all is fake… at-least for asad" she thought. She sat on the back seat of the car as the car zoomed off to the place where zoya was required for. To say that the colour didn't compliment her would be an utter understatement. The colour of the saree just give an extra glow to her beauty making her look even more beautiful only if that was ever possible.

The car stopped in front of a farmhouse a zoya stepped out of the car making sure not to destroy the saree. The driver instructed her to go inside while he left for the home. The scene which greeted her made her heart stop for a second. The place was beautifully decorated with flowers and almost just the same way asad and decorated the backyard for telling her how much he loves her but the great billo rani had interrupted him yet again. She walked inside feeling everything kept at her side. She caressed them wanting the time to just stop at that second.

"Ye Mr. Khan kahan rehgaye? Mereko toh bula liya lekin khud kahan hai ye ab?" she spoke to herself. Soon she found a hand on her waist as she jumped back out of fear even after knowing it was of asad. She let out a sigh as she saw him who was smirking down at her. "So I guess I am forgiven?" asked asad. "Alright! But for the last time haan?" she said pointing a finger up at her and making a cute face. "Last time" asad smiled at her genuinely. "So aapne mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya?" she asked him as he guided her towards the table prepared for the two. "Bas aise hi" he replied mischievously. "Bataaqye na mr. khan!" she whined like a child. "Bata dunga. Why are you waiting for it so much haan?" "Aise hi" she mumbled and preferred to stay quiet. Soon the lights went dim and when they came bac k, she could not see asad sitting in-front of her. She wondered where had he left when she heard a voice

"Maine socha tha ek ladki aayegi meri life mein or actually aa chuki thi, jo ekdum mere khayaalat ki hogi, jisme tehzeeb aur tameez hogi jo meri family ko khush rakh paayegi. Socha tha ek hawa ke jhoke jaise aayegi wo. But phir aap aayi, tufaan ki tarah" zoya frowned listening to it while he continued, "meri zindagi mein sab kuch badal diya aapne. Mere ghar ka mauhaul, aur sab kuch jis par mera bas tha… mere emotions ko bhi. Jab aapko pehli baar maine dargah mein dekha tha, I thougt you would be a straight simple and sweet girl but nahi, jab aap mere ghar pe rehne ke liye aayi, mere khayaat aapko lekar badal gaye. At that time, for me you were the mort irresponsible, tameezless and tehzeebless girl I have ever met." He frowns deepened. "I agree we started on a wrong note but as the time flew away, we had somehow created a sense of understanding between us. And since the day our nikaah is announced, you had made a special place in my heart zoya. All I had always wanted to tell you was, is and would always like to is that I love you. love you from the bottom of my heart, with whatever I had. Will you marry me?" this made zoya gasp as all she had thought was a break up coming her way. She turned back to see his mr. akdu ahmed khan on one knee and asking for her hand. He repeated "Will you marry you jahanpanah?" while she gladly placed her hand in his nodding her head to say yes as the words failed to leave her mouth. Tears brimmed her eyes as he pulled her into his soft embrace and kissed the tears away.

That was just the start of their love story. A lot is still to happen in their life.


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Reviews please :)

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A preview of next update :

"Zoya ye..." asad asked as his eyes went wide and tears brimmed is eyes. The scene infront of him was the least he could have ever imagined!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow what and update... aaa so sweet proposal
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope something good to happen

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awesome continue soon and plz add me to your pm list
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Heyii guys! back with another quick update!
Hope you like it!

Chapter 3

"Kya hua Ayaan… aap aaj bahut khush lag rahe hain. Kya baat hai?" asked humeira sitting next to him. "Main kya bataaun humeira begum. Aaj main bahut bahut khush hun. Bhaijaan ko maine bahut time baad khush dekha hai. Maybe the last time was before abbu took me away" he started off with a happy tone but ended it on a sad one. Humeira sensed the sadness in his tone and tried to cheer him up. "Arey wok hush kyun nahi honge? Aakhir unka nikaah ho raha hai Zoya ke saath." She spoke remembering once listened that asad ahmed khan is getting married to zoya faarukhi. "Jaanta hun. But unhone ab tak mona ko unki dil ki baat nahi boli. Matlab ab toh had hi ho gayi!" said Ayaan furrowing his eyebrows. "Keh denge" smiled humeira. She was way too happy today. After what seems like eternity she is talking to him properly and he is somewhat opening up to her which he had stopped ever since he had told he wants to get married to her.

***

"Asad?" zoya spoke looking up to him wanting to tell him something. "Haan zoya?" he smiled up at her; his dimpled smile. "Wo mujhe aapko kuch bataana hai" she spoke not meeting his eyes. She deliberately wanted to tell him about her scars and ask whether he would accept her with them or not. "Zoya… is something wrong?" he spoke in a soft tone. "Allah miyan what have you done with my mr. khan haan?" she looked up at him shocked and suspiciously. "Huh?" he was surely very confused. "Mere mr. khan kahan hain. And who the hell are you?" she gave him a stink eye. "Zoya what are you saying?" he asked totally confused. "Mere Mr. Akdu Ahmed Kham kahan hain? And who are you haan?" she asked mischievously. "Oh, so you want me to scold you eh?" he asked with a smirk. "Huh? Maine aise kab kaha?" she avoided meeting his eyes. "Chodiye. Let us go back now." She smiled up at him and they both left for the khan mansion.

***

When they both reached home, no one has still come back. They all were now meeting people and distributing the wedding cards. Asad retired to his room and decided to change into a kurta and a pair of jeans while when zoya entered her room, she again found a box. She like a baby ran towards it and opened it up with excitement written all over face. Again a note was there inside the box. She started to read it up.

Zoya,

Ye humaare pyaar ki ek nishaani meri taraf se aapke liye. I hope you will like it.

Asad

Zoya smiled and took the artistic piece out. It was a perfect thing she would have ever wanted. There like in a crystal ball was a couple rotating to the music when pressed start. It was flat from downside and attached to a flat surface for it to stand. Inside the ball was a scene of winter. It was just perfect. She kissed it and held it close to her as tears welled up in her eyes.

She heard the main door making a sound and she knew everyone was back. Keeping it back where it belongs, she left to change into her usual clothes. The house greeted nazma, dilshaad and zeenat with a strange silence. Furrowing her eyebrows dilshaad looked around to at-least find someone. It was truly strange. Asad and zoya were at home, all alone and still there is no sound around in the house. "Ya allah ye dono kahin phir se ladke na baith gaye hon!" thought dilshaad. The three ladies left for their respective room. When zeenat entered zoya's room, she saw her looking at an artistic piece (the one gifted by asad) dreamily. "Ahem" she coughed fakely to bring zoya out of her trance but she seemed adamant to do that either. "Hello?" she waved her hands in-front of zoya's face which broke her trance and she came out of her asadland. "Hmm so madam ji is way too busy for me huh?" zeenat smirked at her. "Aisa kuch nahi hai aapi." said zoya hiding her blush. "Accha ji. Aache waise ye toh bahut hi khubsurat hai. Asad ne diya?" zoya felt her cheeks burning and a red shade spread over her cheeks. "Oh hoo… mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki mera baby Sharma bhi sakta hai!" and her blush just deepened. "Aapi please na." pleaded zoya. "Accha accha theek hai. Main chalti hun. Waise aap aayengi ya nahin? Anwar aa rahe hain!" zoya jumped out of the bed keeping the gift aside and sscreaming "Wait for me!" zeenat chuckled at her and left for downstairs.

"Arey zeenat aap kahin jaa rahi hain kya?" asked dilshaad. "Haan aapa, wo anwar ko airport se pick karne ke liye main aur zoya nikal hi rahe the bas." Zeenat smiled up at her. "Arey toh ek minute rukiye. Asad bhi chalta hai aapke saath. Is time aap kahan auto dhudengi." Dilshaad told him and called asad. "Ji ammi?" asked asad as he came down from his room. "Asad tiyaar ho jaao beta. Wo anwar aa rahe hain aaj toh unhe pick karne ke liye chale jaao zeenat aur zoya ke saath." Asad smiled, "Ji ammi." And with that he left for changing.

***

"Jeeeju!!!!" squealed zoya as she took him in a tight hug. "Arey arey araam se!" he said as he kept his hands on her waist and hugged her cute little baby tightly. "Kaisi hai meri princess?" he asked kissing her forehead. "Bahut bahut khush!!!" she replied showing him one of her dimpled smile. "Haan haan khush kyun nahi hogi. Aakhir nikaah jo ho raha hai meri princess ka" he smiled up at her as she blushed. Anwar smiled and greeted asad with a hug and they left for the khan mansion.

***

Zoya entered asad's room with his coffee. He took it and asked her to sit beside him. She sat gladly. "Zoya, you wanted to tell me something." He looked up at her face as she went tensed. "It's okay if you are still not comfortable in telling it to me." Asad said but she gave him an instant answer. "No, no asad. I want to tell you. Wait!" she went and locked the door and again came back to him and sat where she was already seated. She started to pull up her sleeve of the arm which had the burnt mark. "Zoya, what are you doing?" he questioned as he saw her pulling the sleeve up while zoya asked him to be quiet. She pulled her sleeve up till her elbow as it was not going up more. "Zoya ye..." asad asked as his eyes went wide and tears brimmed is eyes. The scene infront of him was the least he could have ever imagined! He had been told that she had experienced the al-most death incident when she lost her ammi. Zoya look up at him who had tears in his eyes. She wanted to tell him at the farmhouse only but she knew the sleeve of the blouse wont come up that easily and would hurt the wounds for sure. Asad brought his hands front and caressed the burnt mark. He bent forward and kissed the burnt mark as zoya hugged him tight and he responded with the equal passion. He wiped away her tears and kissed on his forehead. That moment, zoya knew he was all hers and would love her with whatever he had. "Asad ye aur bhi hai." She said not making a contact with his eyes. Putting his index finger below her chin, he made her look up at her face and replied "I don't care zoya. They are a part of your body. And I love each and every thing of yours. Be it any part of your body or your heart. So don't ever think that these scars will make me hate you or make my love any less than it presently is. My love for you will always increase. It will never decrease." He smiled at her while they engulfed each other in an embrace yet again.


Edited by -ChocoPie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is such a lovely update... 👍🏼

part 2 was very nice too...

continue soon and other FF too..

Sorry for late comment for part2...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

this is such a lovely update... 👍🏼

part 2 was very nice too...

continue soon and other FF too..

Sorry for late comment for part2...


thanku 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤗
i got addicted to reading fan fiction on asya 😳

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