AsYa SS : Dance Pe Chance(discontinued note - pg18)

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
I'm here!!!!

Nice concept Dee! :)

Ab continue soon!

Thanks di😃😳

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

i am looking forward to it deeps 👏

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Different conceptLooking forward to reading more

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thanks :) Will update soon 😊

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Prologue

'One, Two, Three, start..'

The music player was switched on. The music started & so the dance.

Left leg aage aage, right leg peeche peeche
Aaja yaar lets start ve
Sar ko ghuma le round, pair zara up down
Itni se yeh bath ve
Woh banda ki kya hai, jo naache na gaaye
Aa hathon mein tu haath tham le
Ooye dance pe chance mar le
Oh soniya dance pe chance mar le
Oh baliye dance pe chance mar le
Oh soniya dance pe chance mar le.. heyyy..

The music came to a halt as someone switched off the music player.

'Najma!! Uff, Allah miya, what's wrong with you? Can't you see I was practicing? Only a week is left for the auditions & I still haven't practiced the steps.'

'Zoya will you listen to me? Ammi sent me here to call you for dinner. Have it then you can practise'

'Okay' Zoya said defeated while najma did a little jig in her mind as she knew her ammi was the only one whom Zoya can never deny.

'Ammi, I told you na let me practice. See now after dinner, I won't be able to do even one step' Zoya complained while finishing her dinner.

'Zoya, beta you can practise tomorrow. And I know only 1 week is left but I also know that my daughter is the best. I know you will crack it' Dilshad said patting her lovingly to which zoya smiled. She got up from her chair & hugged dilshad.

'You know you are the best person I have ever met' zoya said as dilshad hugged her back.

'And you are the best daughter ever' Dilshad replied to which zoya smiled.

They chatted for a while & then retired to their rooms. Zoya stood in front of window of her room, watching the stars.

'I wish you were here, You have been proud today' .

A lone tear drop fell from her eyes as she spoke those words. It was a painful memory but could she reverse it? No. She let her tears fall as she knew holding them back would cause her more pain

*****

A man was practicing for hours in his room, letting out his vent up frustration through dance. His passion!

A knock on his door disturbed his thoughts.

'What happened ayan?'

'Bhai jaan, take some rest now. Please? You have been tiring yourself since few hours. Let's have our dinner & then you take rest'

'But ayan...'

'Asad' came voice of a man to which asad stopped protesting & followed them silently.

After the dinner was over, Asad stood in the backyard watching the stars.

'They say if you wish something from all your heart, then the whole universe helps you to get it. Then where are you?' He pleaded in a broken voice.

Ayan stood in a corner watching his bhaijan. How much pain he was going through! He so hated that person. But yet can't. He shook his head & went inside letting his bhai jaan alone in peace, just as he liked!

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Please read the note below!

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Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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Dee.PMs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Heyllo readers!

As I said I won't be updating this soon, so there will be prologue today! I am not providing any character sketch! They all will be introduced in the story. I know after reading the prologue, you all would be confused, but I will reveal everything slowly! Till then, keep guessing😉

I will be updating next week, pakka!!!

This is my PM account. I will start sending PMs from thsi after 10th june. So BUDDY THIS ID FOR PMs and not my personal id i.e., dj_arshifan. That id is only for my friends & writers!

I won't accepting request from silent readers.

BUDDY ME YOURSELVES!

Hope you will like it!

Thanks,

Deepa :)

Edited by Dee.PMs - 12 years ago

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Gunjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Finally res i was waiting to res from last night 😆 ----------------------

what is this !! u were right I am confused as to whome they referred while they looked up at sky and talked ...I feel asad was referring to zoya and zoya to asad but how is that possible ...were they talking to their ex-love or parents ? mysterious...u better tell that soon

awesome prologue waiting for the update

update soon

btw can my photo monkey click photos of their dances 🤣 🤣

Edited by ..Gunjan.. - 12 years ago

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

please continue and do pm me

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Dee.PMs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..
Finally res i was waiting to res from last night 😆 ----------------------
what is this !! u were right I am confused as to whome they referred while they looked up at sky and talked ...I feel asad was referring to zoya and zoya to asad but how is that possible ...were they talking to their ex-love or parents ? mysterious...u better tell that soon

awesome prologue waiting for the update

update soon

btw can my photo monkey click photos of their dances 🤣 🤣