Asad Zoya SS:I will always love you - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its wonderful dear👏 but its a chotu update😭 you being a wonderful writer is supposed to give us looonnng updates😃 pleashhh... pleashhh...

I hate that Tanveer😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh how mean please update soon I am waiting in anticipation at the next part this Id amazing please please continue soon please update jaldi Karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m in luv with your amazing story...plz continue soon with a longer update...kudos to u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tis is really awesome...
tis is just brilliant...
please continue soon n waiting to knw hw will asad n zoya come face to face n react...
eagerly waiting fr the next update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Hey everyone thank you so much for your comments and keep commenting cos I love to know what you guys think and and your comments keep me going! This is one is a slightly longer update but not long enough due to time constraints😭 though I promise to give even longer ones later,happy reading! 😃 😊 😊

PART 3:

Bhopal city,some time later(Khan Residence)

"Mr Khan aapke dil mein seena nahi pathar hai"

"Miss Faarooqui,seene mein dil hota hai dil mein seena nahi"

Asad woke up as usual dreaming of Zoya.He wondered everyday,where she was and what she was doing and eating and saying and who she was with. Zoya,the only woman he would and could ever love. Something he had learnt in the past five years. Two truths that ruled his life constantly,one that there could be no other woman for him but her and two that he was absolutely certain he was the worst man for her.Najma knocked on his door and called out "Bhaijaan breakfast is ready and Ammi is out,come out soon,Im eating and rushing to work. Meals were the hardest'even though it had been 5 years he still couldn't get used to the silence that had fallen over there meals in her absence.Now there was no one to fill the silence,no one to burst into giggles or chatter or even randomly come up with the most bizarre poetry.And it still hurt,in all these years it still hurt. The worst part was'he had brought it on himself.In all these years he was still the same but Najma had bloomed over the years into someone he was even prouder of than before.In these five years she had set up her own business in wedding planning and it had a bevy of booming profits and happy couples to its name. "Asad,tum kya soch rahe ho,khana thanda ho raha hai tumhara." "Ammi aap aa gayi?Did you get all that you needed from the supermarket?" "Yes." Dilshad lowered her eyes and said casually,tumhe pata hai aaj mein kisse mili?" "Kisse?" "Zoya se." Asad felt his heart stop for a second as he wondered whether he had heard right. Zoya was in Bhopal? With her' husband? "Accha?" he said trying to sound casual, "woh akeli thi?" Dilshad smiled as she said, "haan akeli thi aur akeli hai.Uski shaadi nahi hui hai" "Mera who matlab nahi tha ammi",he said as relief flooded his entire being "Haan haan main jaanti hoon tumhara kya matlab tha ab khana khalon. Usse yaha uski company ne bheja hai 6 maheeno ke liye.Woh New york mein waha ki ek company ki IT department ko head karti hai. "Acha." So she had fulfilled her dreams after all. He would stay away from her,5 years ago after all that had happened and all that he had done he had made a decision,a decision to spare her pain because she was everything to him and he was going to stick to that decision even if it killed him. The fact that she had achieved so much in the time that she had been away from him made him even more sure that this was the right thing to do for her.

(Zoyas house,Faarooqui residence)

"Brrr,Brrr" Zoya woke up as her phone vibrated furiously and relentlessly. "Hello Mona darling kya haal hai,aapka Bhopal aakar?How was your first day?" "Raabert",she said sleepily,tum bhi na,hamesha galat waqt par phone karte ho." She remembered how much Ayaan had tried to defend her to Asad,he had tried everything to make him understand that Zoya was not wrong but to no avail.She had left finally unable to bear it any longer.Ayaan had been a true friend to her over these years,keeping her updated about Phoophi and Najma and even Asad because she had found that no matter how hard she tried to hate him,no matter how hard she tried not to care'she just couldn't stop herself from wanting to know if he was okay and about all that was going on in his life.The Feminist in her hated this part of herself but there was nothing she could do.Inspite of everything,she still loved Asad and she feared that she always would. "Woh sab chodo Mona,tum humein kab mil rahi ho, ek khush khabri deni hai." "Theek hai Ayaan,kaha milna hai?" She put down the phone and began to get ready,she had quite a lot to tell him too.

Edited by Ronz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Loved it.😊 Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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asad is missing zoya so much😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing
I just love how u try to reveal the story step by step , Thats make ur ss more and more interessing
Ur writing is unique really
Well i am waiting eagerly for the next part
For me its amazing, u know the pain of separation the strong bond of love between them
Those 5years of sadness
Zoya try to move on but still she coudnt
Najma moved in her way and everyone does but still asad in his place ,his Life now is Like before zoya entry but now even more sadness in his life
All those track make ur ss unique , there is something special in it, its pain in separation
Well done
Edited by Ilhamez - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@IIhamez :Thank you so much,I really appreciate that you gave me so much feedback and took time out to write such a detailed comment. Means alot! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...i really like it..pls continue & pm me too...

pari

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