Asad- A Soul, Tormented: completed - pg11.

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chicksoup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

So you are telling me you wont \write?

OMG! Aapke blackmailing tactics!😆

Went straight to the heart!😆

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veenisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

this is awesome
do continue soon 😛

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..Breeze..

@..Breeze..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Its such a good one!! Loved it❤️

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

ADORABLE! ❤️

Beautiful Story!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Hope something similiar happens in the serial too

Though i would want Rashid to play the role of Ayaan cause he is the one who knows

Gr8 ss

Really enjoyed reading it

It was heart touching

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

very nice...give some ideas to gul also

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

amazing dear..

dis z jst amazing...

u md ur best effort fr asad zoe n ayaan emotions...simply da best...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

this was absolutely beautiful, a delight to read. i'm thankful u didn't ens it on a sad note, we can't kick u out but for sure wud hav cried buckets and been heart broken.

i just came across dis story after Ankie sent the link. thank u Ankie. plz will u add me to ur pm list for any further work on AsYa. would love to read it.

Love,

Nimra.

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

firstly thnks 4 d pm dear..

now..ur ss is amzing i jst read it one go...superb..best part is u kept asad ,zoya character acc to show.😊.no change...good one...secondly...no zoyaan track..thnk u.😛.wanna c this in d show too...pls asya ki shaadi krado..warna hum sab quboolian pka pagal ho jayenge...

😊

pari